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    Pretty Women, Episode 12

    Story written on March 19, 2007 by justloveB+T.
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    We all deserve that chance, that one moment in time… But what if it’s shattered before you get a chance to grasp whats happening? A Bette and Tina Beginning, based on the movie ‘Pretty Woman’

     

    * * * * * * * * *Music starts playing, Roy Orbison’s ‘Pretty woman’* * * * * * * * * *

     

    Words start rolling on the screen, letter by letter, and they form the following:

     

     

    * * * * * * * * * * * * * *   TINA KENNARD * * * * * * * * * * * * * *

     

     * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *& * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *

     

      * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * BETTE PORTER * * * * * * * * * * * * * *

     

     

     * * * * * * * * * * * * *Star in the JLBT production * * * * * * * * * * * *

     

     

    * * * * * * * * * * * *PRETTY WOMEN * * * * * * * * * * * * *

     

    **************Last time on the JLBT production PRETTY WOMEN: ****************

     

    We see a reshot of Tina telling Bette she would love to be her beck-and-call-girl, and of Bette stating she has no desire for romance this week, then we see them foolinf around and as the blonde states she would have stayed for less money then Bette offered her, the brunette answers:’I would have paid you 6’

     

     

     

    # the scene  fades away and we see the HOLLYWOOD sign, before

    the camera turns and we see Tina, ashtonished taking in her surroundings before jumping on the bed and grabbing her cellphone #

     

    The song: ‘One moment in time’  by Whitney Houston starts playing.
     

     

     

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    Pretty Women, Episode 12

      

      

    Dialing the number of her best friend, Tina Kennard allowed her upper body to fall back on the soft bed, and as the silk surrounded her, so did a warm, unfamiliair feeling…

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    4. And I still think Bette’s a dipshit for not suggesting Tina go find something else to wear. lol Yes, I know how the story goes, but seriously, people are assholes and Bette should’ve thought of that. I was actually thinking of this story this morning while watching something about chick flicks. lol PPS!

    8. Goodie, I love this story. Those mean ladies will get their due all in good time. Wait till Bette Porter gets a hold of them. You really do feel bad for Tina and only wish that her life will get better. Yoda knows that Ms. Tina is falling for this unknown lady. What would be nice is when these two get together that Jamey comes to live with his mother and then gains another mother in the process.

    9. I think u did it JUSTICE!!! Can’t wait for the next post. Quite sure Bette’s reaction is going to be priceless. I think Tina needs a friend in the big bad Hollywood land and to show those snubs a thing or two. When u work on commission everybody is important despite the appearance. PLEASE POST SOOOON!!!

    10. No to the shoulder. Going to have surgery. Maybe after COUPLE of I CAN JUMP SOMEONES BONES. hE (THE DR) said it would take a yr ,so watch out in Aug I should be well Gee I hope so Tired of the pain,and the sling,and using my left arm/ I been in the hospital for about 5 days. that sucks. So glad you did post. I dilike uppity people. Bet they put there pants on the same as you and I one leg at a time. Tina didnt need to be treated that way. Thanks my young friend

    14. Aww poor Tina, my heartbreak for Tina, just want to kick those mean people. Just when you go to store you wear something not expensive or nice they will look at you like you a poor or not have money to come to buy clothes or thing. Anyway wait until Bette find out, she gonna kick those peoples ass. OK post soon please and a little longer please, thanks!

    17. This was so sad! i want kick those persons!!! how they dare to judge Tina? well there are persons that always judge everybody without reason but Tina won’t be to be afraid that Bette will see her in the same way because it won’t happen

    19. Come on, mate, you know you’ll always find me in the comments! Need I state again how amazing I think this is? Yes? Oh, well, I think it’s great. ;) *hugs* Better be back this way soon, or else! ;)

    20. Hey pal! good to have you back! I just came back from my vacations and I was afraid I had missed your posts, have to check that anyway. Writer’s block? doesn’t seem so, keep the updates coming! Loved the movie and love your approach of it.

    24. Oh my… how my heart breaks seeing Tina like that :( This is more intense than watching the movie… gosh… and don’t let anybody harsh words or stares bringing her down… her mom!! Gosh, what mother is that to call her daughter ‘good-for-nothing white trash’… that’s really really mean… ugh…

    25. Wow girl, you’ve captured these feelings very accurate, I still can remember and feel these cold stares from those shop ladies when I visited their shops back in the sixties. Me standing there, long hair, peace sign painted on my forehead, long dress, barefoot and asking for a dress to go to the marriage anniversary of my parents. They refused me of course I didn’t expect anyhting else. Dit was weer een geweldig hoofdstuk, elke keer denk ik dat kan ze niet overtreffen en dan slaag je er toch in om steeds weer iets toe te voegen dat net iets beter is dan het vorige. Ik wou dat ik eens een paar minuutjes in je hoofd kon kijken…er moet veel schoonheid wonen daar. Thanks for making my day bright.

    26. Awww…. So sad!!!! Even though I knew it was coming, i’m still on the verge of tears… That last sentence is as magnificent as it is cruel! Broke my heart… But I know my dear Captain will make it all better!!! At least, Bette will! Looking forward to that! Mission accomplished, dear J, don’t you worry, it’s just perfect! The effect you were so concerned about is there, trust me! Thanks a lot and please post soon! Hugs!

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