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    Sharpen Up The Knives 2

    Story written on March 3, 2007 by New Dawn Fades.
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    Why is it that I feel the need to tell her my whole life story?

    Sharpen

                 Up

                    The

                          Knives 2

      

      

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

    Ch 2

      

      

      

    Well I want to wrap it up and swim in it until I drown….

    My morale standing is lying down….

     

     

    December 24, 1998

     

     

    Carmen that is a beautiful name.

     

     Yes it is.

     

    Carmen is standing in the doorway knife in hand. She looks worried scared probably playing out all the different violent and bloody ways this evening of playing Good Samaritan can end. I get up from the warmth of what I can only assume is her bed. When I stand the room spins a little again but I am ready for it this time. She walks over fast, knife sharp in her small delicate hand. Hands say a lot. Her hands just say that she doesn’t work a lot and that she is very sexy.

     

    I stand in front of her naked and there is that look again like if she stared too long she would be beet red from blushing. Or maybe its just me……

     

    “I don’t understand what you mean by they……I don’t understand…”

     

    “Give me your hand.” I say as she looks away again.

     

    She does and its warm and soft. A measured lifetime passes with us just breathing and staring. The shutters on the windows outside rattle and she jumps a little. I obviously scare the shit out of her.

     

    “Don’t be afraid……” I tell her.

     

    “I….I’m….not…..” She says lump in her throat.

     

    “You feel this?”

     

    “Yeah…its a lump or something…..”

     

    The lump or something is the tracking device/ behavioral modifier. Lately or suddenly it has been on the fritz….or maybe I have…I don’t know. Its at the base of my neck and  under the skin and Carmen with her sexy name and sexy body and sexy hands she is gonna cut it out of me.

     

    And its gonna hurt like freezing hell.

     

    “…..You can’t mean this?”

     

    “Yes you have to cut it out of me for obvious reasons…”

     

    “No I don’t.” She says head shaking back and forth.

     

    “Yes you do.”

     

    “No I don’t.”

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    2. Wow you are so right, Shane never having been with a woman before is an awesome twist. It always amazes me how you are able to change so much about the characters by placing them in an AU but at the same time stay so true to the Shane and Carmen we know and love….just another reason why reading your fics is always so much fun. Thank you!

    8. When I saw the NIN dvd being advertised in the flyers last weekend, my first thought was NDF will be ecstatic. LOL.You’ve done it again, totally awesome fic. Wonder what Carmens hiding from. Did I misunderstand, has Shane never been w/ a woman before & never acted on her feelings or were they that suppressed?

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