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Sharpen Up The Knives 12
Sharpen
Up
The
Knives 12
Remember where you came from, remember what you are……
Ch 22
Her beauty trapped me.
My stupidity. My frailty, my unwillingness to trust or to feel…… and there she was. I didn’t question, I didn’t even suspect for a moment that she might have been part of my missing time. I passed out…in a restaurant and that is where I had to have been intercepted. Didn’t stop to check the date….didn’t do the most simple of things. Signs all over me…..my stupidity…..
Rats in the sewer. What is it with me and sewer’s?
Water that is green and slimy. The pain in my head is grinding and dull. I stop every now and then to catch my breath. A set of lights flash in the darkness behind me. I turn a corner and I wait. I hold my breath, my hands on the slick wall when the barrel of my chaser peeks thru.
A Famas…G2…..nice.
I grab the barrel to my chasers surprise. With my knife I hold it to his throat. He freezes in his place. I pull him in toward me. Pressure of the blade and he hands me the weapon. I decline and motion for him to place it on the ground. He does slowly. He comes up and meets my gaze, green eyes much like mine. I grab him and pull him close. The blade back on his throat.
“Why did you give up so easy?” I whisper.
‘This…..this…is my first time on one of these…I never hunted one of our own……..I don’t want to die….please….I know you…..don’t kill me….please…..’
“What do you mean you know me…?”
This ought to be fun.
“We where in the same…..on the same jump detail……we met in Bosnia…..”
“So…’
“I don’t want to die…..this isn’t what I signed up for….”
“Interesting……ok….where did the orders come from?”
“They came from The Mother……we where sent to bring you in…….”
“Stop talking………….they want me alive?”
“They made it our top priority…..you killed three of our units with the trip wires……please don’t kill me……”
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(14 votes, average: 4.71 out of 5)
this story continues to be super duper cool. I love it. It blows my mind and then I can’t think straight. which is good. Also, props to you NewDawn: you inspired a whole new kind of writing in me! for serious! I hope to hell that you publish sci fi for a living!
Kralho.. Really great.
Shane’s amnesia & search for the truth of who’s poisoned her remind me of that movie D.O.A. w/ Dennis Quaid & Meg Ryan. Good flick & this is a great story.
Wow I can’t believe there is only one more update to this. Just when I think I’m starting to figure it out you throw in another twist…missing for three years!?! I can’t wait to see how this all comes together. I guess I’ll just wait patiently for you to blow my mind once again!
Wew… So good.
man!!!! I’ve been out for I while but i back missy!!! lol man this is just…. i don’t have words left to describe what I feel lol but I’m so into this story… sometimes I’m reading it and I cant help but think this is some part I never red of the never ending story of yours lol this is just crazy exiting fun and confusing…. and that’s what makes it soooo cool… I still think your crazy lol cause this story is crazyyyyyyyyyyy but so much fun…. sometimes I read it 2 to 3 times cause there are some lines there I just love but anyways I’m back baby!! And… This is just great!!! Please continue with the great work… but then again I don’t have to ask do i? lol
To be concluded………? =(