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Love life and everything in-between part4
Anyway Shane though she was fast running out of reasons to avoid Carmen and the club.
Cut to club:
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I hope I didn’t really offend her, Carmen was thinking out loud to herself and she looked through the account books. Maybe it wasn’t such a good idea to warn her of if she is so popular. Then again its not like I told her to get out the club and stay out. I just had to let her no I knew her game, I might have been a bit harsh and unfair though, its was hardly like she made a play for me.
The problem was Shane wasn’t usually the type of girl Carmen would go for, but the moment she saw her in the planet something inside her jumped about 50foot, eager to find out who Shane was she asked on of her co-workers ( a decision, Carmen thought, she regretted) after hearing the dirt dished on Shane she was still just as keen but was wary she had had her heart broken before, and as someone new in this place it probely wasn’t a good idea to appear vonrable. Carmen closed the account book ‘oh well she said to herself, at least the clubs a hit’ and she walked off to open up.
Cut to Shane/Jenny’s house.
You sure you wont come please, jenny was trying to plead with Shane
Im really not up for it, replied Shane
Is it because if what Carmen said, cause quite frankly I think its stupid to avoid being with you friends because of what someone you don’t even know said.
Shane sighed, jenny had a pint, she had reluctantly told jenny of the conversation that had passed between her and the club owner, conversation Shane smiled to herself, was more like a lecture.
Please jenny went on.
Ok fine, Shane was shocked to have agreed but she needed to get out the house, she hadn’t left it for nearly 4 days.
Cut to the club.
All of the gang were surprised when they saw Shane walking to there table arm in arm with jenny (they did this sometimes when one of them was feeling a bit low) but none of them commented.
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Nice update. Don’t leave me hanging. Keep writing!
hey thanks, anyone no how i can get my storys to go onto a new page, rather then have the them in one long line?
hey just found ur story! its great!! i cant wait for more. PPS
well, now that I’ve read more… it’s coming nicely, and your writing is lively… but I feel you have a slight problem with rating ;-)… none of the 4 posts should have been rated NC-17 :-) (keep that rating for explicit sex scenes, or very rough talking)… the action, so far, has been quite “innocent”, more like a PG-13 or lower ;-) Keep on writing,please
hey helene78 thanks for that, im not to sure how the ratings work, in england we have a compleatey diffrent system, it will become more NC-17later on but for now i will change the ratings, thanks again.