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Heaven ‘n Hel – Chpt 5
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Previously
“It’s Friday, Darling. We’ll spend the entire weekend together. We’ll talk. Alright?” Helena said reassuringly. “Everything is going to be fine, my love.”
Tilting my chin up, I brushed my lips over Hel’s. “Promise?”
“Yes,” she breathed. “I swear on my mother’s life.”
Helena kissed me ardently, slipping her hand between my legs.
“Fuck,” I whimpered.
Just then the phone rang.
“Dammit!” Helena cried out.
She rolled over and picked up the phone on her nightstand.
“Hello,” she answered. “Mummy! Where are you?”
Chapter 5
I caressed Helena’s body tenderly as she lay on her back, propped up against pillows, the phone pressed to her ear.
Occasionally, she would glance over at me, smile sweetly, and stroke my face gently.
Peggy was doing all the talking, and Helena finally rolled her eyes, raised her hand in the air, and moved her fingers up and down quickly, motioning to tell me that she was growing weary of the one-sided conversation.
Smiling, I kissed her softly and quietly on the cheek.
“Yes, Mummy, that was Bette kissing me ‘good morning.’ How ever did you hear that?” Helena asked her mother.
My eyes watched Helena’s face.
“Mummy, I did not let out a moan of ecstasy! Bette, did I moan, Darling?” Helena asked in disbelief.
“Yes, Sweetheart, I believe you did,” I laughed, before putting my mouth close to the receiver. “Good morning, Peggy!”
“Mummy says, ‘Good morning, Bette.’”
I ran my fingers over Helena’s bare breasts and tweaked her nipples gently.
“Make love to me,” I mouthed silently to Helena, as I straddled her.
Grabbing her free hand, I raised my hips and placed it palm up between my legs.
“God, you’re so wet!” Helena mouthed back, smiling.
Quickly addressing her mother, she said, “Mummy, I have to go now! I’ll see you for lunch when you arrive.”
Removing Helena’s hand, I rolled my pelvis, rubbing my moisture against her stomach.
Helena’s eyes widened, apparently from both my display of desire as well as her mother’s words, which I obviously couldn’t hear.
“Good-bye, Mummy!”
Hel abruptly cut her mother off and replaced the phone on the nightstand in complete and utter silence.
“Peggy’s flying in to L.A. today?” I inquired.
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AHHHH, i love it! fantastic post! i love the continuity of your story–i hate ‘happily ever after’ and would much rather read a fantastically written, passionate, and yummy tale of angsty ‘trying to work through it’ any day of the week. c’est bonne! pps
I must say that this story is well written and captivating, thank you and hope to read more of these wonderful chapters.
Well written and captivating is not even the half of it!! Realistic and mesmerizing !!! The conversation flows better than the shows’! Ha! I’m on the edge of my seat – please post soon! >^..^
oh no she wasn’t about to call her the “b” word, “brat”…this was fabulous…zheese, i’ve run out of adjectives…you just keep making it do what it do…dang, you’re good!!!!!!!
Have to agree with Bette on whatever she was about to say. Wow, I must be psychic! But seriously, Bette has every right to be honked that Helena hasn’t been upfront with her, especially when she IS yakking with dear old Mom. Tough shit if Helena has been afraid of Bette’s reaction. She still owed it to her to tell her how she was feeling.
Peggy is a mess…lol!! The girls have alot to discuss. I am very happy the can discuss it without insecurity about their love for one another…though I do imagine that this will test it. Hopefully, they will find a way to grow together…find a mutually beneficial solution. Very nicely done. I still wonder…if possibly…well…just maybe…I could hang out at the beach house for a bit…You know a housesitter? hehehe
Zheese sweetie you really write these two so well together but something says we’re in for some drama here aren’t we? I am with squirl I can’t believe Helena can leave Bette hanging like this, how is she supposed to be concentrated at her job not knowing what is going on with her girlfriend and haveing to wait a whole dy before finding out. Please don’t leave us hanging here too long sweetie. Thanks for posting.
I could feel the rage, the passion, the fear, as well as the love between Bette&Helena in your story. And to me that’s what make it seems so real. But like most I also wish for an happy ending between these two. Thank-you it’s a good story and I hope you will continue it.
wegosh Zheese-that happiness was short lived indeed. Little unrealistic of Helena to think that after dropping that bomb on Bette about wanting to move that the conversation could be tabled until the weekend. Bette may be really hurt and upset now but I’m sure she’ll calm down and listen to what helena has to say about why she wants to leave Cali (of course we all know it’s b/c the East Coast is the place to be). PPS!
This is absol-fucking-utely HOT! All that intensity, that angst… I was busy these few days, didn’t expect you to update your stories so soon, but yeah! Pleasant suprise! Great thing to see certainly, made my day! Do write more often! :D
awwwww what a cliffhanger! incredible! i don’t like bette and helena fighting but this story is great! PPS cos this is an outrageous cliffhanger :)))
*gasp!* Drama! These two just need to sit down and have a long talk about everything otherwise they’ll never be happy. Great chapter! :)
I have to agree with Bette. We need to talk about this now . What a bombshell to drop and then have no further discussion. Helena is areally being a bitch here.
Yikes, this could get out of hand quite quickly…
Ah, excellent chapter Zheese! Helena should talked about her problems with Bette first. Pls update soon