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Past Hurts Revealed
Tina quickly caught up with Bette as she walked to her car. “I don’t believe you!” she said in a voice full of fury.
“Tina, I really don’t understand what your problem is! Can’t you see the humor in how ridiculous his proposal was? Lighten up!”
“You obviously don’t see the insult in what happened, Bette! This man actually believed that he would be able to put his hands on me and f*ck me, and that I would like it! And to listen to him, he does this sort of thing all the time! Didn’t you hear him? He has kids all around the world! Don’t they have condoms in France? Can you spell ‘birth control’, Jean-Paul? Who knows what kind of stuff he’s picked up in the midst of his conquests!”
“I guess you’re right about that, but come on, Tina! You know, and I know, that it wasn’t going to happen! Can’t you just see it for the farce that it was?"
“And you! You know this man! Couldn’t you see him for what he is? You actually seriously considered allowing that slimeball to become a permanent part of our lives through his seed impregnating me?!? The whole thing is just disgusting to me—he creeped me out! I get chills just thinking about it! Makes me ill…”
Bette stared at Tina, who stood before her, hugging herself, looking down to the ground with a look of disdain on her face. She wondered what this was really all about. Bette could see that Tina was in distress, but it didn’t make sense that she would react so strongly.
Bette took her by the hand, squeezed it lightly. Tina looked up and saw Bette give her a half smile. “Get in the car,” Bette said softly. Tina obliged as Bette opened the door for her.
After they settled in, Bette turned and said, “Okay. Now what’s going on, T? Why is this upsetting you so much, baby?”
Tina drew in a deep breath and looked back down. She remained quiet. Bette turned to look at her and she noticed that Tina was flushed, looking as if she were about to cry. Bette touched Tina’s chin and felt the moisture already there. She gently turned Tina’s face towards her and said, “Talk to me…”
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(72 votes, average: 3.35 out of 5)
That was great and absolutely plausible. Give us more. Thanks.
This one page was exquisite. Please continue. I love these little detailed explorations of single moments.
Very lovely Arkaycee. What a twist to that whole encounter! Quite creative and true to the characters for sure. I love this understanding and gentle Bette. A painful past for Tina, but many of us have the scars of past hurts and difficulties which we do our best to overcome. Post soon!
Great story, and very plausible indeed! … But if I may, I’d like to mention that not all French men are such pricks as Jean-Paul!… And yes, we do have condoms here! *wink*… But hey, I’d have loved that to happen in the pilot! Thanks…
Now this is what we should have seen on the show……..You have fill in blanks thats not only from S1 but also S4 where Tina mention her two abortions…………Great Job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
really nicely filled gap…i wish the show had more time to exlain more behind the camera stuff
That was very good Arkaycee…I wish it wasn’t a one off. If they would have given us more communication moments like this in season 1 all that other crap probably would not have happened.
Yup, get that woman a slurpeeee. Indeed that guy needed a little knock me down because of his attitude. Too bad Tina could not see the humor in the situation but I can understand her thinking. She may have thought that they expected her to jump into bed with him to have a child.
amazing and so right on the money…you should be writing for the show…write on sista!
That was awesome!
You ROCK!!! ROCK ON!!! thank you for sharing it here!!!!
Hey Arkaycee, Loved that simple yet effective moment in Tina and Bette’s lives. It really explained why a throw away comment and a few giggles got under her skin. Loved it. Please wirte and post more stories as soon as you possibly can. Brighten my day with your fantastic fan fictions. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
You write it, we’ll read it!
Brava! Brava! You wirte it girr! Come again!