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As it should be…
“Oh God right there,” Tina moaned as she felt Bette’s tongue search at her. “No, a little higher baby, please.”
She moved her hands to her own breasts and massaged them. She had missed this so much. Missed her touch. Her attention. Her…
“Fingers. Use your fingers,” she said breathlessly.
She felt fingers enter her as she placed the back of her right hand across her forehead. Her other hand continued to move over her own breasts, pinching the nipples in turn. She then snuck her hand down, revelling in the sensation of having Bette suck on them, if only for a fraction of a second before returning to providing her pleasure. Tina’s fingers brought up some of her own moisture and she tasted it on the tip of her tongue, moaning quietly.
She had missed tasting a woman. And she was looking forward to being able to taste Bette. Not much longer now.
Tina’s hips started to move as she got closer to her release. Her eyes were tightly shut as she felt Bette start to move up.
She reached to encourage her south again.
“Fuck me,” Tina pleaded. “Tongue…fingers…”
She felt Bette’s tongue thrust inside, creating even more moisture.
“I’m getting close,” Tina whispered. “Bette…”
There was a pause in the sensations Tina was feeling.
“What?”
“Don’t stop,” Tina said quietly.
“No, what did you call me?” Henry asked. “You said Bette.”
Tina was silent.
“Oh Jesus. You did. You called me Bette. You’re fantasizing about her when I’m making love to you,” Henry sat up and rested his head in his hands as he slumped forward at the edge of the bed.
“I’m sorry.”
Henry stood and pulled his pants on.
“I’m going,” he said. “It’s not like I haven’t known something was up with you. Now I just know what.”
Tina reached for the t-shirt that was beside the bed and slipped it on.
“We can talk Henry, I didn’t mean to hurt you. I didn’t mean…”
He turned to face her.
“I’m sure there’s a lot you didn’t mean. But when you can’t even be present enough to realize you shouldn’t call out your ex’s name when we’re in bed together, I know you’re never going to be fully in this relationship no matter what excuses you have to offer.”
“I wasn’t going to offer any excuses. It’s only been the last couple of days that I’ve realized how much of a mistake I’ve made. And I didn’t plan to hurt you. She just…gets to me so much. I can’t let go yet.”
“I’m going to make it really easy on you then,” Henry tied up his shoe. “I won’t be home tomorrow night and you can come over and pick up your things. Leave the key on the kitchen table when you’re done.”
“Okay,” Tina replied meekly.
Henry stood again, taking his cell phone from the nightstand.
Tina leaned up against the pillows by the headboard, covered below the waist by the sheet, hugging her knees against her chest. What more could she say. She had on some level known this was over for a while. Perhaps she knew the relationship never stood a chance.
Without another word, he walked out of her bedroom. She heard him rustle around the living room briefly, before the tell tale sound of the latch at the front door sounded, signalling his departure.
Tina bit her lip and glanced around the room. Her heart was pounding in her chest. She hadn’t even known herself what she wanted until confronted by it in such an indelicate way. She hadn’t even realized she was fantasizing. It just seemed that Bette should be the one making love to her.
And if she had any say, that’s the way it was going to be again. She just had to figure out how.
(to be continued?)
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(5 votes, average: 4.40 out of 5)
Of course continue… I want to see your version of how things should be. Thanks, jks
ok let’s keep it going……. i know you can do a terrific
asdkgh I love it!
Yes more please
Yes, Please continue…. I want to see where you are going to take this. Thanks JKS PPS
Yes continue, and as far as the hope of B&T getting back together from our lips to IC’s ears.
PLEASE continue… b/t stories like yours will be the only source of sustenance for us tibetters for a loooooooong time to come :)
Of course you should continue. We need some hope dammit! PPS!
Oh yea! Definitely continue.
A resounding Yesssssss. Please.
Of course you should continue!!!
Yes, yes and yes, please. Your stories give us tibetter fans hope.
Please continue. We need hope.
oh yes, please…tibette story as it should be, hopefully IC can get a clue what majority of the fans want and bring tibette back together…continue, please and soon
jks..of course continue.I know that you can do this story justice. jks, Bring it!
