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Lady Slayer
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Chapter 4
Tina felt a sense of heat invade her body at hearing the words and the intensity of Bette’s eyes as she had said them, she felt the flush rising across her pale skin, settling across her chest.
She swallowed the large lump that seemed to suddenly appear in her throat, and she knew that her breathing had suddenly become a chore.
The cold air filled her nostrils as she drew in deeply, anything to regulate the pounding in her chest, as she tried to formulate a reply.
The words came in a quiet form, as she whispered, “thank you…”
Bette never took her eyes from Tina’s face; she watched the reaction expressed on her features as the words she had spoken settled within her. The words, although stumbling from her lips, flowed from her mind, they were instant thoughts that needed to be vocalised.
The first initial thoughts as Tina had walked into the room, thoughts so different to when first walking into her office this morning, that was business bordering on curiosity, this was appreciating the woman who had dazzled her beyond any expectation during the day.
This was seeing the woman behind the business suit and she couldn’t help but feel drawn in, drawn into those eyes that verged on vulnerable, a look that Bette immediately found endearing.
All of a sudden the thoughts came into Bette’s mind of how for some unknown reason, this woman standing in front of her mattered, it mattered what she thought of her and it mattered what Tina thought of her, it all mattered…
It was unexplainable and it was sudden, and the flip in Bette’s stomach, along with the pounding she suddenly felt, told her it was scary.
Tina’s words broke the silence between them, “I’ve heard you are an excellent judge of women, so I take your words as a compliment…”
Tina looked at the flash as it crossed Bette’s face, the sudden cloud that dulled the deep sparkling eyes; she looked on as Bette’s gaze dropped from her own. She saw the sigh escape her lips as she looked back up at Tina.
“Please don’t believe everything you hear about me…” Bette said quietly, a defeated look settling within her.
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I love this story. The interactions are great between Bette and Tina. Bett id smitten. I love to see her this way.
one word…brillant!
Absolutely wonderful. LOVING it :)
Alice should be careful what she asks for, the ground DOES open on the California coast with disturbing regularity. If it actualy did, she’d REALLY have a reason to be embarrassed. So, uh, I take it that at some point Tina’s ease with Bette will translate into something a bit more visceral. Pray, when might that occur?
Bette smitten with Tina is totally adorable. I think smittenBette is my favorite Bette yet. Love this story. Just love the way it is gently unfolding to see both of them start to reveal themselves, get attached, and get increasingly intimate with one another. PPS.
ROFLMAO…I had to laugh at Al wanting to be swallowed up! Haven’t we all had those moments? Fabulous as always Mate!
Awwww…. so sweet. I think both Bette and Tina handled the situation (aka Alice) very well. I’m glad it feels good for you to be writing again… I know it sure feels good to us LOL. Thanks, Jo. PPS
Your story is a joy to read. Thanks.
Alice…dear Alice, motor mouth uncouth Alice, lmao…love that Porter is smitten and hope the ‘lady slayer’ bit from Alice disappears becuz as much as I love Alice, she’s starting to get on my one nerve!!!! pps
I love the instant comfort between the two. You can really see how they would last a long time, what with this strength of feelings so early on. Great writing.
And it sure feels good to be reading you! As usual your writing is pleasure. Sending good vibes your way, keep it up.
Love it Jo! If I was Bette, I’d kick Alice’s ass for saying the things she says.
excellent! So glad that it feels good for you to be writing again… such a benefit for your fans!
Looks like Bette’s getting a crash course in smitten. Lovely chapter, Jo. Cheers
Bette is very much smittened with the tight ass person who was hired at the CAC without her knowledge. Shane has it figured out probably even faster than Bette and Tina do. Wonderful story, and I am glad that you are doing fine now.
happy to read a story from you i have been bussy but now i read it all the last chapter! very good story i like it thanks for continue posting
And I’m smitten with Jobadge!!!
I’m loving this story and the way it’s unfolding. Ah…love at first sight, so sweet and unexpected. And Alice truly deserves an ass-kicking for being so crass! Now, I get to read the next chapter right away–yippee!
I’m hopeless smitten with TiBette beginnings and you do them so so beautifully. Thank you
Great update, I always love it when Al gets a dose of her own medicine! PPS
Awesome, Jo! Just brilliant. Put a smile on my face. Al is hilarious :))
Gosh, I looooove this story so much that I’am at a loss for words to describe how I feel here… You’re amazingly talented, Jo. This is just fabulous ! I can see why the fascinating Bette Porter seems so mesmerized, this Tina is quite astonishing too… Not to mention so very endearing.
B&T are so cute and sweet, Alice is so funny!