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    The Real Deal Ch 8

    Story written on February 21, 2007 by catseye.
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    Three years later. Sharmen’s story. Shane said to Carmen: “When I am around you, my heart beats faster, my palm sweats, all I can think about is you.”

    Previously

     

    “I don’t want to be hurt again by YOU, Shane.  It’s hard enough to get over you the first time.  Don’t start anything that you cannot finish.  My heart will not be able to take it again. I am not that strong.” 

     

    Fuck! I close my eyes as the motorcycle is closing in.  Bang!

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    Ch 8

    The motorcycle emergency braked to a haul. He comes over to check if Carmen is hurt and starts swearing at us when he saw that she is in my arms without a scratch.

     

    “Look before you cross next time!  You nearly got me killed. Bitch!” he shouts angrily then walks back to his motorcycle and drives away.

     

    “Are you injured?”  I asked her.

     

    “What the hell happened? I thought I was going to die.”  Carmen is in shock. 

     

    “So did I! If I did not have a fast reaction to pull you in, you probably would have.” My right hand was grabbing her right wrist like my life is depending on it and my left hand is wrapping around her waist protectively. I am strangely enjoying this moment, despite the circumstances.

     

    “the bang was…?”

     

    “That was my shoulder hitting the side of the truck when pulling you back.”

     

    “Are you ok?”  She looks at me with concern.

     

    “I’m fine. Think my shoulder may be bruised, nothing serious.”  I lied. It is hurting like hell.  This is the cost that I am willing to pay for holding her in my arms a little longer.

     

    “You saved my life.”  She was looking into my eyes. I am lost in those brown watery eyes… I hold her even tighter… I can smell her perfume, her hair, her breath… I am so close to tasting her lips, feeling her mouth against mine again.

     

    “I can’t.” She pushes me away and run across the road without looking back.

     

    Fuck, I watched her disappear and once again I am burning inside for her.  I need a cold shower now.

     

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    Later in Carmen’s hotel room

     

    “Hello Cat.  What are you doing?… What? You are going with Marco and his crew tonight?”… You know I don’t like them.  …. It’s too dangerous.  I know you like your adrenaline rush, but this is way too dangerous, not to mention illegal!… hello?… hello?”  Good, she cut me off.  

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    2. I like that Carmen is making Shane work for her trust again. I liked the flashback, cause at firt I thought they had slept together and I was a bit dissapointed in Carmen. You did a great job. I’m liking your story more and more with every chapter! PPS!

    3. I hard to prove to someone that you love them. You can try to prove to them but first to your self. Is this the one that you want to spend the rest of your life with. To see their feet under your table every day for ever. Shane has a big lod on her shoulder. thanks

    5. Hi, first of all i have to say your style of writing is just awesome. You keep the characters very authentic, so we can say that your story is a good alternative storyline to TLW. I don’t like Paige either, but i felt sorry for her, whereas I am not sorry for Cat at all =p Although I believe that Shane and Carmen are meant to be together,I’m glad that you don’t let them get together too soon.I have to admit that I didn’t read all your stories because it was hard to imagine Carmen with someone else, but now I am really enjoying every post and I’m looking forward to it every day, so please keep posting =p

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