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No Good Deed Goes Unpunished Chapter 49
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Tina and Daphne were curled up on Alice’s couch. It would have been better to go back to Daphne’s place but Alice’s was much closer. Tina put her head on Daphne’s stomach and sighed.
Daphne: I’m so sorry we ran into her tonight.
Tina: It’s not your fault. You couldn’t possibly have known.
Daphne: I guess you two still have a lot of unresolved issues huh?
Tina: I thought we did, but it would appear that Bette has resolved them for the both of us.
Daphne: I’m sure she’s still hurting and isn’t ready to talk Tina.
Tina: No, you don’t understand the great and powerful Bette. She’s never ready to talk. She doesn’t need things to be fixed or worked out. She can live her life as usual because she doesn’t care about anyone else.
Daphne: I don’t think that’s true Tina. I think she’s hurting too.
Tina spun her head around to meet Daphne’s dark eyes.
Tina: Are you taking her side?
Daphne could see and hear Tina’s defenses go up and the last thing she wanted was a fight on their “first date”.
Daphne: No.
Daphne shook her head.
Daphne: I’m sorry this isn’t my business and I’ll stay out of it.
Tina nodded.
Tina: It’ll be better that way, for you.
Daphne’s mind struggled to change the topic but Tina beat her to it.
Tina: The night isn’t over yet. We could watch a movie or something.
Daphne leaned down and kissed Tina’s lips.
Daphne: Do you have any in mind?
Tina: I want to watch something so disgustingly romantic that it’ll make me nauseous.
Daphne smiled and lifted herself off the couch. She made her way to the DVD and stand and scanned the shelves.
Daphne: No, no, nope, eww…
Tina: What?
Daphne: Does Alice watch porn?
Daphne removed the DVD case form the shelf and handed it to Tina.
Tina read the title aloud.
Tina: Bad Boys Revenge?
Tina shook her head,
Tina: It must be Alex’s. Ugh, gay boys are so strange.
Daphne: all boys are so strange.
Tina dropped the case onto the table and began to help Daphne.
Daphne: Pretty Woman?
Tina: No. How about Beaches?
Daphne: Way to depressing. Steel Magnolias?
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i hope bette will invest in tina’s show and maybe it will help them to get back together even if as friends and after they both will analyze their feelings and also when others will come clean about all their wrong doings they might love each other again…i still keep tibette hope alive but did i mention that my heart can’t take all the drama..thank goodness for alice and alex
As always, super job! I’ll be looking for the continuation. Thanks for writing!
Even if Bette can’t invest in Tina’s show, maybe she can get some of her friends to invest or use a third party to invest for her, so she doesn’t screw up with Peggy. Although, as flakely as Tina is, she may just be pooring away good money. Tina needs to get her shit together if she expects to survive in the business and have anyone invest in her show.
well i so NOT agree with Bette investing in Tina´s play.. its time to Tina deal with her shit..she made the bed now lay on it..we are all forgeting what she did to Bette..TWICE??? she dosent deserve..and its time to her deal with her attitudes and consequences..this is pure math 2+2=4 all the time Tina fail Bette is there to hold..and who is there to hold Bette besides Alex and Alice??? we are all forgeting Dafhine is not an angel?? and the snake Ashley did??? i hope Bette find out and i want to imagine Tinas face.. anyways..i dont like Avery either..i dont think she is the right person to Bette..not the woman she deserve..its time for Bette finds some one that loves her and most important RESPECT her.. thing that Tina never did.. im truly a T&B fan..but this Tina is far away what someone like Bette deserve as partner..i hope Tina suffer a lot in order to udnerstand and realise all the damage the made Bette pass.. and when that happen she will be ready to come to Bette and say..i know and felt what you felt and i want you to forgive me..until that..she will continue to play with everyones heart..especialy her own..wait..have i said to much? i think i did..and that was cuz i was going to bed with i notice you had posted..lol.. as always Flair..fantastic..cant wait for more.. many thanks :-)
Tina doesn’t deserve Peggy’s support. Bette was plan A, as a business person she should have had plan B, C, etc. She didn’t, but she sure had plan B in her personal life. Tina’s show is a bad investment. The Bette Avery thing seems really tedious to me, but I’m sure you have some plan for Bette so we shall see. I actually thought that Ashley might have had something to do with Peggy finding out.
no….she wants to be her one and only…..hehhee……i love this fic…..amazing writing…….you are just……like number 1 on my list of fav’s…….keep em comin……
It’s amazing how opinionated I become when reading this story! LOL Personally I never thought Bette should have agreed to be in Tina’s show in the first place…but that is just me. Why should she now invest her money in this show? Tina is not only airing both of their dirty laundry with this show, but now if it makes it to the stage and the Bette look-alike actress who is playing the role of Bette is the woman that Tina cheated on Bette with while rehursals were going on!! I don’t think so!! That just seems like alittle too much dyke drama to me, and I can’t imagine Bette putting herself in the postition to be laughed at!! And, that’s exactly what people would do. Laugh at Bette! She’s paying for a show so her cheating ex and the woman she cheated with can still be employed! LOL Thanks!
