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I Want to Come Over, post 24
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The less than two hour drive down the coast to Santa Barbara was uneventful. Both women were aware that they had not traveled together since they had been a couple. The ease with which they negotiated car space returned. Bette dropped the top and they enjoyed the sun and ocean views. Bette packed a picnic hamper in case they were moved to stop along the way. They were in no particular hurry and their reservations were secure.
When they passed Marina del Rey, Tina looked at Bette puzzled. Bette explained that she had been given a comp for the Four Seasons at Santa Barbara so why not take advantage of it. Tina grinned she liked the impulsive side of Bette that she had not seen in some time.
They stopped at a particularly beautiful overlook of the ocean and stretched their legs. They wound up walking down to the beach and having a snack.
“This is nice.” Tina glanced at Bette before returning her gaze to the water.
“It’s been a long time that we have spent time alone together. I’d forgotten how much I just like being in your presence.”
Tina blushed slightly at the compliment. Bette used to say that a lot to her when they first got together. Tina was a little surprised at the openness but appreciated it. The family night discussions covered a lot of ground but other than the one occasion where Bette had opted for friendship rather than a deeper relationship they did not talk about their feelings for one another.
“I seem to recall that you liked being in a lot more than my presence.” Tina smirked.
Bette’s head jerked up at the innuendo. “True.” She admitted with a smile. “I seem to recall that you liked that as well.”
“Actually I loved it.” Tina confirmed.
“So when did you stop liking and loving my touch?”
“I don’t know if I would put it that way. I think a better way to phrase it would be there came a point where I could no longer let you touch me and maintain my dignity.”
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Sounds like quite the plan Tina has there. No messing about, straight to the point. A woman of action, is Ms Kennard. Question is, is Bette ready? Heck, am *I* ready? Guess we’ll find out! Great chapter, kelika, thanks. (More soon please!)
Damn, ft’s about time and long overdue. Looking forward to the next post.
I think the whole idea of Bette and Tina going away for a few days together was to see if they could become a couple again. imho, this includes a lot of talking and a whole lot of loving. I do not believe Tina is making Bette cheat. Bette told Rosanna she and Tina were going away and Rosanna knows Bette is trying to figure out who she wants to be with…does this mean she and Tina should go away for the weekend only to develop good verbal communication skills and reserve the love making just for Rosanna? I think not!!! If Tina wants her woman, she had better fight for her with everything she’s got. FIGHT ON, TINA!!!
Love this side of Tina!! And you’re right, who wouldn’t want to be with Bette??? Have i ever told you that you’re a excellent writer!
You go Tina, even though you really messed up, let her know who’s in charge. I don’t think its a question of whether or not Tina and Bette will get back together, its more of a question can they get beyond the fears, doubts, and pain, and let the love they have for each take its rightful place. I know your running, but that was a weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee bit short.
lETS GET THIS WORKED OUT AND SOON. BETTE CAN BE DENSE SOME TIME. SHOW ME A SMART PERSON AND IT TAKES THEM LONGER TO GET THINGs THROUGH THEIR HEAD/ THANKS
oh this is just too damn good! lol. I too like the bold Tina….but and there’s the but…it’s not over yet 8D
“Bette we are going to make love today.” Well, that’s an offer Bette can’t refuse. Or is it? I can’t wait to see how this plays out.
Probie…Bette isn’t in an exclusive relationship with Rosanna. For now they are taking a break to allow Bette to resolve her feelings and reality with Tina. Should TiBette not reunite she is free to pursue things with Rosanna again. Bette is not cheating on Rosanna. I see Tina as being the one to woo Bette back. Though I can understand that Tina thinks they need to reconnect physically and sexually she needs to determine if Bette wants this too. Again I think its the how, not the what Tina is pushing here. I am a TiBetter, so let’s see where you take them, thanks.
Oh no. I’ve got my worry beads out. “RoBette, RoBette, RoBette……”
Tina definitely is out to win this one. Hope everything goes well. i really want them together, though i know that Bette already has special feelings for Rosanna.
This is so good and love Tibette!
I have mixed feelings about this. I’m sure Bette and Tina with be great sexually, but will it cloud their judgement. In addition, Bette is still in a relationship with Ro, does she have to sleep with Tina to see if they can make it. Sex has never been there problem, communication has. I know Tina wants Bette back, but to make her cheat is just more of Tina manipulating the relationship.
oh crikie what a place to stop!! i think it’s too soon, B’s heart is still with Ro, so it maybe kinda hard to put her total self with T and it seems as T is pushing her luck a tad. PPS
How can you just leave it at that?! I like this bolder side of Tina. Bette is the type of person who needs someone to handle her every now and then, and reign her in when needbe. I honestly don’t think Ro is the woman to ground Bette. She allows her to be a “free spirit” when in reality, I think Bette needs someone she can crash into. This new Tina could very well be that person.