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You (Part the Thirty-First)
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Dana woke up in the darkness, shivering from the chill of the Canadian night air. Alice pulled her closer on what had to be instinct alone, since she was dead to the world. Dana smiled at this and somehow managed to roll over so they were facing each other. As soon as she was settled, Alice’s embrace tightened again, her even breaths lulling Dana back to sleep.
It couldn’t have been more than a few hours later when Dana felt Alice’s fingers lightly caressing her face. She opened her eyes to Alice’s happy smile, and couldn’t stop herself from smiling back as Alice moved in to kiss her cheek.
"Good morning, beautiful," Alice whispered as Dana’s eyes got used to the sunlight reflecting off the snow outside and beaming through the picture window that took up the great majority of one wall.
"Hi," Dana said softly, trying to get Alice’s bedhead under some form of control and failing miserably in the attempt. Failing only made her try harder, though. Alice let this continue for a minute or two before she playfully swatted Dana’s hands away.
"Quit messing with my hair," she grumbled. "Just because yours is too short to do anything with doesn’t give you free reign to destroy mine."
"I don’t think it could be more destroyed than it already is. I’m trying to fix it."
"Did you ever stop to consider that maybe it doesn’t want to be fixed? For all you know it’s perfectly happy the way it is," Alice retorted, running her hand through Dana’s hair in retaliation. "Yours is bristly."
"It apologizes, although it’s perfectly happy being bristly and doesn’t really enjoy you insulting it."
"Dana? It’s hair. I doubt it cares."
"I don’t care either. Why are we having this discussion again?"
"Because you won’t stop messing with my hair. Leave it alone."
"Fine. It’s kind of adorable this way anyway."
"You’re just saying that because there’s nothing you can do to fix it. Anyway, it’s our last day up here, so instead of talking about hair, do you want to go get some breakfast or something?"
"I don’t know…I’m not very hungry, but I’ll go with you if you want something," Dana replied with a shrug.
"Okay…although I wish you’d eat something, you haven’t really had much of an appetite since we’ve been up here. But it’s up to you. Do you have any big plans for the day?"
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i loved this story. such great writing, and really good dialogue! you’ve really captured the greatness of alice:)
Ahhhh, this is the way it should have been, thank you and keep coming – we need to know why Dana is so tired!!
YAY – some day my neighbours will really call the moral police after these bursts of my laughter in the night!!! Well, you ramble… a lot, but that’s okey, a poet (I doubt her name will tell you something) would said: “there is no need to explain if there is a need to explain”. So keep it up! Oh and Jenny…screaming – that’s really sooo funny!!! And why is Alice complaining on bristly Dana’s hair?!… Although I’m surprised it still hasn’t grown again, it would be amazing… :)
I can’t believe I forgot to comment on this one, I read it like the first night you posted it. Anyway, I loved this as per usual. Too bad Dana not feeling well can’t be because she’s pregnant or something positive like that. Like…”Oops, Alice, I forgot to tell you I went and got inseminated while you were at work the other day. We’re having a baby!” Oh well…maybe in your fictional season 4. Can’t wait for the next update.
Awesome, this great!, Don’t worry how long at takes to post, just keep writing! Love this as always! I love Dana, she is really too cute! I also like how you are writing Jenny, freaking fantastic, she is such a freak! Looking fwd to your next post!(Oh btw read the comment you wrote in reference to you seeing Dana is season 4 with a darker tan and in the military, totally LOL’d) Enjoy your week!
Wonderful as usual. I love the way it should have been.PPS.
Yay I swear this gets better with each post. Awesome chapter MT really I mean that, it saddens me that Dana looks like she’s getting sicker, I feel bad for them both but I trust you and I know you wouldn’t put it in if it wasn’t relevant to the story. Oh I have so major stuff to talk to you about NY and the other topic we were discussing so I’ll message you soon ok. PPS xxx
Great as always, but I sooooo wanna know what’s going on with Dana. I don’t want her sick again, I want happy and healthy Dana. It’s really nice btw how you managed to re-write the stuff we all were forced to see in the last stupid season now WITH Dana being in it and making it much more enjoyable that way.