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I Want to Come Over, post 2
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Tina was looking forward to family night. It would just be Angelica, Bette and her. It was at those times that Tina felt the most content. She longed for them to be a family living under the same roof and nights such at this allowed her to live the fantasy one night a week.
Angelica was growing by leaps and bounds. She was talking more and she walked with confidence. Tina was ready for a second child and her sincerest wish was for Bette ‘to be a full part of that’. She knew that Bette was still involved with Rosanna and that their relationship seemed strong. What gave her hope was that they did not seem to be talking of living together. She had casually hinted that she expected that to happen soon and Bette dismissed the idea saying she needed space for herself and was not ready to settle down again.
The front door opened and her two favorite girls in the world came in.
“Mama” Angelica cried rushing to her.
“Hi Baby.” Tina scooped up their daughter kissing her fat smooth cheeks to Angelica’s delight. “How was your day?”
“Fun” Angelica declared, planting a wet kiss on Tina’s cheek as well.
Bette bent and kissed her cheek. Tina closed her eyes as the scent that was Bette enveloped her.
“Hi, Babe.” She greeted softly.
Bette smiled at her and she felt her heart melt as it always did. She stood grinning at her before she broke eye contact and went about settling Angelica in for the night.
“There’s some Cabernet on the counter that I think you’ll like” she called over her shoulder as took Angelica to her room.
Once Angie was washed up for dinner she returned to the living room. Bette was standing on her patio talking on her cell.
“Are you sure that’s a good idea honey?” Bette asked with concern.
Tina felt the swell of jealousy clutch at her heart. She was annoyed that Bette was talking to Rosanna during their family night time. It must be important she reasoned as Bette rarely even answered her phone on family night since they instituted it. Bette had declared that the time they spent this way was precious and she was not going to let work become more important than her life from now on.
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Hey, glad to see a sequel. I’m ready for a TiBette reunion.
Yeah, Bette. F*ck. See, now I’m all anxious for more chapters. I want to see how this new found revelation sits with Bette. And re: Theresa, if someone’s going to just up and let the love of their life leave without a fight, or slink away, tail between their legs… they get no sympathy from me. Great chapter, kelika, thanks.
damn girl! you sure know how to end a chapter. can’t wait to see what happens now.
A second post tonight…what a nice surprise! It is also nice to see the girls talking…do you think Bette will get a clue and figure out how much Tina wants her back. I’m not going to tell you what I want to happen…the story will probably write itself in the opposite direction.:) Great post! PPS
im glad to see a sequel tooo… FU*K lets get this party started,and soon..p.p.s.
can we get a tibette reunion this time? ;)
Interesting take on that S2 episode… what if Bette had stayed? It was hard to understand why B left that day.
I am hoping for a Tibette reunion, please?
Glad to see you back with a sequel. :)Maybe with a TiBette reunion ;)pps
Rosesanna needs to go so Bette and Tina can reunite. This story is giving me hope!
Great chapter. I am with Probie, I am ready for a Tibette reunion too. Post soon.
Very nice chapter. You covered a lot of ground very quickly. Personally I don’t think it was Bette that blew it because when Bette was leaving that day, you could see in her body language that she didn’t want to. I think it was Tina’s place to ask her to stay. Plus, when Bette was leaving, they were standing in the doorway, and wasn’t it Tina that said “Bette….this doesn’t mean….” What’s to misunderstand from that? However there was one area where I thought Bette “blew it” that day of the sonogram; after she and Tina made love Bette wanted so badly to tell Tina that she loved her…Bette’s eyes and her whole body were screaming it, but for some reason she didn’t speak the words. If there were ever a perfect opportunity or time to say it that was it. Maybe Bette thought she didn’t have the right to speak those words to Tina, who knows. I’m just glad that in your story they are actually talking and being honest with each other. Tina should just tell Bette that she loves her. Please post soon Kelika.
… Oh my gosh… I have no idea where this is going… hence, I’m completely and totally hooked.
Yeah, I got that feeling too that Bette blew it that day. I liked your sequel to this story but I was unable to continue because my brain can not wrap itself around other people with B&T. This sequel seems to be heading in a direction that I may be able to continue to read.
Let B&T work their way back together!
Yeah Bette, F**K!!! I’m with everyone else, can we have our girls back together.
OMFG!!!! Woman that was mean the way you ended it. But I so love this story!!! I am glad you are writting a sequel. Can not wait to see Bette’s come back. Thanks PPS
This is really an exciting story. Can’t wait for an update.
Hmmmmm go for it T
nice to see a sequel… hope this time it will have a Tibette ending!! Love the story
hey really glad a sequel has arrived. loved Quietest moments……please continue
Hey Kelika…. I’m really happy to see you back. Glad to know that you “burn yah free paper” and writing to make our lives better. Fantastic chapters and the drama is just great. Excellent setting for all kinds of possibilities. I’m loving it. PPS.