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Lady Slayer
Chapter 10
Tina’s car pulled up beside the kerb, she glanced across at how relaxed Bette looked, she was glad she had suggested that they come out for a walk along the beach.
The strain had now left them, the moments between them when they weren’t sure what to say next, but that uncomfortable ness was there because there were things unsaid…, from both of them, but as each mile passed there was a visible change.
“Ready?” Tina asked as she picked the blanket up from the back seat of her car, thankful she had left it in the car from the last time she came to the beach.
“Sure…”
Bette removed her shoes and rolled up her jeans, Tina watched as Bette bent to roll the denim, she couldn’t help her eyes roaming, the view was just too good to miss, those curves…, that ass…, those Levis…
Tina took a deep breath as her mind caught up with her actions… She needed to get a grip where Bette Porter was concerned…, and getting a grip was one of the reasons for suggesting the walk on the beach, rather than staying beside the pool at Bette’s house.
That would have been almost too much to bare if Bette had suggested a swim, levis were one thing…, a bikini would have been something completely different…, and it was something she really didn’t have the strength to fight at this particular moment in time.
They began their walk in silence. Bette dug one hand deep into her pocket while the other carried her shoes, she kept Tina within her peripheral vision, making sure they walked closely.
She felt how their arms gently brushed against one another’s, taking a sneaky glance as they did, catching Tina’s eye with a small smile.
“You wanna sit beside that rock over there?” Tina asked, seeing the rock she had sat beside last time she came to the beach.
“Have you been here before?” Bette asked, recognizing that she too had sat at this very rock before, it always came into her mind that this was her ‘thinking rock’, a place she came when things got too much, when she just needed to get away from it all.
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(3 votes, average: 4.00 out of 5)
What a wonderful work you are doing with this very, very endearing story… I love it more than ever ! Your dialogue is truly beautifully done. Thank you so much ! ^_^
… my, my, am I really first ?? Amazing : it almost never happened ! ^_^
Jo….Always so good. PPS.
Hmm. So Tina was with women, married a guy, cheated on him but found out he was cheating on her too? Wow. There are a lot of complications in that sentence. Is she the faithful type? Why is she still married? Is she still in love, if she ever was, with either Eric or the bitchy affiar person? Bette was perfect. Really perfect. Hurt but caring. Things are so intense. After all the skeletons are out they deserve some light fun time. PPS.
Another bombshell I didn’t see coming! Absolutely loving the story… your writing is just lovely.
This is a sad but lovely story…love Bette’s compassion and gentleness
Beautifully written…
Jo you are wonderful and weaving such an unbelieveablly loving story with your words. I can hear the ocean and feel the pain. PPS
Tina’s told her now, and the world didn’t end. That woman broke Tina’s heart… but I don’t think Bette has it in her to do anything like the same. Lady Slayer by name, not by nature. Well-written Jo, as always. Thanks
So glad you are writing again. Love this story.
Jo; I loved your writing from the first story I read all yours and then ya stopped for a bit :(. Now you are back with this and I really like it alot. You are weaving a very deeply constructed plot here, and we are all getting sucked into it, am I right girls!! Great job!
One skeleton down and hopefully not many more to come. Fly down to some place and get a quicky divorce so that Tina is free and clear of Eric. Now Tina seems to be a Jr. Lady Slayer herself. That is kind of funny in away. Now that it is out they can go from there. I would love to see Tina in some black levis hugging her body to go with Bette in her levis.
technically still married…..hello divorce that shit!!!!!
What they all said! What a soap opera…
Not to sound mean, but is Tina crying because Eric cheated on her, because her mistress was cheating on her, or because she had to share both her mistress and her husband? You know I love your writing, I am just trying to figure out where Tina’s head is at. Thanks!
just absolutely beautiful:)
Well no wonder Tina was a little snsitive about what she thought she saw at the Planet! That girl has been through the relationship ringer!
What an amazing welcome home! LOL…thanks Jo!
so tina’s not innocent…indeed a bit of a player…hmmm how will they trust one another…more…
Damn you have a good Ed…liked the changes LOL
Lets see, Tina was cheating on Eric, who in turn cheated on Tina with the same woman. Alrighty then, I’d say they’re even, so had the divorce been filed? Bette I am very proud of you for holding your tongue and Tina. I tend to have the same problem as far as interrupting for the same reason, but I’m working on it. Bette will take care of her I’m sure in more ways than one. Great job Jo.
Hi Jo, More wonderful and poetic writing from you. Sweet to see that Tina was finally able to share her truth with Bette. It is this need and desire to share your most internalized emotions and secrets with another person that illustrates the depth of your connection. Tina has been warm and open with Bette. Now, Bette is reflecting the attraction and desire to comfort and support a potential new love. These gals just fit. I loved the way you turn “Come here” on its head. Fabulous. Such tenderness and imtimacy makes my heart melt. Thank you so much. Your Loyal Fan.
Damn, this was a wonderful chapter, Jo !! Maybe a bit complicated ( well it does remind me a little btit of “The Young and the Restless” . LOL ! No, don’t worry, I was just kidding of course. I would never ever seriously compare your amaaaaazing work with those… Oh, nevermind ! ), but definitely beautiful. I’m completely hooked on this story. I litteratly “track down” every single update of yours and I almost get anxious when I do find one. In fact, I was almost “febrile” as I was reading this chapter… Yeah, I know, I’m that crazy !!! LOL !! But this is just the effect your story and style is having on me. Thanks for sharing your genius with us.
And by the way, I’m terribly sorry for the countless typos. I should probably consider double checking my posts… Oops!
So Jo… you’re making things more complicated here. I like it. This version of Tina is not as innocent as I initially thought. But that only adds to the attraction of this story. When Tina whispered “please, don’t hate me” as she kissed Bette, I couldn’t help thinking how unfair that was. She’s verging on manipulation there… in my mind. Still, I understand the pull of Bette and Tina’s need for understanding. Great complexity, Jo… I love this. Thanks!
Jo, That was so well writen. I just love this story. I just hope that Tina will give Bette a chance and not brake her heart. Thanks PPS
Holly! no kiding! that woman played with her in all the ways! poor Tina but now she is in good hands and Bette want to help her and hold her. Good good chapter
This seems like a good time to tread so softly as to not leave footprins in the sand.
Jo what a tangled web we weave.I never saw that one coming.Great update.
That was great, poor Tina!