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    The Real Deal Ch 12

    Story written on March 7, 2007 by catseye.
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    Carmen to Shane:”I am yours if you want.”

    Previously… 

    Shane: “I broke up with Paige. I want us.” 

    Carmen: “My hands are tied.” 

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    Ch12

    Day 62, 20 July

     

    Dearest Carmen

     

    We are moving house today! I am so excited!  For the first time in my life, I own something this substantial.  Well, the bank actually owes most of it, but you know what I meant.  I feel like I am a grown up now, got the house, car and a kid.  I am almost content. Just one thing missing…

     

    I collected the keys from the estate agents.  I wish you were here to share this moment with me.  You are the first person that I wanted to tell. 

     

    Shay can finally have his own room and so will I!  Thank God for that.  Alice and Jenny came to help me out, but there really isn’t much to move, no furniture, just some personal items.

     

    I found a box of paper hearts that you gave me on our first Valentine’s Day.  I kept this away from your sister when she came for your belongings.  You said each heart represented a kiss from you.  I remembered.

     

    Love

    Shane

    P.S. I hope you will like this house too.

     

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    Day 67, 25 July

     

    Dearest Carmen

     

    I took Shay to the Church today.  You know me, not really a big church goer but Shay wanted to. He wanted to be baptized. 

     

    I believe in GOD but I don’t think going to church will make me a better person.  I didn’t believe in GOD until I was 9, when I ran away from my foster parents to find my mother in a church shelter. The priest was very nice to me and taught me lots of things.  The first thing he taught me was to have faith.

     

    Shay’s baptize ceremony was simple, they poured some water over his head and some oil on his forehead.  Actually, it was quite similar to mine.

     

    I never asked you when you were baptized, was yours similar to this too? How old were you?

     

    Love

    Shane

     

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    Beach

     

    “It’s such a perfect day to come surfing!”  Cat exclaims.  We are lying on the beach, enjoying the sun rays warming our skins.

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    1. Love it!! Love it!!! Love it!!!! Keep it coming. Shane’s combination of self-doubt and nobility is rearing it’s ugly head again and causing her to push Carmen away again. She needs to have some more faith in herself and in her sweet loving nature which everyone can see, but her. Keep it coming. PPS.

    3. hey! i was cheching every single day for an update from you and i just finished your latest chapter. it was great and i really loved it. i guess it’s okay for shane and carmen to on a hot and cold kind of thing right now ’cause hey, shane said it – it has only been three months and i guess you have a lot to explore with your storyline. 3 more months to go before the outcome right? i hope it makes all of us happy – you know what i mean right?thanks a lot again!

    4. Amazing like always!!! Some more drama won’t hurt any one. You have many more options now with this change in the story. I love every bit of it. Thanks and PPS.

    5. OMG!!!! You know, Carmen’s got a point there. Here goes Shane deciding on what’s best for Carmen – AGAIN. She has to stop doing that! They are both stubborn but I hope love prevails in your fic. Please post your next update SOON. I’m dying here. :)

    7. I loooooved it. And I am addicted to your story. I think it was right to bring Carmen’s mother up. And of course, the tension raises again with her appearance.I hope Shane and Carmen keep seeing each other to realize that they can handle their issues, as long as they truly love each other. Especially Carmen needs to realize that she can’t be with someone if she doesn’t really love this person. It doesn’t make her nor Cat happy.

    10. ok i loveed it but I really am getting a littleused to seeing shane and carmen dance around each other and getting back together , I think its getting drawn out no offence or anything but I would really like to see them back together and for Shane to finally stop torturing herself . pleaseeeeeeeeeI love this fic and your writing its amazing pps

    12. I love the back and forth between them. I don’t think either of them is in a place where they can be with eachother yet, so I’m glad you haven’t forced it. I look forward to more drama.

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