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The beginning of a friendship. THE chapter 55
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Previously on: ‘The beginning of a Friendship’
Tina:
Those thoughts in my head, swirling around as if they were searching for a way out. Thoughts I couldn’t grasp, so much had happened, I had found love… I had found love in my life, love that made me float, love that made me fly, all because of her. I never thought anyone would be able to love me, but now, because she did, my life felt so… Different… As if everything I had been through, every moment that had hurted, every night I had cried myself to sleep, every stinging remark, every time I didnt feel worthwhile… As if it had all led me to this moment in my life… This moment in which I exactly knew what I needed in order to be happy… It wasn’t much, and yet it was everything…
*It was her…*
I felt how the wind tugged my shirt… Her shirt… Suddenly stronger then it had been before, and as once one of the memories that was floating around in my mind made its way through… I sat at the chair that had been casually placed on the porch, as if someone sat their every day, and felt how the memory overwhelmed me…
One of the few times in which I had actually liked my sister…
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But Tina, really, I am… afraid
The young brownhaired girl looked at her little sister with big eyes, terrified of the liquid before her. The blonde girl, slightly younger, and not looking at all like her sister, looked up in surprise. Their parents were just at the gate, looking at their children proudly. They waved, and Tina saw how her sister almost burst out in tears, trying to hide this fact for her mother and father, not wanting to dissapoint them. Tina again blinked in ashtonishment as she saw the plea in Julia’s eyes, aware that she was longing for her help… A small hand was extended, and took her older sisters, squeezing softly, taking a small step so Julia could hide behind her… Now she understood why her older sister always pleaded she was sick when they had a swimmingclass… The perfect girl, who was in the top of her class even at this young age, who had populair friends, who could manipulate her parents with her witty mind, who could outdo her young sister in almost everything, and barely let a chance go by to let the blonde girl know that, was afraid of water. The trembling hands in her own, Tina felt at once the pressure that was upon her sister, to stay as perfect, always, as she was now. She looked into that green eyes that had so many times abased her, and smiled reassuringly.
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1st?
The song called ‘Show me heaven’ was performed by Maria Mckee in the soundtrack of the movie ‘Days of Thunder’ I heard it on the radio and felt it merge together with the scene I had in my mind months ago allready… Hence my surprise when a music-video was recently put on youtube, merging my favourite couple and this music together in a wonderfull scenery! Its been my help in this chapter… Its a beatifull video! Just type in ‘show me heaven tibette’ and you will be able to watch it if you want!
Not even halfway through yet and you’re killing me. AHHHHHHHHHHHH sweet torture…
I’m out of workds, trust me pal, it was beautifully written, sexy but not too raw so to speak. It was making love not just sex, you just won a people’s choice award! wait a minute, you already have one!!
Wow … to quote Tina … ‘oh my fucking god’ ;) you can so get yourself out of hiding that was amazing, fabulous … i’m out of words, just great, loved it, phew … think i need to lie down!
OMFG, I’m speechless, omfg
that has got to be the longest foreplay in the history of sex, 100 chapters and 6 pages for the real action to begin, lord woman you want to kill us or what!!
Well worth the wait, my fellow Tibetter! I remembered not to hold my breath, but I’m not sure it helped any. Sensual without being crass, equally emotional and touching… amazing.
I got done with page 9…and my DAMN INTERNET went out!!!!!!!!!!!! Then I come back and there’s like, 2 lines on page 10. lol DAMN, girl! This was hot, sexy, romantic, just everything really. Plus, we’re not “blue-balled” anymore. xD
Wow, this was beautifully written Woman! I know how much work goes into an NC…lol…and yours was an extremely long post at that. Thanks for your efforts, again, just wonderfully done!
WOW!well done women,and screen just caught fire and its smokin hot! thxs for the extra chappys.p.p.s.
