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Daily, together and apart # 6
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That was not the response both were waiting for. Tina was crying loosely, painfully, abandoned, unrestrained.
“C’mon Tina… Please…Sorry, but I had to tell you that… You can’t keep bashing Bette. She’s a responsible adult, she’s not chronic, for Christ sake, Tina. Besides, I know you both smoked before and it was not once, so…What’s this about? You know she’s an incredible woman and mother and sorry, but you don’t know what she has been through. In addition Tina, do you even really know who she is anymore?”
Tina faced Alice, still sobbing, unable to offer an answer even if she had one.
“She’s different, Tina. All of us changed. You changed… Sorry, I didn’t mean to be cruel.” Alice had sat beyond Tina and turned to look to Shane, searching for help. Shane was comforting Angelica.
“No…No…Alice,” Tina mumbled between the sobs. ”I had to listen, but…but it’s so hard! I’m so fucked…I was so twisted!” She nodded negatively. ”I was lost and Bette was so invulnerable, at least that’s what I thought. I was feeling. I was seeing. I was listening. But I just couldn’t talk….verbalize it at all…” Tina laid her head nesting into Alice’s shoulder. “I still can’t sometimes, Al. It hurts so much. And I…I felt so sorry for Bette, for me, for Angelica. Poor girl, two mothers so unbalanced. But, you know …” Tina searched for Alice’s eyes, “all this had hit me when I was inviting her to the mix party…” Alice did a crocked face… “I know,…I know…” Tina agreed rolling her reddish eyes, breathing to gain control over the pain. “But”, her eyes clouded, “When I heard her saying that she had found closure, Alice, I just…”
Alice saw the effects of Bette’s words still written on Tina’s face. Her hazel eyes instantaneously tearing, as her brain flashed that particular memory. I thought, God! Is it over?! Over! Our love is gone? We lost ourselves…Is this life? It hit me so hard, that I had to sit it out a moment. All the memories. Good and bad. Back in the past. Lost for unspoken feelings. It was a rush of blood, of life, through my brain, my soul. I decided to reform my life.”
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great update B.. very sweet,and wonderfull and enjoy PRIDE MONTH i know i will*wink* p.p.s.
Very nicely done. A great insight to what both was feeling during horrific times in their lives.
This is very well done… I always wondered what would have happened if Bette had walked in. and now you have put it into writing so thanks for that…Enjoy PRIDE and I I hope to read your next chapter soon
Hey Braz, this is an interesting story. I enjoyed the chapter. Divirta-se com a parada. Quem sabe a gente não vai se cruzar lá sem saber…rs
Oh so so sad. They both have hurt and torn each other apart.
Ahh, see I was fortunate to have already read this, so I could leave my comment immediately. First, the help I give you is minimal. You are the creator, the inventor, the thinker, and ultimately THE writer. It is a privilege that you share your inner thoughts with me, and I both respect and honor that trust so very much. I am privy to the next chapter, which I have made my way half way through, and it just continues to amaze me.Second, there were two parts of the story where dialoge or thoughts were referenced which powerful and moving. “I’ll be alone when I get that contract that I was fighting so hard for. And I’ll be alone even if I could celebrate with anyone.” Now THAT was so true and moving. I mean, how many people are working on things, in this case Tina’s contract, and Bette had been a part of it as it was developing, but isn’t a part of it when it actually arrives. Although Tina will be quite fulfilled by successfully acquiring the contract, she will miss something that could never replace Bette’s presence, even in celebration of that. SO true my friend. The other line I really liked was this one: “the love of your life will see you at your weakest but she’ll take you as you are. And that’s what Tina did.” DAMN, now that is exactly how I feel as well. Thank you so much for putting some of those to paper. Keep it coming Braz. It’s sweet!
aaaaaawwwwwwwwwww hell!! that was tuff to read…yes chicki is right about the memorable lines…pps
Damn that was sad and emotional. Can’t wait to see more please, thanks!