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    FEB FF CHALLENGE: Lost and at Fault {Four}

    Previously…

     

     

     

    “You’re leaving?” I asked her.

    “I think it might be best if I stayed with Alice for a few days; I think we need a little time apart.” She said as she walked past me and into our bedroom. I followed her.

     

    “Great! That’s just fucking great! I’m so glad that you can talk to Alice but not me!”

    “Bette I try to okay!”

    “So do I; like tonight; but you acted as if I wasn’t even here!”

    “I was just surprised you were here!”

    “Tina just stop it! How many times to I have to say it? I AM SORRY!”

    She didn’t say anything; she went into the closet; and threw a suite case on the bed.

    “So you’re really going?”

    “Yes.”

    “You know what don’t bother; I’ll leave.”

     

    I put on my shoes and grabbed my car keys; I thought back to the letter Marina left me at the CAC; it was a little before closing time at the planet.

     

    I drove to her apartment. The key was under the mat just like she said it would be; I went up to the rooftop and waited.

     

     

     

     

    Lost and at Fault

    {Part Four}

     

     

    ~~~~~

     

     

    The Rooftop

     

    “I didn’t think you were coming.” She said.

    “Neither did I” I said back.

     

    She started walking towards me; her body gracefully swaying from side to side. I had always thought of her as beautiful, but lately her beauty was hard to resist. I stayed still as she approached me. Her body was only inches from mine; I could feel her warm breathe against my skin. My heart started pounding faster the closer she was to me.

    “This isn’t right…” I whispered into her ear.

    Her face was pressed against mine; the softness of her skin against mine; she whispered back, “What isn’t right?”

     

    Her voice was deep and exotic. How could anyone not love her accent? Without realizing it; I let my hands roam her back; my finger slowly ran down her arms until she laced her fingers with mine.

     

    “I should go…” I tired to pull away bust she gently pulled me back. Her dark eyes, those beautiful eyes; they looked right into mine. It was as if she could see right through me.

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    Comments

    1. Coffee, That was touching and tender. Yes, there is a great attraction between Bette and Marina but it is one based on lust and not love. Bette truly loves Tina completely but the day to day reality of a relationship is tough. It isn’t like the first blossoms; full of vitality and expectation. It is about the careful pruning and thorough nurturing; the hard work. Good to see that Bette could keep it in her pants and now has returned home to work things through. Can’t wait to read how that goes. Thank you for returing to this awesome story, Your Loyal Fan.

    2. Coffeex very good ending i like it so much, because it’s real, It won’t be easy for Bette but they love each other so much the way you ended it, let some space for a sequel don’t you think? i hope you feel better soon

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