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    Pretty Women, episode 13

    Story written on July 29, 2007 by justloveB+T.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=66367
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    Mix a classical movie with two classical beauties and find: Pretty Women. A TiBette version of the 80’s movie. A few more characters are added… Why are the two women not their usual self?

    * * * * * * * * * * * * * *   TINA KENNARD * * * * * * * * * * * * * *

     

     * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *& * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *

     

      * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * BETTE PORTER * * * * * * * * * * * * * *

     

     

     * * * * * * * * * * * * *Star in the JLBT production * * * * * * * * * * * *

     

     

    * * * * * * * * * * * *PRETTY WOMEN * * * * * * * * * * * * *

    **************Last time on the JLBT production PRETTY WOMEN: ****************

     

    We see a reshot Tina calling Shane, asking her where to go for the clothes. As she answers: ‘In Beverly Hills? Rodeo drive, baby!’ we see Tina enter the shop and being shushed out by the judgemental saleswomen: ‘I dont think we have anything for you here, you are obviously in the wrong place… Please leave’

    # the scene  fades away and we see the HOLLYWOOD sign, before

    the camera turns and we see Tina enter the extravagant hotellobby, oblivious to the people around her #

    The song: ‘Broken wings’ by Mister Mister starts playing.

     

     

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    Pretty women, episode 13

     

     

    Dana Fairbanks, recently appointed highest manager of the Regent Beverly Wilshire, let her eyes slide over the many faces that passed her. A deep breath escaped her in the shape of a sigh. Only this morning she had dealt with twenty-eight issued, from a broken window to an extravagant but extremely rich costumer that requested a golden bowl for her cat. Letting her fingertips carress her temple, underneath which a throbbing pain was rapidly increasing its force, Dana allowed herself to momentarily close her eyes, her other senses immediatly becoming more alert as a compensation.

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    2. OMG, thankyou for writing this again….regardless of knowing how it will always end (hopefully) your twist is great. Now, pls get back to your computer and write a few more chapters of this and post soon. It really is unfair to leave us hanging like this for so long……feeling guilty??? Thanks!!

    3. Glad to see a posting of PW again I just loved that movie, and to see Bette and Tina in these roles is too funny. I hope you continue this one so many authors start great B&T pairings and then they just fall to the wayside. can’t wait to see the next chapter.

    4. Hi, My young friend. Been looking for a post from you so glad that you have grace us once again with your wonderful writing. Love PW. thanks my friend

    7. Hey!!! Long time no post, eh?!! Loved this chapter, as usual… Gotta love Dana… and Carmen. But specially T… poor thing, makes you want to go and old her…Please post soon, my friend!

    10. Oh!!! U definitely have been missed and also a mind reader. I was just thinking of PMing after seeing the commercial of Pretty Woman to come on this Saturday on Ltime. I was sure hoping that u see it and maybe get motivated or the time to gift us who LOVE this story a post. Low and behold u DID. Gosh, I love fic. Award is truely “DESERVED”. Please post soon!!!!!!!!

    14. Hey pal! long time right? So you’re making us up for all this what it seemed forever and putting all the cast in your story at once! lol You totally deserved some recognition for your writing and I was happy to see your name as a winner, doesn’t matter if you leave us months without updates *winks* Cheers pal and congrats again

    15. This story is so much fun. I love seeing how the L characters are going to sub-in for the ones in the original movie. Thanks for writing again! We missed you!! PPS

    16. Welcome back even if it is for a short time. Loved the post and can’t help but smile when both Bette and Tina can not shake the vision of each other. Dana was so sweet to help out Tina and now with the help of Carm, Tina will be drop dead gorgeous all dressed to kill.

    17. Ah, dear friend, I missed your talent SO much here – even if I had the deep pleasure to “hear” your voice on PMs. You know what an avid reader of yours I always was and always will be, don’t you ? I simply adore all your stories, with all my heart full of romantism. Each one is a pearl added to this priceless necklace of beautiful tales – those so sensitive and tender stories of yours… *** Today, I read this story from the beginning again and I realized how cleverly you paid tribute to the original movie through this delightful B&T version. Intruducing Dana as the manager’s character I loved so much in the Roberts-Gere classic is a genius idea – and Carmen makes a perfect apparition too with this irresistible quote about so-called “aunts” ! Because of you, never I could watch this great movie the same way, for our beloved two SO ideally personify the main characters… And here’s always this so endearing touch of yours, my so talented author, depicting hidden feelings and emotional torments with your usual art and intelligence. You, my friend, are a beautiful mind and heart. Period. Thousand thanks for being who you are – someone I’d be so happy to know “for real” but, in waiting (one can hope !), I’m delighted to share “virtual friendship” with ! Justlove”M”talent – A.

    18. hellooo! it’s so good to read another chapter of this story, in fact is so good to read any chapter from you… If i would be Tina i think that i would kick more than one buttons, but Dana and Carmen were so nice to her. I hope to read another chapter from you soon… hugs many hugs

    19. Hey I just got caught up with this story again and just wanted to make sure you know how much I am enjoying it. They way you portrayed the women in the dress shop treating Tina was so typical and just not right. Too bad Dana didn’t march down to the shop with her and demand an apology. At least Dana treated her with respect. I can’t wait for your next post so I can see where this is going! Thanks for posting!

    22. wow I have been waiting for this forever. this is so well written but alas you post not so often. however it is worth while waiting for. would love to read more soon.

    24. Hey my dear friend!!! I read this yesterday but had to wait to comment because I’ve been super busy. I love this movie and your take on it, Carmen was so sweet wasn’t she?! Keep on going Hun…and I think I owe ya an e-mail so I’ll hopefully get on that today too! *HUGS*

    27. Hehehe, you’re back! And with PW, nonetheless!… Grrrrreat chap’, my friend! It’s amazing how you can stick to the original storyline of the movie and still make it a “B&T special”!!! It’s great to have the inner feelings evoked, and most especially when they are enhanced like they always are with B&T. Can’t wait for this amazing scene of the bar lounge when Bette discovers the beautiful and sexy Ms Kennard… Nice addition of Dana and Carmen, by the way. I was first surprised to have Dana in that role, but you totally made me buy it. Well done! Thanks for continuing this amazing story, and at the risk of abusing your marvelous generosity… please, give us BOF…! Talk soon mate!

    28. hehe, cool…i hadn’t caught this one before, but i’m a total sucker for those cross overs. fantastic concept, though i had a strange thought that maybe helena could be tina’s pimp. then i remembered that pimps are basically evil creatures and i had to give my head a shake. dana and carmen are fantastic choices for those two roles. good show!

    29. been waiting sooo long for this story, it’s one of my top favourites… thank you so much for posting it. Please please please post soon…

    30. Hello there… how r u? First of all… CONGRATS on the award :D You so well deserve it with your writing talent :) Oh gosh, how I’ve missed your stories. And this one sure brings me back to the scenes in Pretty Woman. And hmm… looks like Carmen has found out Tina falling in love with Bette before the blond even knows it ;) PPS.

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