My mind and head is spinning and all the air has been sucked out of the room. My OLD heart is beating to fast. Need I say I have read a lot of NC-17 but this way by far the longest and the best My young friend you are great. thanks so much worth waiting for. Take care of school and write more when you can. thanks again
So totally worth the WAIT!!!!! BEAUTIFUL!!!!
hey were is my shout out i am so hurt lol but u made up for itOMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 10 pages i am so happy!!!!!!!!!!! that was beautiful, hottttttttttttttttt and long dont take so lng to update next time lets go for 15 pages
Oh god I think I need a drink of an adult beverage and a cigarette that I don’t even smoke. You definitely never need to hide. This was a awe inspiring and with my imagination running wild I had chill bumps up and down my body. Now I am tired but so satisfied. Do not ever question your ability to write these scenes. You definitely have won my heart.
wow! phew! let me take a deep breath… ok now come on come on wherever you are! let me give you a big congrats! this chapter is so worthy! you made my hearth beat so fast! the wonderful way you put every feelings into it! i love it, i don’t think that you have to hide anymore this was a wonderful and lovely chapter, do i have to tell you too that it was so hoooooot too? nooo you already know that! thanks for all the effort that you put to write THE chapter!!! a lot of hugs
Amazing, so totally worth the wait i loved every second it took to get here an d this was just WOW. please post again soon i love all your stories but this one is without a doubtthe one i look out for.
This was so well written…beautiful. The way you tied the song throughout, created a rhythmic, poetic flow that added to their lovemaking. Excellent job! 28 extremely well written pages! Thank you!
Congrats on your 100th post!!! And yeah… hot isn’t the most appropriate word hahahahahahahaha kidding!!! :P Im keeping the faith… someday you’ll surprise us with a hot chappy… even if its with another name… like… justfuckB+T LMAO!!!’Oh’, don’t hide… im gonna go to knock your door… very soon… (I hope)… cross ur fingers ;)
WOW – that was one hell of a chapter…by christ it was good – let me breathe okey :O). First of all thank you for the rose – how sweet, but you deserve all the roses for your way with a pen, you write so beautiful. This chapter blew me away – you have me smile big time……I so love it and your story is so wonderfull. So keep going okey and don’t worry about writing NC-17 – you are doing a most amazing job ;O) – so keep it up. Until your next post wich I will be looking forward to. Take care and be safe.
Ohh – my jaw is on the floor – nice chapter……..wow…let me breathe :O) very nice indeed. Post soon
OMFG. that was awesome. i read this about an hour ago and now i start catching my breath again. WOW. that was………well……….breathtaking. did i mention WOW? okay, so it was so worth the wait. thank you so much. excellent work, as always. no disappointment here. again you prove how freaking talented you are. and again *jealous*. PPS
Hey Doll, y’know I saw u posted and that put a smile on my face, then I saw how many pages was there, Better still! my lecturer was askin why my jaw had just dropped while I was reading it! And don’t worry, you didn’t need to redeem anything but bloody hell that was a good read!! Also, very very HOT.. Think I’ll need a cold shower later on! lol Ohh also I loved that video on youtube.. I can see why you liked it! Keep up the amazing work doll! *hugz*
JLBT,YOU ROCK!!!!!!!!! That was ONE HOT NC17…*THUD *THUD *THUD! You obviously put alot of thought, energy, and creativity into creating sucha beautiful chapter. Hats off to you my friend, and keep em cumming! ;-) ttys
wow…i’m speechless…it was so poetic and intense…viva la tibette and their true love
Great job, more soon
Oooo you were right, bad very bad idea to read this at work, but didn’t have time last night at home!! Mate don’t run and hide, this was fanfuckingtastic – my head is all blue coz I forgot to breath LOL…it was worth the wait, thanks. And now it’s Bette’s turn, get to work T :o))
Meet our expectations?… Meet our expectations???…. Don’t you know by now that you always, endlessly, surpass by far our expectations??!!!… You’d think that getting one of the most prestigious awards would give you a hint…;) LOL! J, I could say that you did great… But I won’t… It wouldn’t do you justice, my friend!!!! It was one of the most beautiful love scene in the history of Tibette fic!!! And the long slowburn foreplay?…. YAYYYYYY!!!! Gosh Captain, when I first reached the line uttered by Tina “Make love to me”, I almost fainted…. (And believe me, I’m far from being a fainter!!!)… So f**king sexy!…. and incredibly romantic! I’ve always wondered if those two notions were ‘truly’ compatible in a sex scene… You just proved that it was! … and very much so!!! Was it Justkeepswimming who recently said that she had rated her post R, because for her, a scene that only showed love whatever its form should not be altered or misrepresented by a rating with negative connotations… That’s exactly how this chapter makes me feel… That it’s about making love, a love so pure and exceptional that its written form should never be rated… (Don’t get me wrong, I’m fully aware of the necessity for the rating…) Anyway, the wait was sooooo worth it, and J, needless to say that you blew me away… again! These two ladies are very lucky to have you write them, as we all are!!! Thanks…
