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Say It Like You Mean It
by: speed_racer
“Where are they going?” Alice asked getting up out of her seat.
“Not my office. Not my office. Not my office,” Kit chanted.
“You really need to ask that, Alice?” Shane asked taking a sip of her beer.
“Well shit,” Alice grumbled. “I hope they remember to make my videotape,” Alice added as they watched the two women head out with Bette leading Helena by the hand.
“My car is over here. It won’t take but a few minutes to get to Le Montrose,” Bette said as soon as they stepped into the cool night air.
“What?” Helena asked shaking her head. “We’ll take my car. And we’re going to L ’Ermitage,” Helena countered pausing beside a shiny black monstrosity of an SUV.
Bette ran an agitated hand through her hair. She glanced around the crowded parking lot searching for her car. She wasn’t in the mood to have an argument with Helena. In fact she didn’t really want to hear Helena’s voice unless it was screaming her name while she fucked her.
“No,” she spat through gritted teeth. “We’re going to take my car. And I’m not fucking going to Beverly Hills.”
“My car is more expensive, Bette. I won’t leave it here to be vandalized.”
“We’re not in the fucking ghetto, Helena. Let’s just get the fucking car.”
“No.”
“Look, Kit will make sure nothing happens to it, okay? Are you fucking satisfied?”
“Not even bloody close,” Helena growled reaching out and grabbing Bette by the arm and pulling her into her body.
“We need to leave,” Bette muttered her voice deep and low. “Now.”
Helena nodded even as she spun them and pressed Bette back against the door of the SUV and covered Bette’s mouth with her own.
Helena’s hand slid against the front of Bette’s black pants down to the crotch until she was cupping Bette’s sex.
"Do you want it, Bette? Just say it," Helena said hoarsely as she slid her mouth back against Bette’s, her tongue hungrily exploring Bette’s mouth.
Bette moaned into Helena’s mouth as Helena’s hand pressed harder against her and she began to rotate her hips for more pressure against her clit. More. She needed more.
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Speed Racer, I only meant guilty pleasure in the best of ways!! The erotic tension between these two alphas was just simmering near the surface the last couple of posts and the explosion here was/were the climax(es) worth waiting for! I can tell I’m not alone when I say I’d love to see you take this “frienemy” to the next level. You’ve done a terrific job portraying that “pelvic magnetism” that seems to exist between these two. Also enjoyed “Two Step”, but the intensity here is compelling. Now I’m going back to the beginning of the series and read again. Thanks for taking the time to share your stories!
I HAVE TO COMMENT AGAIN…and apparantly yell as i do…you HAVE to take the frienemy thing to the next level, because you write it so frikin frakin well! i just copped out and skipped all of the animosity but you write the characters in such fantasmo ways!pps pps pps:)
OMG HOT!The more I read about these two gettin it on, the more, Im eager to see it really happen, but I’d like Helena S2, nothing like two alpha’s *faint*
all i have to say is yes, yes, yes, yes, yes….and nooooo, please say this isn’t the end…that was totally too hot to be the end….damnnnnnnn!!
Jesus, Speed_Racer… I must say, I’m rather a fan of Bette’s fantasies, too. That was too hot for a mid-afternoon read… Best mates? I wouldn’t mind that. Just amazing. I mean, it must have been; you had ME reading Belena! ;)
Freakin’ yes!! Unbelievable. Soooo good. I’ve got no complaints. Nope. Nuh uh. Not a one. That was so totally worth the wait. Is there gonna be more to this story? I certainly hope so. It’s too damn good to end. Freakin’ wow.
More than worth the wait. Smoking hot and dramatically effective too. And you have kind of set up a story for maybe a couple of years later…
“We’ll keep the shoes on. I fucking love these shoes…” Fuck that was so unbelievably HOT that I’ve trouble typing… “Just you wait, Bette” “Just you wait” (You didn’t happen to watch My Fair Lady did you? What’s going to happen? God, I can’t imagine, it’s going to be so good. :) Off to take a cold shower… -GRIN- I’ll be waiting!
That was scary hot. I’m so glad they survived it. I’ve read some hot fics and I can tell you yours is right up there with the best of them. I’m with Alice on this one bring out the video camera, somethings need to be preserved. Just excellent,it was well worth the wait.
Explicit writing doesn’t come easy to you? Was that a joke? That was beyond hot. It’s weird that Bette still dislikes Helena even after that. Any sane person would have just stayed in bed with Helena! Now if you’ll excuse me, a cold shower is in order.
This was amazing. Well worth the wait if you ask me. I can imagine though that it was a tough chapter for you to write but it was very good. I look forward to your next posting.
Oh my!!. Was that HOT or what?…..Heavy breathing here too. And after that Bette still hates her. Now I’ll have to go read them all again to see how the got to thid point of ripping each others clothes off. Poor me.Ok you are off the hook on this story for a minute what about “Before the fall”. We’ve got to know how they resolve. ;-)
oh my GOD, that was beyond amazing. holy FU*&&^%$$. ok, so it was hot, yes, i mean incredibly hot. but also incredibly well written–i love how you’ve captured their alpha’ness. i would also love to see you continue this story!!! any chance of that? any at all? pleeeeease?
sizzling hot! it was worth the wait! PPS! Speedy, you rock!
that was bloody hott….intense as ….words r lost at the moment. if all ur chapters of this story r like this u have found a devoted fan. off to take a really long and cold shower…lol
I gotta say I didn’t intend for Bette to still dislike Helena at the end of this, but… It’s those damn monkeys I tell you, lol. No really sex can’t beat down Bette’s pride. Nope. And Bette’s pride was ripped to pieces by Helena so at this point the sex was mind blowing, but Bette’s pride is still smarting. There’s still Tina for her. She can’t see Helena as anything other than a frienemy I suppose. Which Killermuse you’ve inspired me, I wrote That Same Old Two-Step and hadn’t thought to connect it with Say It, and now low and behold it will be placed in the Say It universe. A couple years later, halfofone thanks for that little input. Glad everyone liked this. Thanks for all the kind comments.
FANTASTIC…BRUTALLY INTENSE!!! I am amazed all around. Clever writing and soooooo fucking HOT!!!! I love it! 8D
hot damn woman, that was one of the sexiest posts i have ever read!!!!!!!!there is nothing like two alphas going at it, luved it luved it, luved, really want some more of it!!!!!!!!!great job!!
So that’s how it happened! They went at it on the car, in the car, on the wall, in the bed and in the hotel. I guess that much sex is enough to make anyone become cordial (LOL). That was beyond HO and I’m sad to see it end but what do they say……all good things…. Great job sppedracer!