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Love You Lately Chapters 7 & 8
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Chapter 7
“Al come on. Papi’s probably there by now.” Tina complained. She was annoyed at having to wait for Al because she was faced with having to look at the Chart prominently featured on Al’s livingroom wall and could now see that Al had completed what she had started two years ago – Candace’s name was now complete and definitively linked to Bette’s.
“Alright already.” She said as she left her room and joined Tina in the livingroom. “Wow, you look hot!” Alice complimented.
Tina looked down at herself a little self conscious about the tight black trousers and the shirtless black and marine studded vest. Although despite the black cowboy boots her parents sent from North Carolina complementing the outfit, they made her feel very tall.
Truth be told, she had never dressed to pick up anyone. She had never gotten together with someone from a bar. And, for that matter, none of her relationships were instigated by her. Maybe this was going to be a learning experience, she decided.
“Thanks Al. You look pretty good yourself.” And she did in her tight blue dress, high boots and jacket.
“Thanks TK. Ready?”
“Yes” Tina answered as she started to lead the way out of the apartment but unable to resist one more glance at the Chart.
Alice noticed this. “Sorry” she apologized quietly.
Tina turned back to Alice, shrugged and smiled. “Don’t be. I understand the importance of sociology.” Tina joked.
Alice smiled and squeezed Tina’s arm in appreciation for Tina’s effort in letting her off the hook.
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Chapter 8
“Damn its even more crowded here than at the Planet” Tina observed as she looked around in wonder at the plethora of women and the spaciousness of the bar.
“I’ll just text Papi and see where she is.” Alice said.
“Ok. Should we make our way to the bar?” Tina asked, slightly overwhelmed at the number of women and the daunting prospect of trying to pick one of them up.
“Hang on. Got a text back from Papi. She’s in the back at the table next to the big fern.”
Both women stretched their heads to gain prospective over the bar and trying to find this one plant.
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I L…O…V…E this story. It’s getting really good. PPS!!
jodi and candyass will be good for each other LOL
The Candace thing with Tina was kind of interesting. I can’t tell you why but it was. I hope that it is Alice who opens her mouth to Bette and not Tina. Tina still has a lot of class. I hate what this will do to Bette because I think that she will feel more than just hurt. But at least this time Tina will be there to help pick up the pieces.
This is so good and drama coming lol!
Jodi’s probably hugging an old friend, classmate, her sister? Who is their right mind would cheat on Bette…that hunk o’burning love? PPS.
i meant to say it sounds like Karma is the order of the night if Jodi is getting it on with another chick…wonder if Ms Porter has ever experienced what she dished out????…I know there was Hel and Hen but it’s not the same…T and B were already broke. PPS
ah well…tina and her lovers ex lover…been there done that as i guess has half the gay/lesbian world, but curiosity can kill the cat or something…very funny…more
this is unbelievable! in a good way. :P i love it, post soon :)
thank god alice got tina away form candyass… but now i would of went right up to jodie and called her on it… and then said… guess what… you just lost bette… the game is on…
yes tina and candyland was scary…but i bet ol jenny makes sure it gets back to bette. knowing jodi she’s probably on one of her many dates cause she’s not capable of settling down and she don’t like kids…more please.
Thank goodness Alice was there, cos that whole Candace situation was getting decidedly out of hand. And that cow Jodi, what the heck is she doing draped all over another woman? Well, besides the obvious. What will Tina and Al do with this information? Let it lie, or spill? Decisions, decisions. Hope the next post is soon, I can’t wait to find out, cheers Robi.
pleesssse no hook up’s with candance, thats just tooo incestuos.
Robi, I’ve been following your story and really enjoy it. Although i disagree with Rau and the assessment that Bette hasn’t experience what Tina experience in regards to the cheating, cuz Bette DID catch her cheating on line but whatever… As for the Candace thing i think you did a great job covering this topic and truth be known it would have probably been more human nature had Alice NOT found Tina and Tina slept with Candace. You painted the picture clear, she wanted to be close to the woman that she still feels pulled her love of her life away. She wanted to see for herself what this woman was like. And despite the fact that Bette cheated on Tina…i don’t think she deserved to be on the other end of that stick. Only cuz Bette had tried to prove herself over and over after she cheated. Mistakes are a bitch when the people around you won’t let them lie…Great job with this fic! I can’t wait for the next post. I don’t think Alice will be able to keep quiet, while Tina probably will struggle with the information.
Tina and Candace… uhhhh… excuse me whle I barf. That’s just a turn off. Jodi, cheating on Bette????????… hmmmm… weeellllll, if she is and Bette finds out, then she can dump her @ss and get back with Tina before she goes and does the nasty with Candace. Alice is funny as always. Sometimes her meddling gets on my nerves, but it’s more than welcome this time. I’d rather have Tina flirting with Papi than even touching Candace. She should go home and wash her mouth out really well… ughhhhh. I’m nauseous and I didn’t even kiss the woman.
Since Jodi’s not the love of Bette’s life, it will hurt, but she’ll get over it. Yuck to Tina and Candance, sleeping with someone who help break up your marriage is to weird to imagine. And Tina is wrong, about not initiating any of her relationships. Where Henry may have expressed interest, Tina made the first move as did Bette with Canadance, including the kiss because Bette could have said no.
tina/candass YuckieePoop sh*t!thx god alice was there,but i bet jenny gets it back to bette and jodie has she lost her Freakin Mind huggin another women when she has MS.DeanPorter that burnin hunk of love.i think tina should go up to jodie and let her Im watching you,game is on now and kiss ms.Dean Porter goodbye now.p.p.s.
I don’t know whether to say yuck yuck yuck at Candace and Tina, or whether to laugh! I’m just thankful that Alice was there to get her away (and remove the visual from my brain!) Excellent writing! Great story!