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    Heaven ‘n Hel – Chpt 3

    Story written on March 5, 2007 by zheese.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=64832
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    Slowly she speaks

    Previously

    I let out a huff. “What’s going on? You’re asking me?” I turned and walked towards the house filled with frustration. “Fuck!” God, what was I doing?

    “Bette! I wish to hell…”

    I heard Helena scream at the same time I felt a light sensation strike against my back and then suddenly heard a chink against the concrete deck. I snapped around to see the penny bounce into the pool and sink slowly to the bottom.

    When I looked up, Helena stood with her hands clasped to her mouth, shocked and surprised by her actions.

    “Good shot, Hel. What the fuck!? What do you want? You know, you’ve just created one hell of a wishing well here,” I yelled, looking back down into the deep end.

    Chapter 3

    As if in prayer, Hel held her hands, pressed together in the shape of a vee, to her mouth.

    I stood upright and stared at her. Transfixed. At the edge of the pool.

    For a few long moments, Helena stared back at me. Then she closed her eyes before slightly bowing her head. She hid her face in her palms and shook her head faintly. It was a silent testimony to her confused and troubled state.

    Slowly raising her head and revealing her eyes over the tips of her fingers, Helena looked back at me again. She slid her hands down completely off her face and began walking hesitantly towards me.

    I couldn’t have moved if I tried.

    “Bette?” she implored softly as she approached.

    I felt my heart throbbing. And the tears welling in my eyes.

    “I’m sorry. I’m so sorry, Darling,” she said, reaching me and caressing her hands down both my arms.

    Desperately, I grabbed her and pulled her to me. We clung to one another, our hands and arms wildly grasping for a satisfying hold. I was searching for an embrace that would effectively convey to Hel how intolerable the thought was to live without her love.

    I wept, as, rapidly, furiously and without restraint, I kissed her face, her forehead, her eyes, her lips. “I love you. I love you. I love you. I’m so sorry. I’m so sorry, Hel. I love you.” I pressed my mouth hard against Helena’s.

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    3. Aww! She’s homesick. Bette – buy her half-a-pound of decent sausages and a supply of proper tea (NOT LIPTONS, HERBAL, GREEN OR LEMON). Very sweet and intense update – too short though. We want more.

    4. Helena turned to look deeply and reassuringly into my eyes. “Bette, there will never be anyone else for me. Never. It’s not possible.” Her lips neared mine. “Do you believe me?…I believe her!!!…More now Please! Xo

    5. yay, another fantastic post!imagine a world in which we all wanted our lovers that much, even when we were all discontented and upset and stuff. pps!

    7. Well, fuck, that’s still no reason to be throwing pennies! You could put somebody’s eye out. But as Helena hasn’t been cut off by Peggy here, I bet (not Bette) that they can work something out.

    8. awe damn, you did it agai…why, why, why…you know, i had a “ruff” day, so this was a really, really nice way to end the evening…but dang-it if you couldn’t have added a few more lines. by the way, i loved the “tittilated” (sp) part…i was tittilated by it…okay, post soon, i know this is a struggle, but if this is a struggle, i can’t wait to see if flowing out of you….Loved it 10 stars!!!

    9. *cleansing exhale* Good so it’s not the relationship….just a desire for a simpler life? Understandable…Hmmm but throwing pennies with an obvious target in mind still makes me scratch my head a bit, Hel. I suppose a modern beach house, cashflow and love do not a happy life make, eh? Thanks for illuminating a bit…PPS!

    14. But… But… How could you leave us hanging like that Lady Z ??!! Now we’re all freaking out ! Oh, you soooooo LOVE being EVIL !!! But seriously, it was BRILLIANT !!! As usual, I might add. I just looooooove this kind of drama. Just promise us you’ll post again soon, please … I can’t wait.

    15. Hmm… I wonder how this will work out with Bette’s life and Angelica and everything. Oh well… they can always move to Britain and live with me. Hehe. I can’t believe you ended it there! Post soon. :)

    18. beautiful as always zheese, and that was a very nasty place to end the chapter though :D Just messing with you babe- this was a lovely chapter, thank you. Do post soon

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