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Late Night Visitors (Time of Day 25)
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Bette turned her head to see the shapes coming from the bushes, over into her property. “Hi Shane, Paige.”
“Hey Bette.” Shane held out a beer. “I hope you don’t mind.”
Bette took hold of the bottle, giving Shane a small smile.
“We saw your car out front but the house had a couple lights on. I thought you were out of town this weekend, so we just thought we’d stop over, make sure all was good.”
“That’s nice of you.” Bette motioned towards the available seating. “Pull up a chair.”
Shane sat back on the chaise next to the one Bette was on, pulling her legs in tight. Paige took a seat on the same chaise, leaning a little against Shane’s legs.
“I was out of town, but I came back.”
“Did Jodi come with you?”
Bette turned sharply towards Paige. “What? Why?”
“Well, when I was at The Planet earlier, with Tina,” she turned to Shane, “that was before you guys got there, I thought I saw Jodi. But, then I thought that’d be weird, right, since Jodi was in New York.”
“I know she’s in town,” Bette acknowledged, “but I’m not sure where she’s been most of the time.”
“I thought things were going well between you guys,” Shane interjected.
As always, Shane’s words were spoken in a supportive manner. Her friend’s ability to be a friend, regardless, was something that Bette had always greatly appreciated about the younger woman. “I… well… things change.”
“I’m sorry,” Shane added, her voice quiet. Paige nodded in agreement. “I really thought you had a shot, with the sign and all.”
“We did have a shot. I ended it.” With that, Bette took a long draw from the bottle.
Shane put her hand on Paige’s and gave a small squeeze.
“You know, if you want to be alone…” Paige started.
“Really, I’m glad you’re here,” Bette said, giving the pair an odd smile. “Enough about my life. Did you guys do anything interesting today?”
“Work,” Shane said with a shrug. “Then we met Tina for lunch at The Planet.”
“And how was that?” Bette tried not to seem overly interested.
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Damn right Tina’s not generic.
okay, now the making up part. can’t wait.
Well written and a pleasure to read. Thank you!
Bette might want to invest in a pair kneepads for the extended crawl/grovel she’s going to need to perform. She might even have to walk on hot coals after that. Schmuck.
I think the next couple of chapters are going to get even better. I just hope Tina will let Bette back into her life. Bette better come up with something real big and heart felt to win Tina back. I just love it PPVS
No more signs! Unless it’s skywriting saying “Tina, I’ve been an ass. Please forgive me and take me back. I love you body and soul. Bette”
I don’t want Tina to make it to easy for Bette. She needs to sweat a little.I hope Tina gives Jodi a piece of her mind.
Bette better really grovel. She acted like a child. Glad she finally got a clue. Now, if only a sign would fall on Jodi.. things could really be looking up.
Pseud, I shuld always trust that you know what you are doing, I just hate to see Bette be such an ass but I guess donkeys make for good drama. I love the way you have your characters talk to one another – the dialogue always feels as if I am right there with them. thanks so much.
god i love this story… next chapter please?!!.x.x.
I really enjoy how your mind works and reading your writing!
Three posts in 24 hours! I’ve been spoiled! I want more! Argghhh…..!!!!! …Thanks for this story. Wish fulfillment, it is!
Bette better makes up to Tina with a grand gesture! Can’t wait for the next post, pps.
Yes, Bette’s been an ass. It’s fixable, I guess, but she’s got to eat a generous helping of dung pie first. But at the root of it all, is that she doesn’t trust Tina enough. That’s a whole other pile she has to own and shovel out. And no, generic isn’t going to cut it for an apologetic gesture. Premium brand name all the way. In the meantime, Bette needs to get her damned locks changed. Great update, pseud. I’m getting spoiled with the frequent posting, but more when you can please. Cheers
tina’s worth everything and more…i’m okay if you’re taking it slow as long as we get a happy tibette couple in the end…and bette is slowly learning, so there’s still hope
It’s a good thing when you realize what an ass you have been…unfortunately, too many people in this world do not realize it…I am glad Bette sees it! Now, what will she do to make things better, I always did enjoy the groveling Bette of Season 2…can’t wait to see what hoops you have her jump through!!! And I also hope that Tina is not to quick to forgive!!!
I wonder how far Bette will need to crawl???? Trust is such a big thing. thanks
I agree with Lamentamini about Tina not being generic. Bette has really done it now. What will she do now to get Tina to understand that she loves her and that at that point she was an ass.
Kinda like Christmas seeing three new posts from you! I’m lovin’ this story…thanks for the frequent updates.
The most heartfelt apology is a simple one. Always a pleasure to read. Thanks.
Bette, you are an ass. Do you never learn. One of yours and Tina’s biggest problems was communication. Once again you took the words of others as truth before talking to Tina. You’d better come up with something spetacular, Tina is so not generic.
Pseud, You had me reeling with Bette and Tina arguement. Everything seemed lost and hopeless. Now after listening to her friends Bette has realized the errors of her wya and now is on the path of reunion with Tina. It will take a massive amount of love and understanding for Tina to give her another chance. I do hope that Bette is prepared to offer herself to Tina and relinguish all control. Can’t wait to see how this plays out. Please post more soon. Many thanks for sharing your wonderful words and wisdom with me. Your Loyal Fan.
awwwwwwwwwww I WAS SO INTO THAT THEN IT ENDED,HUH??? WHATS THAT ABOUT. IT BETTER BE THAT BETTE CAN’T THINK OF A GOOD ENUFF PRESENT FOR BETTE TO SLIME HER WAY BACK INTO T’S GOOD BOOKS….is that why u stopped? okay then…I’m waiting…..
god, bette. open your eyes and clean the wax outta your ears. learn something fast. thanks.
Ah excellent chapter psued! Knew that you would right the wrong :)) Now Bette, think of something special …
Now let see Bette make up for Tina!