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One Day Soon
One Day Soon – Part One
Brooklyn, New York, 2007
My toes curl into the soft grains of sand. It’s been a long time since I sat alone like this on a deserted beach, watching the waves as they break against the shoreline, waiting for the sun to arrive and signal the start of another new day.
The sound of the water calms me, I don’t know why I’m here, I hailed a cab and said to just drive, hoping I would see a place that would take me closer to her, closer to the memories we’ve shared.
An empty beach; I saw a runner in the distance a short while ago, he reminded me of myself, pounding hard against the wet solid sand with every pace taking him nearer and nearer to some kind of resolution.
I never went running until she left. My mind wonders why that is, or why that was; did I start because I missed the smell of her each time she returned, breathless and animated, her mind seemingly clear, or is it just that I felt someone in the house ought to continue running.
She would burst right through the door and come straight in search of me, grabbing water from the fridge on her way. If I lay in bed still, she would tease me, threatening me with droplets of the ice-cold water.
Her face looking down on me continues to haunt me, jewelled with a million tiny beads of perspiration, her hair matted and her eyes wide, accompanied by an adoring smile as she grinned, hoping to either entice me from our bed or have me entice her back into it.
I push my toes deeper into the cool damp sand, chilled by that memory. Today we are friends, parents and confidants, she’s the reason I’m here; she’s the reason I’m sat on an abandoned strip of coastline in Brooklyn at 5am. She’s the reason I’m here geographically and she’s the reason I’m here mentally, stuck in a place of utmost confusion.
When we were together we were sensational, brilliant, earth-shattering. I loved her more then than I loved the air which my enamoured lungs required to survive. I love her still but that love has changed, she taught me so many things; some which I’d never wish to forget and some that I long to erase. Through her I learnt what it truly means to hurt, to be hurt and to be the one who injures and wounds. I’ve left scars on her heart; I can see them every time I look in her eyes.
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(53 votes, average: 3.75 out of 5)
Please continue. I enjoy these stories where they are physically separated but joined by common thought.
love how powerful this piece is. everything is very vivid. thanks and can’t wait for the next one.
Hell yes continue…I mean..please…please do continue:)
This is good and please continue soon, thanks!
This is a great start. I like how there thoughts are mirrored. Please continue.
Please please PLEASE continue. You write so well, and your affection for B&T is so obvious in both this story and in Summer Vacation. Could someone arrange to forward a copy of this B&T treatment to IC as she sits down to write Season 5?
Yes there hearts are reaching all around the world by the seas and oceans or across the land. They are trying to beat as one again. Please continue.
wonderful start – continue please and carry us into this future please!
Good start! the only thing I thought was ewww, sitting on the beach in Brooklyn!I know it’s clean but Ny’s shorelines are places I would not visit.
Yes amazing please continue
Very good. Please continue!
powerful, sweetheart! powerful! soooonnnn, pretty please :)!
yes, please and get them back together since Ilene failed
Yes, please continue. Any Tibette moment is appreciated!
“I can hear how she needs me; it terrifies me. It scares me so much to think that we’re slowly making out way back to each other. I love her, but the thought of being with her again makes me tremble and quake. I keep on releasing her, pushing her to break free and all she does is find her way back, into my arms and into my heart.”… That’s one of the most perfect truths about Tibette!!! Could be their anthem!… Sofa, continuing shouldn’t even be a question, it’s like Tibette love… this unstoppable force!!! I love this beginning, but again, I love the way you write B&T! The style is slightly different from SV but not less beautiful and right! As a matter of fact, that’s how I’d (wish and) expect Season 5 to unfold… Please take us on this journey, because one surely cannot trust IC these days, and an IC-free few months certainly won’t hurt anyone!!! Your writing is amazing, Sofa, thanks a lot! ;)
get that questionmark outta there ASAP, younglady! This is magnificent! I thik you have caught the essence of Tina’s fear so clearly! The reason why she never took that chance that was offered to her in the deep brown eyes in epi 411 ‘you would?’… She doesn’t feel she will be enough for Bette! Wowwowwow! This is simply amazing! PPS! lovely!
please continue ! hope you post soon
beautifully written.totally captivatin.Pls do continue.
yeah! please continue :-)
Of course you should continue!
Sofa, the writing in this post is just excellent. Of course you’ll have to continue. Post soon, please.
WOW!!! YEs please continue!!!! Thanks you PPS
I love it…
Beautifully written, i love it