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I Want to Come Over, Post 31
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“Why do you need me to fight? Why wasn’t loving and wanting you enough?”
“If it was we wouldn’t be in this ridiculous place now would we? You never would have turned to another. Did I hurt you more than you said before? I did come to my senses after all and we did create two children with Marcus’ sperm.”
“We created one you created the other without me.”
“What?”
“I was not a part of Angelica’s conception; it was months before you even told me that she was expected. I had to fight to be her mother.”
“It’s a fight you won hands down and then once you won the battle you fucked off.”
“Fucked up.” Bette challenged.
“Fucked off.” Tina repeated. “I saw it then and I ignored it. When I told you I wanted to have our baby at home and for us to be a family you looked stunned not happy. I wanted it so much I pretended I didn’t see that but I did. I tried to put it off on Melvin’s death and all the other stuff going on at the time. Then you lost your job and seemed totally unconcerned. We had a baby who was solely dependent on us. I needed you to step up and you didn’t. Is it really any wonder that I was afraid to be with you again?”
Bette rubbed her forehead. Her mind was spinning. She had been so wrapped up in her own feelings of loss and despair that she did not stop to consider how Tina would view the place she was in.
“You’re right. I fucked off and I didn’t know it. I didn’t stop to think how it all looked to you. Hearing it now I can see what you are saying. Tina I was so lost. I don’t think I have felt that lost since…I don’t know when.”
“Since when Bette?” Tina pressed.
“Since I lost my mother.”
“Your mother?” Bette never talked about her mother ever.
“Becoming a mother changed me. It scared the shit out of me. I became so obsessed with not losing her that I lost sight of everything else. I actually loved being at home with her. I still do.” Bette admitted. “You became this monster who could only think about every dime we had or that I spent. You couldn’t cut me any slack. I provided for us always and I would have done it again. I never beat you up about money Tina and your loss of faith in me hurt.”
“Perhaps I could have if I had any clue as to what was going on.” Tina shot back.
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the truth is omin out slowly but its finally comin…thxs for the bone..p.p.s.
Well all you had to do was stop b***ching Tina and ask what was going on with Bette. Now you have another chance, ask the right questions and stop with all the yelling –you’re giving me a headache!!!
Thanks for the quick post. I am bringing in facts from the show into fanfic, not fair to you, write on.
I agree with Probie, Tina needs to calm down and talk ration with Bette. I understand that she is pissed but she needs to be calm about it. Please continue!
Yah yah K!!!! That’s right Tina about time ‘the Bette’ dealt with losing mommy…face the loss…and love T for T not as a mommy substitute who let you down when she actually got frickin angry when you fucked Candace…wake up Bette…T had a right to her anger, she wasn’t the one who fucked off when the going got hard nor did she miss the handle when someone needed to earn an income…baby, breastfeeding and all she stepped up to the plate and made the money…that lady’s got guts, hutzpah or kaha (as we say in my language)…yes, she left after the affair, yes she left when Bette fooled around with buddhism instead of taking a job, any job to pay the bills and so would I…Bette is gorgeous BUT!!!! sometimes such a dumbass…and I love her as much as I love Tina…lmao…what a rave…what a great story K.
I like this so much. Sparks flying. Both have made good points and both have missed the mark. But it’s their reality. So PPS.
i love this story and how they are finally honestly communicating with each other…when emotions are involved its kind of hard to be calm all the time..i think there doing an excellent job at getting to the root of the problem…i really enjoy the way B&T are together- they’re honest and real….thank you for posting!!
This might be best… they fight it all out, get it out in the open, work through it.
They need to calm down and Im with heythere and let see more please, thanks!
Finally some talking/ screaming/ understanding between the 2 and hopefully once they finally deal with all the sh*t from the past, they will finally start building a future together.
Hi Kelika, More angst and revalations between Bette and Tina. It is great that they are now both in a place where they are trying to sort out the mistakes of the past. How these will affect them future is something that only they and time can decide. This communication is key to their survival as a couple and their future together. Can’t wait until you post more of this entertaining tale. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
This keeps getting better and better! Thanks, kelika.
Short but intense, and they’ve still not covered everything… Bette should have fought for her too. Maybe it was too hard for Bette to believe when she was in the middle of hurting, but again, it goes down to their lack of communication… they’re making headway though. Great update, kelika, thanks.
Go Tina and get your woman, hard discussing ahead but they sooo need it and they both need to really listen to the other PPPPPPPS
OMG K, this story just keep getting BETTER and BETTER as you peal away their layer of defense and hurt to get to their hearts. Both B&T and the author has done some good work here :o).
WOW!!!! THAT WAS HOT!!!! This just kepps getting BETTER. I am so loving this. B&T talking the way they should have been all along. Thanks PPS
I hear whips crackin’ Well, it is on now. Woot it’s hot!
Good to see they have the talk! Always good to see you post!! Great writing K.