wow this is a pivotal moment in their relationship. I hope avery does not get hurt. Tina needs to fix this on her own!
let me preface my comment by saying i luv your writing, and the story only gets me worked up because the writing is so good, but i don’t understand how tina is the bad guy when bette started this whole thing, and i just don’t get the avery and bette thing, especially after you wrote such hot passionate chapters between bette and tina, and then there just done???but i still can’t wait for your next post!!!!
i’m so happy to see that you’re back and writing! i’ve missed this story! please update us soon! and thanks for the huge updates you’ve provided us!! =)
please, please, please post again soon..
i hope tibette will start talking and quit blaming others and try to work things out but first get everything out and in the opening..p.p.s. flair great job lady
ohhh wow invest in her show that would b crazy!! more soon i hope thanks for the post
Thanks again for the post length…so much to read and enjoy, it’s fantastic. I’m glad that Tina got her show yanked, she didn’t deserve it acting that way plain and simple. Bette is not an innocent, but I’m worried that she’ll hurt Avery regardless.
Hiya Flair, Gal you got it all going on in this latest chapter. Avery running from Bette then Bette running from Avery. Derek knowing something is going on but happy to develop his relationship with Avery. Tina and Daphne getting closer. Alice and Alex being light relief then pricking the consciences of both Bette and Tina. Neither party is blame free. Tina should not have run into Daphne’s arms. Remember that Ashley had a major han in the demise of this relationship. Daphne was a willing pawn in this setup. I do wonder how Tina will react when she learns this truth. I do hope that Ashley will make amends and use her powers for good. Can she really fix it? Avery is now starting to see the real Bette, her diligence is beginning to knock down Bette’s self defences. It will be interesting to see this this attracts or repulses Avery. As I recall this stroy started with Bette and Tina apart and unlikely to reconnect but they did. For a while there was bliss but now the dark clouds have covered the sun and blocked out the joy. Bette needs to think about how she handled this whole situation and accept her part in it. Maybe she can’t changed but a willingness to trying might be all Tina needs to see that there is hope for a brighter future together. Avery is a sweet dalliance for Bette but not a true love. I hope Bette sees this soon and sets her mind to wooing Tina back. Interesting and exciting story-telling. Flair, you are well named as the drama turns of this tale are liable to cause heart attacks and many jaws to break. Thank you so much for returning to the site and most importantly continuing this awesome adventure. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
Hmm… Tina so deserves it. I don’t think Bette could help a lot in this case. She definitely shouldn’t invest in Tina’s show. Tina holds no passion for Bette nor for the show. It’d be bad investment. And I think Daphne is a selfish person after all. Tina would soon find out and realise how wholeheartedly Bette treated her and what a stupid person she made herself by letting go of Bette. She seriously needs to grow up to be the person who deserves Bette.
Well here we are again Scuttle! I could read your chapters over and over and over again and they will never lose their effect. I still get clammy hands and my heart skips beats in all the right moments. Every time I begin one of your chapters, I sit all the way back in my chair because I know by the end of it my face will be two centimeters from the computer screen: very LITERALLY on the edge of my seat.Did I sense some personal experience seeping into the description of the bathroom scene between Bette and Avery? That’s HOT! I for one, love Avery. I like Tina too (not at the moment), the way you write her is very genuine and quite honestly, though I don’t agree with what she did to Bette, I can understand how hard it must have been for her to live with such a strong personality as Bette (both public and private). Must be hard to live with someone who is so successful in a business that you are just trying to break into. One thing to live with a Broadway star and want to be the world’s best pencil maker and quite another to live with a Broadway star and want to be a Broadway playwright (love the dynamic you have created). Maybe Tina needs to set out on her own and make her own success so that she feels that she is on an even keel with Bette before they can begin to think (or you can begin to craft) a reconciliation. But if that were never to happen, I must say that I am perfectly fine with Bette having Avery (she’s adorable). It’ll be interesting to see if Avery will have the same ‘less-than’ insecurities as Tina did in her relationship with Bette, seeing as she is a lowly chorus girl and Bette is fawned over for being the star. So much drama so little time. Please keep writing and posting…..and let me know if ever i can help………inspire you.
To hell with Tina! I like Avery with Bette, just imagine what would of happened if Bette did’nt have to run and take care of the phone call!!!!!!
Tina, fucking who?
You paint such a vivid picture and get emotion so well; glad you are back
Great update. Can’t wait for more.
i hope bette and tina can get back together. Post soon!! Great story
Let Bette and Avery be a couple!