“don’t stop”
WOW!
Yes, definitely continue this!
Ha, as if anyone would actually say…Oh no JKS, pls don’t continue we don’t like it…..your too funny!!! Your the ticket to make it right in the world again!!!
well at this point the only thing left to say is “we’re waiting”…lol
Please continue, can’t wait!
This is good and please continue, thanks!!!!
Of course you should continue because you are so creative in your story telling and I love to read your wonderful stories. Alas I don’t think we will see them together again on screen but that’s the point of fanfic I guess.
Yesss! More please!!
I’m almost giddy to see a new story from you! Thanks.
Hmmm swimmie did you just give us a preview of the last scene of epi 12 of this season……..let it be true please :)))
Tina just sounds devastated huh ?! Quite right too, she be needing some loving from the Bette shaped Maestro : ) You know we always want more, please,…….take us to the promised land, the land of love that’s tender and soft, rejuvenating and ravishing, the shape of the light in our dark imaginings ………
dude- as if. it was awesome. not continuing is out of the question…
yes ! please continue !!!
Oh for goodness sakes, of course you have to continue.
are you out of your every loving mind???? continue, hell yes. thanks.
Yes, yes, please Bett… oops sorry, JKS I got carried away for a minute! Do you really have to ask??? Thanks!
oh hell yea to be continued…..please…..hell i will beg if i have to……lol…..
So nice to read your recent work. I hope you continue this and the frequency of postings.
please continue
Hellooo Swimmie. Please continue this.
Whoa baby, Bette is still on Tina’s brain. Good way to end the relationship with Henry. I do hope that you will continue with this story. I would love to see you write the proper way that this mess should be fixed instead of the drivel that the so called writers keep putting on the screen.
I am glad that Henry is out of the picture, but calling someone else’sname during sex is never a good thing, I feel really bad for him. Now on with the story.
Yes please continue!!!
Please continue and make it soon.
YEHAAAA S5 and a new Swimmie story, what a fantastic Friday morning!!! Knew from the moment Tina had to tell her lover what to do, that this wasn’t Bette…very interesting beginning, please continue :o))
I love your writing! Please continue!
Don’t be coy. I actually feel rather sorry for Henry, I mean it’s not like the guy wasn’t trying.
bery interesting! please continue i want to read how Tina will planning to get Bette back
Another must-continue story! Please~
please continue. i am curious as to how Tina will win Bette back. Is there a Jodi in your story? hmm this could get very interesting!
Please continue this story; I like where your head is already. She did make a mistake, now she needs to learn how to either make up for lost time or learn to let go. (I hope they come together again though)
Oh wow. I like this! Please continue…
please do.. thanks in advance..:)
please give us about a million chapters. i so appreciate the folks who get it that all we want is b/t together.
Continue? Um, the answer would be yes, of course.
Hi JKS. You should definately continue this. I’d love to see how Tina will try to wind back Bette. I hate to say it, but poor Henry… that had to be a humiliating experince. Thank you, JKS!!!
By all means continue. ;)
Yes, please continue, Always love a B&T story, especially a getting back together one. Great start, PPS.
Are you kidding, JKS ?! Of course you absolutely have to continue this story. It’s really good ! In fact, I just can’t wait for your next chapter. Thank you again for sharing your amazing writing talent with the rest of us.
You had me at, “Oh God right there.” Yes, of course you should continue!
I guess I am glad too that they renewed for Season 5- But I think Showtime knows when they have a good thing with all this marketing of Fan fiction products, and this wonderful site, that has the best stories. But, I don’t think, IC is gonna give us B & T. I think she gets upset with all of wanting them together. Like we don’t let our selves open for any other pairing. Well, she would be right. I really enjoy your writing Just, you keep writing, I will love to keep reading. Thank you for giving us the fantasy of B & T
Bette n TIna are exactly how it should be!!! please post soon
I have been missing your stories. I read everything you post and they are fantastic although I prefer the longer ones instead of the one chappys. To have a chance of you writing of your favs again in a longer story sounds excellent. I’m all for it. Please continue!