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I Wnat to Come Over, Post 16
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“Good evening Ms. Porter.” Denise bowed as she handed Bette into the Bentley. Her uniform as smart and crisp as if it were early morning rather than early evening.
“Good evening, Denise.” Bette returned. “How is your nephew?”
“He’s good he made the cut for the US Olympic swim team. He is real excited and so is the rest of the family.”
“That’s wonderful” Bette smiled and Denise bowed her head in embarrassment at the smile that the brunette graced her with. Denise felt the flush on her cheeks and hurried to close the door. She hustled to the drivers seat and pulled out. As she drove she thought to herself that Ms. Bette was one fine woman and she liked her a lot. She liked Ms. Theresa too but Ms. Bette was fast replacing her as her first choice for Ms. Rosanna.
Ms. Theresa and Ms. Rosanna loved each other and she had hoped for years that they would be together but there were too many sad days with the two of them. The last ten months that Ms. Rosanna had been seeing Ms. Bette she smiled more, she laughed more and was mostly at peace. Ms. Bette was good for Ms. Rosanna and no matter what Denise wanted Ms. Rosanna to be happy.
Denise pulled into the drive and before she could reach the door Ms. Bette had gotten out and was walking toward the house. “See you later.” She called casually and headed to the front door which was open beyond the screen door. The gentle sway of hips held her attention until she disappeared inside. Denise sighed again wishing in vain that Ms. Rosanna and now Ms. Bette would consider their safety more. She pulled the car into the garage and headed to her cottage to await instructions.
Bette walked into softly playing sultry jazz. She loved this rendition of “You Send Me” by Roy Ayers. This had been playing one of the first times that she and Rosanna had made love. Made love, shit, she loved Rosanna no question, made love oh my God the thought pulled her up short. Was she in love, in love with two women? She had imagined that the only woman she would ever fall in love with was Tina. She had never been in love with any of her partners before Tina. At first I thought it was infatuation…but oh it’s lasted so long now… I find myself wanting to marry you and take you home…Darling you send me, send me honest you do…
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no you didn’t leave off there??? OMG….. you are going to post soon right?
Hey, don’t let Ro give up. I know she wants Bette’s happiness, but that can be with her. Maybe, TiBette’s time has come an gone just like T&R’s.
wha-wha-wha-wha-what??Okay, I’m breathless now. The battle is too hot to just die now, I mean….that’d be torture! LOL…okay, so torture is delicious when done right. And this cliffy is killing me. PPS! I’m loving it still!.
Dang it I am always leaving comments on one chapter before realizing that there is another one posted. I do have a comment to make though. I find it odd that Bette is with someone who was dating a married woman. Bette believes strongly in monogamy and yet Ro was with Theresa even though she was married.
Cliff-hanger! If a Bette-Tina reunion is in the cards, it would be more satisfying if Bette returned to Tina because Tina was her first choice, not because Tina was her next-best option after Ro dumps her. But then Bette is pretty dim when it comes to understanding her own feelings. Will Ro somehow make her realize that Tina is in fact her true love? I’m definitely staying tuned!
I can’t believe that you left us hanging. Bette has the winning hand, she can pick and choose whom she wants to be with. PPS thanks
please post again soon…
What is with you authors tonight…all this tease and taunting that your doing to us faithful readers….pppps
Oh man Kel not nice to leave us like this and you killing us here my friend lol. I know that everyone wanted B&R together but I just hope you will give T&B a second chance to have the love again, is sad not to see them together. Well about Ro, she should give Kate or Theresa a chance to see how’s thing go. Anyway post soon please, thanks!!!!!!!!!
Ok, I feel badly for Ro, really I do… but… well… By now I know myself well enough to know that I will ALWAYS be cheering ‘Tibette!’ Still don’t think that Ro should give up without a fight though… a nice, long, bloody one. ;) Thanks! (Can’t believe I just now caught up… wow, did I ever fall behind!)
Oh my, is Ro letting Bette go? Hurray for Tina, can’t wait for the next chapter!
Miss her??? wtf??? is she breaking up with Bette??? not that I mind, I can’t see anyone with Bette other than Tina and surprisingly sometimes Helena. PPS
Oh, snap! See, I was about at the point there where I was like, “Tina who?” cos I was all caught up in the heat of the moment… then Rosanna dropped that bomb. Now, I don’t view that as Ro giving up so much as her choosing Theresa. What’s 6 months to wait, when she’s facing a lifetime together with her soul-mate? And if that’s the case, then we all know where Bette’s going… I know Rosanna may feel like her and Bette are facing too many people warring for their hearts, but they could make it anyway, Terminator Tina or no… I don’t know. I’ve grown pretty fond of Ro, despite my TiBetting self, and want to see her happy… and Theresa is probably it. And still, I ask: what about Kay? Thanks for the double update, kelika. More please!
1. my eyes, my eyes…again LOL…2. Ro is playing dirty ;)
I love the way you’re writing this story. I just love Bette.
I just don’t see how Tina is going to compete…seems like Rosanna’s bed/floor has the advantage. I’ll give you your well deserved stars, but I don’t think my heart can take much more of this!
whoa whoa whoa..hold up wait a min…what do u mean am gonna miss u???how can u stop there that is so unfair……..u ARE REALLY MEAN!!!!
O.M.F.G.! you did not do what i think y did you lost the other pages.lol sweet torture lady.and yes please just follow your heart even though im a tibetter for life.and you better find those lost pages and soon?
While everyone is assuming that Ro is just simply giving up on Bette or bravely giving up on her, I think that she (Ro) is also comming to a realization about herself and Theresa. Yes they are hot here, but longivity is more than about sex.