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    Mixer From Hell Finale part 1

    Story written on June 17, 2007 by Succulent1.
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    Who really has control?

    PREVIOUSLY

     

     

    Before she reached her, Tina went under and came up, looking Bette right in the eyes. She grabbed Bette’s head and pulled her to her and kissed her.  She pushed her tongue against Bette’s teeth; Bette opened them, letting their tongues unite and dance.

     

     

    Bette loved the way Tina kissed.  She was a fucking good kisser.  Tina’s hands settled onto her lover’s breasts. Tina pushed herself against Bette and pinned her against the pool wall.

     

     

    Tina’s hand slid up to Bette’s left nipple. Bette took in a sharp breath.  Bette loved this new Tina.  She was more confident, more aggressive. 

     

     

    “Mmmmmm, that feels so good," Bette said while rotating her pelvis with the motion of Tina’s hands.

     

     

    “Hmmm….you do, don’t you.  Well Bette, before we continue, I need to know what you told Jodi about our lunch date the other day.”

     

     

     

     

    Chapter 4

     

     

     

    Bette got a huge lump in her throat; anxiety rushed through her.  She knew that this moment would come, but not now.   Their eyes met. Bette’s lips parted as if she wanted to say something, but no words came out.

     

     

    Slowly, Tina pulled away from Bette. Adrenaline rushed through Bette’s body; her heart started to beat faster and faster.  Their bodies didn’t touch, but there was still that passionate energy between them.

     

     

    “Mmmmmm,” Tina said.

     

     

    Tina leaned back in and kissed Bette, softly working from her neck to her face then on to her lips. Bette exhaled, releasing some of the blissful tension that was beginning to build up inside her.  Tina was getting a little impatient by Bette’s lack of response.

     

     

    “I have disregarded your manners many times.  I have given you chance after chance to behave yourself.  You refuse to do so.  And now, I am compelled to do something that I should have done a long time ago.  Tonight, you will give me what I want, won’t you?"

     

     

    Shivers ran up and down Bette’s spine as she stood quietly, her eyes downcast.  She knew that this time, she had pushed Tina too far.  She knew without a doubt that her actions would get her into serious trouble one day, and having her here while introducing Jodi was it.

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    1. Short little teasing chapter which most certainly left me wanting more! I happen to like the assertive Tina… she’s always hot, but the Alpha T…yummy. Hope my appearance from the silent corner helps persuade you to post. pretty please

    2. Succulent, I don’t think that it’s an issue of stalking or abuse between B & T either, but the whole “control” continuum makes me nervous. As I said, this is my personal opinion and I hope I’ve caused no offense. Games I can understand, but I truly don’t get why control should be desirable to anyone.

    3. control is a funny word… i like both to love each other… and in loving each other one must/should be in control while the other “enjoys” the benefits… and then i would hope the tables would be reversed… but babe whatever you write we will drool, pant and forget to breathe… SO BRING IT ON…

    6. I like them both in alpha mode. Even when Bette thinks she’s always in control, I think T often plays her like a violin. In a perfect world, maybe everyone is an equal partner, but in most relationships, there’s a continual effort at compromise and balance. So is shifting “control” in different arenas a bad thing?

    10. I agree completely with funnyone. Very well said, and I agree also that too many authors add those elements of dominating and controlling, when real loving is the opposite, as the basis of relationship.

    11. Funnyone there’s no offense taking….And your opinions are always welcome…..The control issue is how the show has portrayed Bette Porter and the way it seems, she has been controlling from the beginning. So trying to stay close to her character I have her trying to control Tina….And in my OPINION I think if Tina is going to get Bette back she has to be aggressive.

    12. Ok, ok, I know you are waiting for me to post a comment so you’ll get on with it….ha ha…..Now you asked what I want…hmmmmm. I love the Alpha in Bette, but I do love when Tina turns the tables on her. I think it would be cool to show Bette a little more of the “she did things we’ve never done before” and blow Bette’s mind a bit…NO!!!!!! Oh yah Suc make it happen….and no I’m not telling you the things they’ve never done. I think sometimes their loving has been a little too soft and gentle, and maybe they need a bit more fire in them their sheets, err uhhhh pool!! Just my opinion, (letting out deep breath)

    13. Hun,I personally dont care who has control or top/bottom doesnt matter.What does is that please finish the next chapter and soon.Suc1 havent finger it out we dont care what u write about as long as you write a Tibetter story.:))))

    14. Ok Succulent, it not about dominance, it about who’s in control at the moment. If it Bette, great, if it Tina great as long as both parties are comfortable and happy with what happening. The only problem with dominance or control is when it goes outside the bedroom and into the heart of the relationship. Whereas no relationship is always 50-50, no one should feel like the other person has control over them. Even if the person is into being submissive, it just isn’t healthy for a relationship. Now you have enough opinion, so lets get the rest of this story, please. Thank you.

    18. Instead of using the word control because it seems offend a couple readers maybe use the term initatory. Any way you look at it, at some point some one will be in control whether it is in your family or in this case a sexual encounter. I for one enjoy both sharing the control or the initatory role.

    21. Well, I already told you what I want, baby! lol But for the sake of the story, I think that Tina should take control again and really let Bette know what it feels like to have someone else in control! Seems Candace understood that’s what Bette needed (and yes, I did say that as a woman of sound mind)! lol You’d better post the finale today, no matter what!

    22. there should a law against folks like you, making us beg after putting us into such a state? Who are you Ilene Chaiken in disguise? Post or face OUR consequences, how’s that? LOL

    23. Hey Suc, Hell yes, I want Tina calling the shots here. For once she needs to show Bette that she can initiate their love making and be the dominant party. Asking and demanding that your lover pleasure you can be a major turn on. Just like being the provider of passion and willingly giving up “control” can be liberating. This removes all responsibility and allows you freedom. I do hope that the gals continue this battle for the ultimate high. Bring it on! Many thanks for this decadent drama. Your Loyal Fan.

    26. Since you ask: personally, I think control is antithetical to love, whether it’s physical or emotional. Firstly, control is at the core of stalking and abusing. I’ve long been baffled as to why so many authors, for example, depict the initiation of the use of tongues in a kiss as “a fight for dominance”. I mean somebody’s got to start. If the pair are comfortable with one of them being the initiator and/or top or want to play a game, fine. But playing games can’t be the basis of a deep relationship. I’ve always felt it should be a joyous and shared experience that supports and enriches both parties and that both parties should want to give to each other. Ask me another question and I’m sure I’ll be able to scrounge up another 2 cents.

    27. Funnyone I agree to a certain degree….but control between B&T was never in my opinion ever been stalking nor abusing. And yes playing games cant be the basis of a deep relationship BUT it can bring spice to a boring one…..And as always you never give your 2 cents u give a quarter…LOL

    28. I agree with Arkaycee. Tina needs to take back “control” over this encounter. I don’t think controlling each sexual experience is healthy for any relationship but it does raise the sexual energy when it’s unexpected. I think Tina needs to show Bette that she has changed and won’t be under her control any longer. Whatever you write Suc, I’m sure it won’t dissappoint. Oh by the way, to answer your other questions….you left me wanting more and I hope your finale will leaving me breathing hard. **LOL! wink***

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