Wow… *let me catch my breath*… wow… you’ll be totally wasting your talent if you write only ‘and then they make love’ ;) JLBT… this is far more better than anything… I didn’t know what the song is until I checked out the youtube music video that you intro to us… and I must say that… it does make this story more intense. Girl, you’ve done a far more great job in doing this and keep the TiBette in our heart alive. All the emotions you write in so detail… as a result… 10pages… just wow me!! Can you help me write my next chapter… I’m still struggling with it ;P I stopped at every 2 sentences that I wrote… so… yea… I still haven’t finished it :( Anyway, you take care and PPS if you can :D
Wow! First let me say congrats on the ff award…you so deserve it. This story is one of my favs. I sit and wait for new installments of this and pretty women, very patiently I might add. Like I said…WOW…they finally do the do…aw-some. I love the way you right this story…the POVs, the emotions…everything. This is a B&T begining that definatly should never end(until you turn it into the ‘middle’). I figure the time they get up and converse over breakfast…should cover another 10 chaps. at lease. Oh…but not before more of that good lovin’, puleese post soon.
Ohh goodie and Bette’s turn is still too come………don’t hide to far away, come back soon!
OMG – that was torture :O)…wow. First of all congratulations on the award – you sooo deserve it. Sorry I haven’t commentet on your story sooner but I have been busy :O) – but I sure love this chapter…wow. It was soo beautiful written and with all the emotion going on…very nice. I’m so looking forward to you next chapter :O) so don’t keep us waiting to longe. Love it – keep posting and do post soon
Congrats on your 100th post. Damn that was fucking hot and sexy and sweet, love it and can’t wait to see more. Please post soon, thanks!
Holy f*cking cow….what an amazing journey. Sorry for these late comments but life was getting in the way. You know what, I’m sitting here waiting to leave for my yearly mammography and if I knew before what I know now, I would have waited till after that. Girl you don’t know how sensitive I feel now….I know too much information, but the hell with it, it’s the truth. It was so vivid that I almost climaxed together with Tina *blush*, girl could you please put a warning in your author’s notes the next time. Gonna take a quick cold shower (my second one this morning) and rush to the hospital. Thanks so much for this amazing chapter, can’t hardly wait to see what Tina has to offer in return. Bedankt!!!
Dear and sweet M, how could I ever express what your so sensitive writing do to me ? I have all the reasons in world to be deeply touched, truly moved, by your stories – and this one, this so precious one in particular. Because they speak to my heart as a whisper, they find each link that exists between my reader’s joy and my memories – or fantasies (but fantasies aren’t they dreams’ memories ?)… I love this Beginning of a Friendship of yours, dear talented author, with all the force and deepth of the impossible love my soul is full : often smiling, much more often crying, always with such emotion… This first time you just pictured for us, your delighted and admirative readers, is the poem each person in this earth dreams to live, to share with our own special one… Some blessed ones will know it, some more than blessed ones already know it, some others will never reach this dream. But it’s above all a poem about true love, shared or not, for what make us real human being is this magic feeeling. Thank you, dearest JLBT, for everything you bring in me, each time I read or re-read you. Even if it’s tears, there’s sunlight all around – thanks to you. At least mind and heart will always be able to live the dream – and so for a moment, an inestimable moment your talent created for me, I can almost touch the reality of love, I feel myself a bit part of the pure magic your Bette and Tina share. All my endless gratitude for this unique poetry of yours, my friend. I’ll write you more, through PM’s, as soon as I could – for this last week was unbelievebly moving for all possible reasons. Talk with you soon ! With all my tender friendship and a big virtual hug – A.