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Denial / Acceptance / Lust / Love – Chapter 44
Previously
“I still think I’m gonna need some convincing that this is a good idea.” Dana said now smiling at the scene before her. Alice reached in and tucked some hair behind Dana’s ear before whispering.
“Don’t worry, I’ll be sure to do some convincing later on”
“Hmm I’m not sure whether to be turned on or creeped out by that statement.” Alice just laughed and snuggled into Dana happy to relax for now until they went to the New Year celebration party at The Planet later that night.
Dana’s Condo 9pm
“Oh my God…harder Dane.”
“Baby I’m trying”
“No, no, no, circle, do the circle thing, please.”
“Fuck Alice…”
“Push, now push it, oh my god Dane…”
“Shit it’s coming.”
The alien ran towards Dana’s super trooper and devoured her head before she could even fire her weapon. Alice threw down her playstation controller and yelled “mother fucker” at the screen. Again, they had lost to the alien side in ‘capture the flag’, although a pretty damn good team in real life, their fantastical characters couldn’t seem to pair up and manage to score enough points tonight, resulting in a cursive outburst from Alice and an upset rant from the competitive athlete who blamed her dodgy controller.
“Another game?” Alice asked after calming down and forming a smile at Dana’s frustrated features.
“Yes! I’m not quitting til we win dammit!” The blonde chuckled at her girlfriend; Dana became so competitive in whatever gaming activity they participated in it was hard not to find it funny and sexy at the same time. Alice pushed the start button and began preparing to get her ass kicked for the millionth time that night and the disgruntled groans of Dana as she yet again lost to the alien scum of the universe.
Half an hour later and after another two defeats, Alice glanced at the clock and noticed the time. “Jesus, Mary and Joseph it’s nine thirty Dane.” Dana’s head whipped round to look at the mantle. Shit! They had been playing the game console for nearly two hours, it was almost the only thing either had bothered to unpack from Alice’s many boxes and both became so distracted that they had forgotten the plans to be at The Planet for half ten.
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(24 votes, average: 3.29 out of 5)
Great chapter can’t wait for the next one.PPS
yay! this was an awesome update. love it.
oh my god – that’s horrible. who is that lady? besides that evil mean lady – that was a great chapter.
WTF?! Who is this “sauntering” woman? I’ll hunt her down and beat her to a pulp if anything happens to Dana. Oh, and the beginning of the chapter probably made the rest of us perv’s perk right up! Aliens – who would have thought that at first glance…?!
Oh I like it when Dana gets all competitive (even if it involves a stupid video game ;)). It’s cute AND hot at the same time. I totally forgot that they had a new years eve party. But I’m afraid Dana’s new year will start pretty badly… I hope every will turn out well!
i just left muted a comment apologizing for being out of the comment-leaving loop lately…anyway, stupid mystery woman dropping things in people’s drinks. oh well, nice update.
Sorry, it took me so long to comment. Hmm…I’m even scared to guess who is this evil sneaking up woman!?… Hope this tab of acid will do no harm to Dana. Yep, the beginning of the chapter, it was brilliant! The video game between them is so gripping and HOT! Well, I’m waiting for the next update. LOL.
Oh my god! That nasty woman! Welcome back tho, loving this part :D
If I compliment your glasses again, will you tell me who it is?? It seems obvious but I want to be sure. And I don’t know what I did to inspire you, all I did was read the first part and tell you it was good. You came up with everything else! :P Anyway, yay and PPS and all that jazz.
Oh damn! Whats gonna happen? I hope Dana’s gonna be okay and that she just has more fun, but i want to know who did it and why. Glad your writers block is gone, PPS.
omg! you’ve got me hooked now please post soon I cant wait to read more! brillaint idea well done!
Classy intro, lol. It fooled me :P Sorry about not commenting in awhile, but I still love this story:) So who was the woman? Again, awesome post. PPS.