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    The Onyx part3

    Story written on May 9, 2007 by adicttosharmen.
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    Author Notes:

    part 3… the lost part

     

     I couldn’t sleep thinking about her… Carmen… about what she said… everything… she doesn’t love me, more like hates me. I have to get out of here, cause I can deal with her not wanting to talk to me… but to hate me?… Well I guess after I left her at the altar she hates me as well…

     

    “Did you sleep well?” I jump when I hear Jenny’s voice

     

    “Fuck, you scared me Jenny”

     

    “Sorry…”

     

    “Don’t worry about it”

     

    “So… how was your night with Cat?” She said looking down

     

    “Carmen”

     

    “What?”

     

    “Cat its Carmen… the one I told you about”

     

    “The one you were going to get married with?”

     

    “Yea…”

     

    “Oh… so what happened?”

     

    “Well… she hates me… I mean I though she liked me at first … we came here and started you know getting it on, but then it was over just like that and she was getting dress and… and she said she slept with me, cause Helena paid her to do so, even dough I don’t remember sleeping with her cause time here it’s a mother fucker and she said that I took something from her… and I don’t know what… she hates me…”

     

    “ohh..?”

     

    “And this is fucking weird ok….  I don’t know what the fuck to do… time skips every time he fucking wants… this thing in my neck keeps changing colors like if I know what the fuck it means… I don’t know where the fuck I am… and I just want to get the hell out of here!!!”

     

    “ohh”

     

    “Jenny can you say something ells but ‘ohh’?”

     

    “Sorry… but I just don’t understand”

     

    “And my wound… look, its not there”

     

    “Yea and that’s good Shane”

     

    “Yea but don’t you think it’s a little strange it hilled that quick?”

     

    “No…”

     

    “And what about time here? Its fucked up… I mean one minute I’m here next I’m there and no one seems to noticed” 

     

    “Yea, times skips when it’s not going to be good for you…. I think. But when times skips for you it skips for you only… why is that a problem?”

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