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    The Onix part 8

    Story written on June 13, 2007 by adicttosharmen.
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    “I see what you saw in her baby… but I don’t see what she saw in you”

    I wake up in a black room…. Can’t remember what happened… why I am here…Everything hurts… My hands and legs are tied to the chair and I can’t move a muscle… but I cant see either, so what’s the use. Then everything comes back… Carmen, Cherie, bathroom, Carmen going down, blood, And… Cherie fucking hitting me… that bitch hit me….  Wait Carmen…

     

    “CARMEN!!” fuck, fuck, fuck… she was hurt… what if… “YOU BETTER NOT HAVE HURT HER YOU FUCKED UP BITCH!” then I hear her laughing

     

    “Shany… is that what you really think of me?” then the lights come on  and right in front of me are two girls with guns I had never seen and Cherie with a gun pointed to an almost naked and bloody Carmen… she looks like if she had been crying. She wore only her underwear “Do you really think I’m a bitch Shane?” Cherie said looking strait at me. She had Carmen in front of her very close to her body, pointing the gun to her neck. Carmen had blood all over her face she had bruises all over her body. She looked really bad

     

    “Carmen are you ok?” I asked

     

    “Shan-” fuck… she’s hurt

     

    “Shut up Cat! And why the fuck does she call you Carmen huh?…. Shane answer the question!”

     

    “I swear to god, if you hurt her, touched her in anyway…” I say that and found out my mouth is bleeding

     

    “I did…. But you know that… I touched her in everyway… ways you couldn’t…”

     

    “I’m gonna fucking kill you… I’m gonna rip your hart out and eat it my fucking self”

     

    “Hey, why don’t you rip one of her hands out and punch her to death with her own hand huh?… that would be really funny, I mean if they ask ‘how did died?’ o she punched her self to death ” laughing …Shit… I know that fucking voice… Alice… then she appears from behind me

     

    “Alice?” I said

     

    “In the flesh hot stuff”

     

    “Hum… nice really nice Alice… All this time… you guys have been working for little miss bitch here”

     

     “Watch it baby, or sexy here gets burned” Cherie said

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    2. OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!THAT WAS FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Carmen can’t be dead ofcourse , yeah?Anyway, honestly it was so well written. Waiting for you to post more soon, pleeeease!!!

    5. Shit! I fell for the ‘The End’ for a few seconds. Phew, glad it wasn’t. Ok, this is great and terrible at the same time. I don’t like that Shane said “the sound that will lead to my death”. I hope that is not literal. Looking forward to more of this. Thanks for taking the time to write and post.

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