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All you need is love chapter 21
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ALL YOU NEED IS LOVE Chapter 21
The next hour was crazy – Bette had already packed all the clothes and supplies that they would need but she had to go and pick up the mini van she had hired for the journey. Bette had also arranged to hire a couple of cars while they were away so everyone was free to do what they wanted. Tina was left alone packing enough for her daughters and herself. She was just coming downstairs with a bag of things that Hannah would need when someone knocked at the door. It was Helena looking great in tight Levi’s, sneakers and a thick sweater. Upstairs she had left Madison and Becky arguing about the ownership of a pair of thick socks
“Hia “
“Hi – just wondered if you needed a hand – Bette has got everyone working with military efficiency next door”
“I wish I could say the same – come in – I thought I should pack some food “
“Bette’s got a couple of boxes of basic provisions but there are shops up there”
“All the same – the girls are fussy “
“Can I help? “
Tina smiled “Could you put the kettle on??”
“Great idea – I am good with that – coffee?”
“Herbal tea I think “
“Go and sort out the squabbling upstairs and I’ll make us a cup of tea “
When Tina returned five minutes later she flopped onto the sofa facing Helena who was looking at one of Tina’s novels.
“You should be huge as a writer what with your talent “
“I am as big as I want to be “
“The sales for your last book were very good despite very little publicity “
“I have a following “
Helena returned the book to the shelf and sat down
“Sorry – force of habit “
“Its your job “
“And I am very good at it – like you are very good at yours “
“Thanks – I wouldn’t have thought that this was your sort of weekend – you are more sophisticated that hiking and fishing “
“Don’t believe it – anyway – I get to spend time with my boys which I am looking forward to and I get to be alone with Jodie which will be great “
“I am just blown away at what Bette has put into place since yesterday “
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Oh geesh the waiting is hard on me. Come back soon.
“I love you and very soon I am going to show you just how real my love for you is” How soon, Ally? Hopefully you have the next chapter typed and post it today. That works for me! LOL! Love that B & T ‘s family and friends are all on this vacation together. Great memories are going to be made.
hello stranger.. long time no talk.. i had a problem with my pc and lost your email adress at my outlook.. i miss you lady.. i hope youre ok.. i have thounsand of chapters to read..man..will take me some time..lol.. please send me an email so i can send it back.. :-)
I love this story. It is one of my favorites to read. I love your take on the Bette and Tina beginning. I love the chemistry that you have created for them. It is just fantastic. Thanks, and PPS
This is plain torture!!! Please write more soon. Great!!!!!!
May I remind yoy the fifth article of the human rights declaration ? “No one shall be subjected to torture or to cruel, inhuman or degrading treatment or punishment.”, I think you just broke that rule, didn’t you? great chapter, Please please please please post soon!
I’m loving your story
I totally agree with coop – crazy can be fun and this bunch is definitely crazy….some with each other and others just crazy LOL. Sweet story Ally
Thanks for another great update Ally! I just got caught up with all of your stories. Sometimes I really marvel at all the energy you must have to create such excellent organized chaos for us to enjoy. Absolutely love alice and her keg – do people still do that?? Well, our girl sure does, doesn’t she. Hope she doesn’t have any “Alice” moments when B & T are having their quality time! LOL. Looking forward to your next post so please, do it soon! :)
a lot of people there i hope they can find the time to be together, this is a great story but i want to read what will happen in the next chapter of the L wing, please?
I am so glad that Bette got to plan this weekend for their families. Ollie is being such a prick about the girls if he doesn’t come to his sences he will lose his relationship with his daughters. I hope Bette and Tina enjoy their first time together they are so in love with each other. Cant wait for the next chapter.
Great update AllyE. Really like this story. Finally the girls will have their alone time and it should be great for them. You are doing a superb job writing this one Ally. Hopefully the next chapter will show them together. Can hardly wait.
How will they survive with 7 kids (I’m including Alex)? I hope the adults help keep her in check. Can’t wait for Bette and Tina to set “the pace.”
This story is great. Bette seems different than other stories but it’s a nice change. PPS.
Are hotdogs and their accompaning buns unequally packaged in Britain as they are here? We usually get 6 dogs and 8 buns to each pack. Damn infuriating. Please don’t let anyone put mayo on the dogs. Really, I think all their friends, Alice included, would understand if B & T turned in early and rose late. I bet they’d even run interference for them with the kids and/or Alice if necessary. Now, they just need to keep the noise down.
Bette promised “very soon” so you had better live up to that promise Ally, but I do fear they will be interrupted. But not until the morning, please.
GREAT update Ally, but I don’t this waiting is torturous. In fact, I don’t know who has the worst of it, B&T or us readers LOL :o).
where’s the next chapter?
very soon???? did u say very soon Ally??? I hope so cuz the anticipation is killing me as much as them….write on!!!!!
Happy Friday! Yay! Excellent update Ally. I don’t think I would want my three children plus my soon-to-be-lover’s three children within earshot my first time making love, but I guess desperate times demand desperate measures! LOL! You paint a lovely family outing picture Ally! Can’t wait for more!
Nice update. Sounds a little chaotic, but lots of fun.
It does sound crazy, but crazy can be fun. With all the kids you have to keep them included. Can’t wait for bedtime.
Ally, Right place and right time to enjoy and savour your wonderful writing. Loved Alice and her insanity; the keg was sheer perfection. Sweet to see tha gang altogether a la “Cheaper by the Dozen”. Cabin sounds awesome. Now I just know that Bette and Tina can finally get the illusive time alone that they keep so desperately desire. I just know that it is safe in your magnificent hands. Can’t wait to read how this marvelous night progresses. Thank you so much for making me go “aw”, “wowwee” and “mmmm” then chuckle; a maelstrom of emotions. Your Loyal Fan.
Ahh, finally they can sleep together. The whole place seems cute. I liked Helena’s talk with Tina. I can’t wait for the next one.
yeah, crazy is a good word to use when having a whole gaggle of children around. cant wait for some adult time. thanks.
lord woman you are such a tease, lets get it on already!!!!!!!!!!!!
Good chapter. They are having fun and funny about Alice. Ok now let see B&T time and hope no interrupt them. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Hopefully those kids will be in a deep slumber soon and the rest of the gang ill be sloashed from that keg Alice brought and that way Bette and Tina can have some much needed alone time. PPS!
Ally Lets get to the “ALONE TIME” already
Hot dogs sound great right about now even though they’d be breakfast for me. lol Next chapter please!