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A deeper Song, post 8
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Bette had to admit that for the first time since the awful nightmare that had claimed her life she was actually looking forward to the day. She climbed out of bed constantly amazed by the way that her body seemed to change day by day. She looked at her belly swollen with new life. The baby was turned during her initial sonogram so the sex of the baby was not yet known. It was an uncertainty that was not difficult to live with. If it were the sex of the baby alone that warranted this second sonogram she would have waited as women have done for millennia before. Dr. Meadows was cautious, as this was a first pregnancy rather late in ideal childbearing years and also because of her initial anemia and weight. Bette was within the normal limits now but Dr. Meadows wanted a second look.
She looked up when she heard the light rap on her door.
“Are you almost ready Bette? We need to get going in about five minutes.” Tina called through the door.
“I’m ready.” She answered opening the door. Tina stood very still and seemed frozen on the spot.
“Tina, T… are you ok?” Bette asked anxiously.
“I’m fine” Tina shook herself. “I just can’t believe how unbelievably beautiful you are.”
“Tina.” Bette blushed. “I’m as big as a house. I am hardly beautiful.”
“Bette, you are stunningly pregnant.” Tina asserted. “If you got out a little more you wouldn’t have to take my word for it. Wow.” Tina played her reaction off lightening her confession by exaggerating her ogling of Bette’s body.
“Let’s go.” Bette laughed surprised at the pleasure that Tina’s comment evoked in her.
Once she was on the table, there was a sense of déjà vu. She instinctively reached for Tina’s hand.
“Just relax, Bette.” Dr. Meadows instructed. “Let’s see how your little one is doing. Looks good, everything looks good. Do you want to see your baby?”
“Yeah.” Bette said calmly but her fingers tightened in Tina’s hand.
“Meet your son.”
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Just perfect, Kelika. Amazing how beautiful your writing is.
Am I shallow for wanting them to make love? At least they know each other. PPS.
Beautiful, just beautiful. Bette needs to stop thinking like that, she loves Tina and always will. Tina would do anything for Bette including making love to her while pretending it’s only because of her hormonal horniness.
Ditto on what ZLFan and Rau commented. Bette is still hanging tightly to her guilt from cheating on Tina and her referencing that she is just like Melvin is so sad. She needs to forgive herself and learn to love herself again. Roseanna would want Bette to be happy. And Tina should know it’s not just the hormones and the grief talking for Bette…even if Bette weren’t pregnant, she would be having these thoughts about Tina at this point. What they need to do is really talk to each other about how they’re feeling, and take their time and allow nature to take it’s course. Great story Kelika! And thanks to Rau for editing it too!
That’s not just the hormones talking, Bette knows what she wants. Thanks for the post, kelika, it was wonderful as always.
I’m with everyone else on this one, want them together but wait just a tad bit longer. They should be together and we all seem to want that. They belong to each other not matter what happens when they are apart. Their love only belongs to B & T and vice versa. PPS
I love the way this story evolves. Unlike the completely ridiculous time and continuity gaps in the real show, your story moves along a time line at such an interesting and natural pace!! Thanks again for writing!
For the very 1st time I read all your comments b4 responding to the story…U ALL CRACK ME UP!!!! (Lmao)Kelika it was an honour and a privilege to get 1st dibs on the story and I didn’t have much to do at all.As u know I have always LOVED your stories. After I sent this back to you I went back to ‘Babe’ that was masterful!!!!I had all sorts of emotions & thoughts while reading this chapter…sorrow for their lost son; joy that they have each other & are more mature this go-round; a suredness that Rosanna is keeping an eye on them all from beyond the veil & that they are meant to be/and she will ensure that happens…sex???? Hmmm No I didn’t get that they should go at it…YET…and I feel happy for Angelica that she has her moms in a good place with one another and a new brother on the way…as I said LOVE IT…Writers don’t forget to vote….
Hey Kelika, Thank you so much for another stunning addition to this heartfelt tale. The loss of Rosanna is still raw for Bette but the life growing inside her is tempering this despair with joy and love. What astounds me with this new chapter is the septh of Bette and Tina’s connection. Even after everything that they have been through; the miscarriage, the affair, the break-up, the new love and tragic death; they are still able to love and respect each other. I truly hope that they can find a way back to one another without the guilt and anguish. Please continue soon. Girl, you are just so marvelous at bring the honesty of everything to your reader. Yes, Bette’s hormones are rampant but she is restrained. Yes, Tina want to take away all of the pain and loss but respects what Bette and Rosanna had too much to overstep the mark. Just let them find each other. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
Fine were all shallow cos you know damn well we want them to go at it as soon as they get home. Sorry Ro, but our tibette hearts are calling.
Things are looking up in pregnantville, very nice methinks. I do fear a long tease on the grounds of fear and doubt coming on – please let me be wrong;-) well done pps
utterly beautiful. can’t wait for the update.
Thank you. PPS
You can’t help but want them to be together. Things are looking good. PPS!!
Great! Now, will the sexual tension get to be too much for these two. Time to tell Angie she’s having a brother.
I agree with Rau. They should definitely get it on, but just not quite yet. A little pause in the action will make their reunion all that more meaningful.
Kelika, This story is so full of love. T&B really need to talk to each other. I do hope Angie will like that she is going to have a baby brother. Very Beautifully writen, Thank you PPS
i’m with azmama on this one too…their love is always there
hahah ok I am going to go with azmama on this one. I am not sure if I have commented on this story yet or not, but I really love it. I have loved all of your stories involving Bette, Tina, and Rosanna…granted, I didn’t like it much that you ended the last one with Bette choosing Rosanna over Tina, but it was a great story regardless…anyways, am i a heartless beeyotch for being happy that Rosanna died? I mean..I liked the girl but, you just write INCREDIBLE Bette and Tina scenes. Keep it up and PPS!!! (Pretty pretty please?)
That was beautiful!