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You (Part the Twenty-Eighth)
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Dana came back to consciousness slowly, vaguely recognizing the feel of Alice’s lips pressing against her back, and hands lightly caressing her sides. She smiled into the pillows surrounding her head as Alice continued, letting her hands and mouth wander down Dana’s back, not seeming to care in the slightest that she wasn’t getting a response. Dana was able to keep faking sleep until she felt Alice’s breathing get a little ragged and her hands a little more aggressive. As much as she tried to stop herself, she couldn’t help but release a soft sigh as Alice moved back up, kissing her shoulder blades before gently sucking at her neck. Dana found herself being grateful that they usually slept naked.
She shifted slightly so she could bring her right hand back to find Alice’s and threaded their fingers together, rolling them so Alice’s body was covering her own, pressing into her back while her left hand made its way between Dana and the bed and began to caress an ever-hardening nipple. Alice kept sucking her neck, biting down every now and then as her right hand tightened its grip on Dana’s. After a few minutes, when Dana had become more than fully awake, Alice moved up and took an earlobe into her mouth, pulling it lightly with her teeth. "Oh, Al," Dana moaned, lost in sensation.
"You feel so good, baby," Alice said roughly, her voice trembling with desire. Dana shifted so she could bring Alice’s hand down, gasping as talented fingers explored her wetness slowly, taking their time to savor what they had helped to create. Dana moaned again when Alice brushed her fingertips lightly over her aroused clit, teasing her by avoiding direct contact. Dana let this continue for a minute or so before it got to be too much for her. With a shaky sigh she drew Alice’s hand away from her body and managed to move enough for them to face each other. Alice’s arms went around her immediately, tracing patterns on her back as they kissed. "I want you so much," Alice moaned, proving her point by grinding into her girlfriend as she lowered her head to suck on Dana’s pulse point.
Dana took the hand that Alice was currently running up her leg and brought it back to her aching center. "Do you feel how much I want you?" she asked, getting a wordless moan in response before Alice crashed her lips on Dana’s. The kiss was hungry, long and frantic, and Dana pulled away from it gasping for air. "God, sweetie, I need you inside me," she managed to say, placing her hand over Alice’s and guiding it, moving her mouth back to the kiss. Alice rolled onto her back, pulling Dana on top of her and sliding three fingers into her. She swallowed Dana’s moans as she began a slow rhythm which didn’t even come close to matching Dana’s need. Dana was having none of it and tore herself away from Alice’s mouth to gasp, "Faster, baby. Harder."
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And the ‘Pervy Award’ goes to…:) That was deliciously volcanic – how is one supposed to focus after reading such hotness?
F’in hot, you write danish so well, keep up the great work!!!
Ahem, nice job there ya perv!!! And yes I know which part came to life from one of our conversations. Hot, Hot, Hot! I think I burned my cornea’s reading this chapter, lmao!
This was more than just a ‘smutty’ update. Ok, there was a lot of smut in this chapter (but I didn’t hear anyone complain, did you? ;)). I agree with ACH21. There was more to it. It was all about the reinforcement of their love for each other. Danish is getting back to their old selves. I wonder what you are going to do with the next chapter. You’re at episode 12 right? Will the Shane and Carmen wedding take place? And will my ‘riddle’ be solved anytime soon (who’s going to pop THE question)? :D Anyways, go to have you on the ‘Danish team’. Keep it up!
Aww man I fucking love this, great story to come back and read after a crazy weekend, I’ll tell you about it later ;) Anyway, I’m so happy you got this posted and I’d be more than glad to help you out again although I really don’t think you need my input since you did such an amazing job. It was way more than sex, Alice and Dana are re-connecting and voicing their opinions which is great to read. PPS :)
you’re so sweet – I knew there was another reason I was obsessed with your story lol
From one of your biggest perv groupies, completely and utterly HOT update. I just love the way your imagination works. Ok now back to my dull boring life. PPS.
That was awesome, I love that danish smut enough to not care if there was any plot advancement involved! Dude, I am such not the better writer than you but let’s just agree to disagree because all this mutual admiration is starting to make me sick, lol. Seriously though, that was great and I really love that they actually communicate in this story. You’re NC-17 scenes are making it really really difficult for me to hold back reconciling them in my fic just so I can write one too!
excellent fic, I’ve been enjoying this but don’t think I ever commented to let you know. Defs hot, this one. And sure there’s plot movement, like how much in LURVE these two are–trust and love just keeps on growing. PPS!
That was brilliant, I love Danish smut! And you write it so well :)
HOT!
maybe not plot advance at all but still i’m loving the update :). can’t complain at danish bedroom time. keep writing and hope we can get another chapter soon.
bedroom/bathroom quality time i forgot to say :P
Nice Update! Who doesn’t love morning lovin…Even though you said it was all smut, there was alot of interesting undertones in this chapter…one definately being how thier relationship is getting stronger…two how Dana ‘really’ is getting back to her old self…I could be making this up in my own head, but you could feel how Dana missed Alice when she was out with the girls…like I said I am totally addicted to this story…don’t ever doubt your writing abilities, this is truly amazing. Have a great weekend!
Niiiiice, lol. More please, hee. Just kidding, well not entirely. Helena and Ruth? Now that’s a very interesting idea, lol. Kinda hard to imagine for me at least, but why not..? Loved it!
Ok, I’ll comment on this chapter though I’ve read it long before but they’ve just activated my account at the site. Yeah, agreed – rather smut and too too incredibly HOT! But I would say there’s not only that obvious thing of your stories I like. You ravishingly cope with so many grounds and levels in your narrations, even with no plot!? LOL! I think you should’ve not disabled rating of your fan fics, in that case the Danish writers would’ve won the award. Thanks again!