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All you need is love – chapter 33
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ALL YOU NEED IS LOVE Chapter 33
Bette pulled into the hospital and cursed at the lack of a parking space. Beside her Tina was almost white with fear – Bette turned the car round and headed towards the emergency admission entrance.
“You go inside – I’ll find a space “she suggested
Tina turned and looked at her with fear in her eyes
“What if something terrible has happened to her?”
“Babe – we don’t know. I am sure she will be okay – kids get into accidents all the time and at least they have taken her to hospital “
Bette tried to sound reassuring but was sure that if she had just received a message about one of her sons that she would be as demented with worry as Tina clearly was.
Bette touched Tina’s hand and smiled
“It will be okay – go on in – I have to find a parking space “
Tina opened the car door but turned back and kissed Bette
“I love you –thank you “
Bette touched Tina’s face “I love you too babe – so much – goes on “
Tina nodded and jumped out of the car and hurried inside.
By the time Bette had found a parking space and collected Zak from his car seat and her bag almost ten minutes had passed. She hurried into the ER and spotted Paul sitting with a sleeping Hannah in his arms and Becky who was sitting opposite him and looking very upset.
“Hey “
Bette put Zak down and he ran to the box full of toys. When Becky saw Tina she ran to her crying. Bette quickly sat down and let the sobbing girl collapse into her arms. For several minutes Bette hugged the girl until she calmed down and just rested against her clinging on tight.
“What’s happened? “ Bette said to Paul who looked pale
“We took them to an activity centre and Maddy fell “
“How badly hurt is she? “
“Broken arm for sure – maybe a broken wrist as well “
“Where is she now? “
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Oh AllyE, that was a superb chapter. Loved the way Bette handled Ollie. Wish she could have just bitchslapped him, but I think the tone of her voice probably did just as well. Loved it when Tina told Bette she considers her “partner.” Love. Ain’t it grand? Thanks. PPS
Ollie says he only wants Tina to be happy, will stop being the prick that you are and she will be. Hopefully the person he chose over Tina,that being Paul can get through to him. Our Ms. Porter the ever savior, if Tina didn’t already love her she would now.
Great chapter Ally, I think that the kids will be more that happy to get use to whole family sleep-overs for B&T’s sake. Tina…”I hate that faggot”, I hope that Tina doesn’t have to go to Rehap. for saying that. Sorry that is a totally american referance to “Grays”. PPS :o).
sweetttttttttttttt ollie is a jackass
This story just gets better and better!! I’ll try to brainstorm an idea for writing and biking at the same, especially if it means more posts!
Hey Ally! This was excellent, as always! I know you hear it a lot, but I can’t go without saying how wonderfully you write! Later my friend!
ALly, woman the way your writer is so heartfelt. Thank you . I am so loving this story. Ollie is a BIG ASS. PPS
Ally, I had to read this again when I got off work because I read it so fast during the lunch hour. It is just as grand the second reading as it was at first. Bette is being so loving and supportive of Tina and reassuring, and which is what Tina needs a lot of right now. All the children love the other mother and that too is so wonderful and rare to see. Just so greatful for this story and the love and respect that it imparts to all involved. Love the story Ally. PPS
So glad to see an update. Love your storytelling, and these two families..
That was so sweet. Maybe Ollie will finally come to his senses and act like a man instead of a spoiled brat. He really should apoligize to Becca, I know he was upset but he should have thought before he attacked her like that.
as always Bette is so supportive with Tina she deserves it. Every chapter i want to kick more and more Ollie’s ass! Good luck with the bike thing you can do it!
i love this fic…..it is full of just the right amount of love and drama…..thanx for the update….and please, post soon……
Sigh! I’m content now. Maddie’s ok and B&T consider themselves partners. Life is good!! PPS!!
That was awesome!
great chapter.. have i told you that you are one heck of a writer.. thanks for indulging us with your stories.. and i know you have heard this before.. please post again soon..
wonderful; gotta love take-charge Bette….seems like Ollie might be getting sorted.
Absolutly fabulous!!! great chapter , you have one hell of a writing style. please post soon cannot wait for the next installment…
Tina … “I hate that faggot.” LOL … isn’t that the teapot calling the kettle black? Rmao
Great chapter, ally!! Thumbs up at Bette for organizing everybody so quickly… and damn u Ollie… I could just kick that bastard’s ass… Please keep up the good work!
I’m sure the bed is neither too soft nor too hard, but just right. As long as he had the operating room, maybe the surgeon put a pin up Oily’s ass. Or stiched him up. Or sedated him. At least Oily behaved himself (finally) at the hospital. Too bad it took that long and may it last. Why are you calling C sweaty when it’s you on the exercise bike?
Hey Ally, Wonderful to read that such love and support comes out after tragic event. Shame is that we often leave it until these moments to share with our loved ones our honest emotions and how much they mean to us. Loved the way that Bette dealt with Paul and then Ollie. Hope that this marks the start of a newe era of acceptance between the four parents here. The kids are getting on with integrating the families while the adults are struggling. Bette was jsut the prefect tower os strength for Tina. Can’t blame Tina for bleaping our her feelings. Can’t wait to see what happens next and how this family develops. Many thanks for your wondrous words and magnificent melodrama. Your Loyal Fan.
Excellent chapter Ally. Those two and the kids are so adorable
Did Tina just turn into a gamer (referring to the faggot line)? lol No wait that’s “fgt.” Gotta love language filters in games.
Another great update! Thanks so much for posting as much as you do!