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Laid Up: Another Season 3 – Chapter 21A
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Previously
Helena and Dylan—
While Dylan was concentrating on Angelica trying to make her laugh, tickling her tummy, and making faces at her. Helena took the opportunity to pull Tina a few feet away. “I’m so absolutely in love with her. Isn’t she delightful? My God, Tina she’s just brilliant in every way.”
“She’s guh-reat, Heh-lena.”
“You have no idea. When we make love–Tina, it’s religious. It’s-it’s. . . She is so eager to please me and so interested in learning. It’s just more than I could dream for. Honestly.”
Shane, Carmen, Alice, and Dana–
Shane nodded and Carmen’s eyes grew huge. “You’re. . .you guys are engaged?”
“Yep. I asked Alice to marry me and she said she’d think about it.”
“Ha. If we hadn’t been locked in here, I would have found one of those New Age spiritualists to marry us right then,” Alice said with a huge grin.
“Congratulations.” Carmen grabbed them and pulled them to her. “We were hopin’ you’d guys get back together, but this is even better. Right, Shane?”
Shane had distanced herself from the well-wishes in the shower. She was leaning against the wash basin when they turned to look at her.
“Right, Shane?”
“Yeah, yeah, sure. Congratulations. That’s cool. Totally cool.”
Dana grinned happily. “We could have a double wedding. What’d you think?”
Bette and Tina—
“What he said was that she, Tina, my life partner, the other mother of my child, and one of two people I hold dearest in my heart. . . He said, and I quote, Dr. Jones, ‘Don’t act like I did something to you and you’re in fucking danger. Cause I didn’t do anything. If I had wanted to do something to you, I would have and you never would have even known it. There are people who work with your kind all the time and do shit like that,’ or something very close to that. . . . ”
“. . . .Mr. Brecker will have a difficult time. He’s been with us for four years, but he’ll be leaving without a recommendation. He will be escorted off the premises and will not be allowed in again. Tina is safe. Trust me,” the doctor explained.
Bette nodded her head. It seemed like the problem would go away quietly. If it didn’t, and Tina got wind of this call, that Bette had ignored her wishes, and done what Tina had asked her not to do, there would be hell to pay. But Tina wouldn’t know and Josh Brecker would slip silently out of their lives.
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Okay, Josh is still in the picture and is going to do something bad to B&T. You really love the drama, don’t you? Please be easy on them, they already had to go through so much!! PPS…
Hey, I was first! Never happened to me before…nice…
God, I’ve missed this story so much… I’ve missed Hels and Dylan; Bette, even in her most self-righteous, judgmental state; Al & Dana and their happily advancing marriage… I’ve even missed the completely whack-ass Stephanie and her antics… Theresa has such a job ahead of her, and frankly? I hope she metes out a bit of old fashioned justice to that tw*t of an ex-husband of hers. I hope Helena can get past what Dylan’s telling her; I hope Al and Dana get to the altar with no more hitches; I hope Bette and Tina *finally* get to reconnect on all levels, with a bit of privacy; and lastly, I hope Shane “forgives” Carmen for the dildo in bang-up style. Loved the chapter, Portia, and that you’ve said there’s gonna be more before the week is out has me all happy and squirmy… thanks!!!!
Portia, I beg of you to post a follow up soon. I’m so involved with the Helena and Dylan part of the story. “You’ve taken my heart” was a real cliffhanger, ad I don’t think I can’t wait a month for an update.
Wow, can this even get better…each post just amazes me totally. You’re Brilliant, the best….You have made us wait so terribly long for this, yet then you make me feel bad for saying that cause it’s so worth the wait…How do you do that. And to tempt us with another chapter so soon…pls you spoil us now!!! And I’ve lov’n every minute of it…To top it all off I get to watch another episode tonight, could today get any better….ahhhhh.
God, it stopped just when Carmen was about to get spanked on her beautiful behind:(I love your sex scenes of Shane/Carmen, absolutely adore it. They always leave me hot and bothered:)I’m glad Shane ran away from that dildo, very much in character but Carmen at the receiving end of one is really hot. Maybe somenthing in the future with that kinda of scene:)Portia, you rock on so many levels!!
Portia…You are amazing. This story is amazing. I don’t know how you keep it all together, layered, interesting and 35 pages. So complex. PPS.
i was hoping Shane would take it at least once… there is nothing hotter then a submissive top! Great job with the story… and I love your scenes with Sharmen. THey have always been the most entertaining to read!
amazing as always!!!!!!!!!!!
OK…it may take me awhile to finish reading each chapter, but do I enjoy!!! Thanks so much for your time and effort with this story. The good thing is that I have the next chapter to go right into!!!
I was getting worried you weren’t going to finish this story and then as if by a miracle the post was suddenly there :). Reading it makes me long for a time when IC let them be true to themselves. I wish season 4 could have been a continuation of your brillant retelling of season three. Your story reminds me of Dana and how much I miss her this season, especially because she isn’t spoken of.I much prefer your telling of the story and hope you continue to write this story after you have finished righting the wrongs of season 3. Lets have our very own season 4 that follows your brilliant season 3. No Jodi or Phyllis or papi or any of the myriad of people that take screen time away from our favorite ladies. Wonderful installment as usual. I like that B&T are talking about the less pleasant parts of their former life and hopefully moving forward. I think it was a brilliant idea to have Dylan confess to Helena, now there may accually be hope for them. Terese sounds a little imbalanced. I hope she doesn’t do anything irrational like take Angelica and try to give her the safe childhood she was unable to give to Tina and Stephanie. I’m very nervous and excited for Friday. Thanks for posting, you are unbelievable :)
I absolutely love your story. Carmen chasing Shane with the dildo was hilarious.. it would have been hot if Shane went for it ^^
I’m just now commenting because I just now finished reading. lol I’m glad Dylan told the truth. Now we just have to see what happens next. Tonya’s still a nut. Bette and Tina making out at The Planet = HOT. Stephanie is still evil. God what a fucking bitch! Tina’s mom really laid into Daddy Dearest! PPS!
Your version of S3/S4 is so worth the wait. Yet another amazing installment; you are a magician with those great ‘do-over’ skills! ;-)