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Love life and everything in-between part3
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She headed back to the table but not to join her friends, to get her jacket she had had enough.
Shane walked off into the night, why? why did Carmen have to basis her on her reputation on what she had heard, Jobs-worth Shane thought to herself…It would be more thank her job as the new manager/owner of AlterEgo to be seen with Shane.
Well that’s bul****t she thought, I wish my rep didn’t go against me so much people don’t understand they don’t know me, but what of I had a diff rep what if I changes then would the beautiful Carmen give me a chance? IM not asking for sex, for a date just a convocation would be nice, no f**k her if she doesn’t like me for who I am then why should I change?, theirs plenty more girls out there that I could get like that.
It was like having a argument with herself, Shane was confused big time, and then before she knew it she was heading back to the club at full speed, she walked right passes the bouncers on the door, they put there hands out to stop her but Carmen smiled at them and nodded. Shane did not see this smile; she ignored her friends who saw her walk back in.
What’s up with her Dana asked?
Who knows, its Shane replied Tina?
Shane knew exactly what was up though, Carmen didn’t like her for her rep, well why should she care if Carmen liked her or not? Shane spotted a girl on the floor she was pretty, a bit shorter than Shane, blond hair and in a mini skirt, Shane smirked to herself she knew she was about to do something very selfish but right now she couldn’t care.
Cut to Shane’s bedroom
The blond girl from the club slammed Shane against the wall and was kissing her all over. Apparently Shane’s drink and chat up lines had worked.
Shane moaned slightly as the girls lips touched her neck and she took of the girls top, Shane wished she could remember this girls name but all she could think about was Carmen, the only name in her mind ‘Carmen’ the blond was now undoing Shane’s jeans, and then it happened
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I have always been one for Shane finding a love like Bette’s and Tina’s, BUT I never liked the Carman character. Good writing though!!!
hey i love this new fic, its a great start and can’t wait to read more, yay for sharmen..PPS:)
Yes for an another update! I like that Carmen is an owner of the club and that club is creating such a buzz. Can’t wait till Shane comes to Carmen’s club. I like that Carmen is not giving easily into Shane , I wouldn’t want them to hook up just yet.Please do update soon.
Like Shane’s POV but I am also curious what or how Carmen feels for Shane. Good update. Thanks!
Hey, baby . . . this iz a hell-a-kool story and you’ve got this tomboi hooked 4-sho!!! I’m excited about where this iz goin . . . and i like how Carmen iz kina playin hard to get ~wiggles eyebrowz~ . . . But yeah . . . Um . . . Longer chapterz and I’m scr8t . . . Like alwayz from me, Baby-gurl, LYLAS ;p . . . Stank, da one and only, chicka!!! Post soon!!!!!!
Cool, another update so soon. I don’t mind your chapters being short if you post this often! Please keep writing. It’s great to have some new Sharmen to read.
your first l word fanfic? it’s off to a really good start. i would like to see carmens pov too, longer chapters would also be really nice. =]
Thankhs people, yea its my first proper fan-fic, will have a longer chapter next time was just posting short chapters to start with to get people hooked, carmens p.o.v is on it was.