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Just Us (part deux)
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Just Us – Part Deux.
Bette pulled into the circular driveway; the tyres of her Saab crunching against the loose gravel. The afternoon sun was dipping slowly down and a gradual build up of moisture began to collect at the back of her neck from the intense heat. She pulled alongside the brand new Aston Martin, a DB9 Volante in crisp metallic grey, it’s top still down – obviously from an earlier outing. Sat there all shiny and new, fresh from being shipped across the pond, a sure sign that it’s owner was back on her feet in more ways than one. Bette smiled as she slipped her own car into park and stepped out, admiring the cool Mediterranean stonework of the Malibu beachfront home. It seemed that an awful lot had changed in the past few weeks.
Around the back, Helena sat beside the edge of the pool, her knees pulled up towards her chest with the tips of her toes dipped into the pool. Her white bikini top lay on the poolside beside her, eager to avoid those tell tale marks across her slender back. It didn’t matter anyway, her nakedness, because no one was home and no one would call, just as before; her life had resumed its isolation. She ran her long, limber legs through the cool clear water, watching the ripples as they drifted out towards the sides. Down below her on the beach beside the waters edge the waves were lapping up against the shore, such a quiet afternoon in Malibu with barely a soul about. Helena’s eyes scanned the deserted beach, picking up a couple of lovers walking hand in hand across the bright white sands, realising that she missed the bustle of Hollywood and the cramped confines of Alice’s flat.
The full restoration of her funds had transported her back to a time when the people around her no longer mattered quite so much, before the great and wealthy Catherine and her mind games of fun. Helena’s eyes roamed across the beach sadly, feeling her own self pity as it grew inside her, realising too late that the friendships she’d forged were only so because she took the time to make them that way and that without her time and input, her friends had moved on. The days of group basketball games and friendly gatherings at The Planet were all too easily replaced by casinos and the dogs and charging expensive gifts to Catherine’s credit card. Helena sighed, trying hard not to go down the all too easy route of loathing herself.
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oh wow or whoa u got me there; Tibetter that I am I never expected this turn of events and I’m not sure how I feel about it either… I’ll have to wait see I guess…but your writing is perfect, intense and gripped me so that I had to read…pps
BeLena for life…this was a fantastic post….hot even…please develop the story between b & h, they have such chemistry and connnection…PPS.
Oh yes indeed, I’m ALL aboard.
WOW!! This is really good.
ugh, finally i crawl out of my harry potter book to comment on this far superior story. seriously, i’m not sure i’m so thrilled with jk’s finale. i *wanted* ginny and hermione to get together, but then i guess i have a reputation for wanting the more unconventional pairing that could possibly exist in all cases. but i digress. you know i LOVE this story. its fantastic. i think that you’re writing is brilliant as always, character development is stunningly interesting as usual, and you have, yet again, managed to surprise me with some twists and turns and insights that are just fantastic. ok, i’m gushing a little, but its not just my personal bias. honestly good story, for serious! keep it up, and i poooomise (as Edie once promised Saffy that she *wouldn’t* redecorate the kitchen yet again) pomise pooomise that i’ll submit my tibette sequel. pps;)
Wow, how do you leave this and go back to Tina? It would be tough to see Helena again and not have the urge to grab her. Will Tina see it?
Well Sofa you know I’m a Tibetter but damn girl this could have me changing my mind…temporarily of course. Great writing and insight, I’m so glad you’ve come back to the boards! Post when you can.
that was so very intense…i loved it
Hehe … thanks everyone for the comments, especially those of you who continued after finding it was a dalliance from my usual pairing, I appreciate that a lot, I’m not crossing ‘ships’ .. despite what some might say, but I think I’m gonna continue this one cos I think it’s interesting :-D, Sofa x
Wow, Sofa ! Excuse my French but you are so bloody talented !!! The language is so rich, so precise, so beautiful, the detail so vivid…. I’m actually at a loss for words, for there are no words to convey the wonderful experience a chapter of any of your stories really is. You just excel at writing descriptions so vivid your words are bursting with poetry !… This is just… Pure reading pleasure ! In fact, I really think that when someone is as gifted as you are, people would read ANYTHING they’d write and no matter how long the piece would be, it would always be too brief a treat ( as a certain M. Capote used to say… ). Can you tell I love your work ? Brava, Sofa !!
i luv this story, and their relationship with each other, great writing, can’t wait for more!!!!!!!
Sofa honey, gurl, sweetie…..Reading that and rereading your last “Just Us” has left me speechless. All I can say is WoW. I ma already a Belena fan but it I wasn’t I know your writing would have made me one. I love the way you write them. So fresh. So honest. I can’t wait to see where you take them