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Summer Vacation. Chapter 17
Previously:
“Hey there …” said Bette, not wishing to be caught out in silent observation,
“Hey …” replied Tina, handing Lottie a tissue from her pocket as she jumped up the greet them …
“Can I go and look around …?” Angie squealed … noticing all the open doors from Tina’s earlier exploration,
“Sure …” Tina agreed, “but don’t touch anything … okay …” she added sternly,
“Is everything alright?” Bette asked quietly, her eyes glancing over Lottie,
“Yeah …” said Tina, leaning in for a quick kiss, “everything’s fine … babe you should see this place it’s amazing …” Tina gushed, her eyes alight and dancing,
Bette couldn’t help grinning at her enthusiasm, “I’m sure Ange’ll take me on a tour when she gets back!” Bette joked,
“I’m going to take a nap …” mumbled Lottie, getting up quickly, “Arthur said the car will be back for us at seven …” she added, grabbing her phone before she disappeared through the door to the bedrooms and out of sight,
“What was that all about …?” Bette asked, holding Tina close as she pushed her hair gently from her face,
Tina shrugged, “I think she thought I’d be upset because they changed our booking”
Bette looked puzzled, “Okay … … … I suppose they aren’t the kind of people you say no to …” she added after a pause,
Tina grimaced, Bette was never very good with people trying to tell her what to do … the evenings dinner could be interesting, Bette was liable to tell Roger precisely where he could stick his pompous English ass …
Chapter Seventeen.
“I don’t understand … why are we back at a hotel …?” Angie whispered to Lottie, smoothing down the ruffles on her dress,
Lottie was glad that she’d warned them to pack something formal, Angelica looked amazing in her little burgundy dress, she grinned at her, constantly amazed by the little girl’s perception …
“It has a nice restaurant …” Lottie remarked, rolling her eyes at Bette and Tina, if Roger was going to pull out all the stops and take them to a five-star restaurant then she was going to make it plain and obvious that it also wasn’t her cup of tea …
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(41 votes, average: 3.83 out of 5)
I so love this story… insomnia rocks if it means there’s something this good to pass the time. Why did Maxine not acknowledge Bette in her will? I don’t get that… aside from the obvious… And I can see Bette and Roger clashing even more. I hope Lottie can handle them both. Ack, I hope you’re updating this story soon, sofa, I need answers! Thanks for the post!
I love your Bette and Tina..they are so real! the dialogue is dead-on.. love Lottie and Angie’s interactions.. please continue, your’re doing an admirable job…Thanks
It made my day when I saw that you had posted. Seems like Bette and Tina have a very interesting night ahead of them. PPS
bout time you updated….never too soon 4 an update of this story. Gotta love Bette’s reaction to Lottie’s announcement, and Tina’s response, now that was GOOD!!!! PPS!!!!!
How long will Bette put up with Roger?? Not long if we know our Bette. Let him get a little rude with Angie or Tina and he will Feel the Alpha Bette up his snobbish butt. I do believe that Bette is tired of how he treats Lottie. Let him call her Elizebeth again and we will find out. the girls were so sweet to give the time alone. thanks
YES! she knows,and doesnt care.bette needs to chew roger up and spit him out,or bitch slap him or something? love this! p.p.s.
Romantic! PPS.
great, great, great
Yes, yes where were we? Continue soon please.
Ummmm, B&T had been dancing and Lottie knocked on the door. Their hands were all over each other, that is where they were before the knock. I am a tad lost. It is Lottie who is bringing in her sister as the second person, but why? Also, if Maxine knew where Bette was why did she not include her in one of her wills? Did she feel like she had to hide Bette or did she feel that Bette was better off without the knowledge that Maxine still cared about her?
Its kinda sad that Maxine didn’t remeber bette in her will. Any reason for that?
i love this story… i can’t believe her mom left her out… but i’m glad lottie wants her to be part of it with her… i like this kid… PPS
u just made my horrible hayfever day!!!!! great stuff, love the humour, more
I looooooooooooove it!!!!! … God, Sofa, this story is just great!!! It’s like reading a nice book with a very interesting intrigue, and the whole wrapped in fluffy marshmallow!!! You manage the B&T loving and chemistry so well, it just makes the whole thing amazing. But, hey if I can dare one request (not that I should have any given this is pure delight…), I’m really really hoping for the next chapter to start at “Now… where were we?”… ;)
excellent!
Damn love B&T!