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Even in the Quietest Moment, Post 38
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Post 38
Rosanna could only nod, overcome with the intensity of ebony eyes boring into hers.
“I am not able to offer you a commitment. I will truly understand if you decide to walk away. Hell if I was in your shoes and someone told me this I would say thanks but no thanks. I’m not you though and I trust you enough to make your own decision.”
“Keep talking Bette, I’m listening” Rosanna assured her.
“I am trying to work through being single after an eight year relationship. Somewhere in between accepting that and picking through the pieces of my life I found you. I don’t want to stop seeing you.”
Rosanna sorted through all she had heard. “You want to know if I still want to be with you even if it’s not forever.”
Bette nodded.
“I said it before and I will say it again, I fell in love with you at first sight. Whatever time we have together is a gift I want to open again and again for a long, long time…”
“Let’s get out of here. I am in desperate need of dessert.” Bette frantically signaled the waiter.
Denise did not have to prod the two to get out of the car once they arrived at Rosanna’s home. She watched the two lock eyes all the way to the door. Rosanna turned the knob and walked in with the lovely Ms. Porter in tow. Denise worried about Ms. Rosanna; she seemed not to understand that you could not leave your front door unlocked. It was a safe neighborhood but still. There were no instructions about the car so Denise understood she was on standby and retired to the cottage where she lived behind the Tudor.
Bette and Rosanna started to strip clothes off one another the minute Rosanna closed the front door. Honey and Cream skin was progressively bared as they made their way to the bedroom. They were both breathless clad only in bras and panties by the time they stood at the foot of Rosanna’s bed. Normal breathing was long gone and the two looked at each other with hunger.
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I’m not much for commenting, but damn that was hot!
DAMN WOMEN!thats smokin hot… im very sadden its all over and only 38 chapters..lol anyway love your story and you have to come back to us with more stories and soon,please.
oh wow you did it and you made me like it…I dunno (shaking my head)…you sure can write girl especially that somethin’ somethin’ there at the end was worth waiting for…Great stuff looking forward to your next story.
I don’t know if I’m pouting cos this is the end, or pouting cos B didn’t choose T. I think it’s 50/50. What ever happened to “Go Ro!”? Well, I’ve been outed. I’m a fickle, fickle so-and-so. I see it, I know it, and I embrace it… *sigh* Anyway, I’ve completely enjoyed this story, kelika. Whatever your next story, if you promise to keep posting, I promise to keep reading. Thanks
Kelika, wow!!! What a ride. Thanks for that story and for giving us an opportunity to explore a different reality for Bette with you. You earned your “free paper” from the fan-fic fans after writing that story. But I’m sure that like me…. they are all hoping that you burn it again soon and give us another phenomenal story. Write soon again.
Wow, that was a way to end a story. I’m just singing Rosanna, Rosanna (LOL). So I gather there is a sequel and Tina gets her turn?
Smoke is filling the room. That was HOOTTTTT THANKS
Not quite the ending I wanted but definately a well written story. I hope to see more from you.
Thats hot but with Tina is hotters
Yes, the sex was hot…but with Tina it would have been “making love” and it would have been exquisite! Please keep writing kelika..see you next time around!
Even though it did not end the way I would of liked, it was a fantastic story!I hope you continue to write more for us. You have amazing talent. Thank you!
The end, huh? I wonder if you could see your way to a sequel? I mean, Bette’s still got a lot to work through, and Tina didn’t seem quite ready to give up, and I still don’t know who I want to get Bette, so… yeah. That’s all I’m saying about that. Great story, HOT ending, thanks!
ok again the same feeling: your rosanna is so great, such a loving person without selfiness. i find the connection between bette and tina not very real. sorry love your rosanna character.
Hotness!!! Though it is a gapingly loose ended story, I love it endlessly. So yes, the roasting and toasting with Bette and Ro and a side dish of Tina, was fantastic! Great intensity and passion. Fabulous writing 8) I had to crack open my windows whilst reading and now, I’m very much in need of a cold shower. Hope to see more of your work Kelika 8)
Hey Kelika, I love being a muse and am grateful that my comments inspire your wonderful writing. Finally Tina realized that Bette had moved on and that she was in a good place with Rosanna. Bette was right on as she admitted that she would probably always love Tina but now was in love with Rosanna. I do hope this closure helps them both build a stronger parental link and partnership which Angelica will benefit from. SAying that you can’t be together is a massive step. Who knows what the future may hold but you gotta live for right now and let the future run its course. Brilliant and breathtaking. Thank you so much for this morning delight. Your Loyal Fan.