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The Onyx part 4
So I’m in the limo on my way to Monster House… so I could see Carmen. I just can’t get away. I look out the window and I see, people fighting… dogs, fighting… this is like in that movie… Fight Club…. But like the city…when I look back to the limo I see myself sitting in front of me…looking at … ME
“What the fuck!!!” I take out a gun I didn’t know I had in my pocket and point it to her… me…
“Are you going to kill me… you?” and she laughs
“Who the fuck are you… WHAT are you?”
“haha so funny your face Shane…. I’m cliff Shane. Remember?”
“…..yea….Fuck yea I remember….. Man….Do I really look like that?”
“haha yea Shane you do”
“Fuck… ok can you be like… something ells…someone ells ?… please?”
“haha ok ~~~ Better?”
“Pink…. Nice….”
“Yea I like her a lot!!”
“Yea….ok, What the fuck man!!! This is shit!!! I hate this!! This world!! I’m a fucking gangster…I kill people!!! I killed TINA for Christ sake!!! Jenny is my slave!!! Bette hates me and CARMEN hates me!!!”
“WOW, wow slow down Shane”
“Don’t ‘wow, wow’ me, miss Pink!!! You tricked me!!”
“No I didn’t … I said it was different… not easy”
“Well fuck you!!!… it is worse here… and Carmen hates me…”
“Well you need to talk to her… found your diary right?… you know the truth now”
“OK but I don’t want to be here…. I want to go back… everything was easier there”
“Easy is not exactly better”
“Yea well in this case it is…”
“I can’t do nothing… you’re the one who needs to find the way out”
“Look you don’t understand, I can’t do this… I’m not her… this life… its not me… she, the other me has been doing this for what? 20 years… I’m not gonna make it through the next ten minutes”
“So make it through the next five, the next minute”
“I don’t think I can”
“Yes you can”
“God it hurts, I hate that it hurts like this!!”
“Oh well it suppose to hurt all that pain all that suffering you’ve caused… It’s coming back to you. Feel it, Deal with it. Then maybe you’ve got a shot at being free”
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(21 votes, average: 3.38 out of 5)
^.^ weird, freaky, Kinky, but all in all nice.
I like this but it’s way too short. So make it longer !
hey love ur writing, but dont take long to write again. I almost forgotten about u.
I love that crazy story^^. I was wondering how long I must wait for the new part. And here it is, as cool as I expected. So keep it going!