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I Wish CH 25
I Wish CH 25
Finding a place to set up an umbrella and a beach blanket could prove to be a challenge considering the horde of people at the beach when they arrived.
"Hey Bette? Let’s try over there, to the right, by that big rock okay?"
"Sure, come my little munchkin, let’s find a place to make sand castles."
Carrying Angelica, Bette headed in the direction that Tina indicated. Once a desired spot was achieved and blankets and umbrella set in place, the three proceeded to play in the sand.
"Okay Boo, mama is going to go get some water, and then we can build the biggest sand castle on the beach. It will be so big, you my little princess will be able to live in it." Bette gave Angelica a kiss on the top of her head as she got up to go get a pail of water.
"Be right back."
Angelica watched her as she moved down to the waters edge, as did Angelica’s mom.
"Wow, she is something isn’t she?" Tina said to her daughter. Both Kennards watched Bette with love and admiration. And if truth be told, both were drooling but for different reasons.
Bette wore a very short pair of white denim shorts accompanied by a black bikini top. The combination on her bronzed skin was enough to raise the temperature in Tina’s vicinity by more than a few degrees. She was at a loss to stop watching her for any length of time. And being in this close approximation to her for a day was definitely going to be a lesson in self control.
Bette returned with the water and caught both of the girls in mid-stare.
"See anything you like?" she smirked. She was very aware of the looks she was getting from Tina. She had been giving some of her own ever since she arrived at the house earlier to pick Tina up. When she came out in a teal blue sarong, and white bikini top, all of the saliva in Bette’s mouth seemed to dry up. She found it hard to swallow, and her eyes had a mind of their own as they traveled erratically over Tina’s very well toned, and very well developed body.
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(62 votes, average: 3.56 out of 5)
I assure you there is more than one person enjoying the HECK outta this story! You deserve it. I’m a big fan and I love the direction of this story. Anxiously awaiting for the next post. Till then…..Ta Ta!
Hey its the greedy one again, more please…lol
Love this story. Looking forward to more.
i’m enjoying this too, small steps for them but they are moving in the right direction
Always happy to see your post. Such a really good writer you are.
Rest assured there is more than one person enjoying your story. I missed the nomination period cause I was flying all over creation but, please know I truely enjoy this tale and your writing is excellent!
Wow that was awesome and love it!
Hey you deserve the nomination…u know how much I love your stories…this chapter was great…I am so happy for them…post when u can & good luck with the voting…but even if u don’t win u r a winner to many of us not only me…
This is wonderful. Keep going. And thanks.
Great chapter! Very well written. PPS!!
I am overwhelmed with happiness with the fact that they are finally opening up their tormented hearts. Both have made major mistakes but at this time both are willing to accept their own part in the demise of their relationship. That is the first step in self forgiveness. I also hope that it is the first step back to really beginning a new phase of their relationship.
I dig it. I’m a new reader on this one.. just caught up the other day. But I really like it. PPS.
This story is beautiful and brilliant. Tina’s declaration of love for Bette at the end of the chapter brought tears to my eyes.
Glad to see your post! This has been such a good story from the start. Congrats on the nomination… well deserved!
I am having a great smile reading this story.