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All you need is love – chapter 42
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ALL YOU NEED IS LOVE — Chapter 42
After Bette and Tina had said farewell to her parents they looked at each other for a few minutes as they stood on the pavement. Tina could see that Bette was still upset; while her instinct was to drag Bette home and make love to her she knew that they needed some time to talk
“Fancy a walk though the park back to the cars?”
Bette nodded “I’d like that “
They entered the park and Tina slipped her hand in Bette’s as they walked in silence for several minutes. Bette had been taken aback by how vivid her memory of Emily had been –it had scared her that something as small as an inscription in a book could do that to her – to transport her back to a very different time. She squeezed Tina’s hand and was reassured by the way the squeeze was returned.
“The two of you are very different personalities “Bette remarked
Tina wasn’t 100% sure what Bette was referring to – she raised an eyebrow in query
“You and Emily I mean. There are times when I see similarities but mainly I see differences”
“Your tastes change and I would be more concerned if I was exactly like her – that would be fairly scary “
Bette laughed “I guess so. I don’t know if the two of you would have got on”
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“Don’t suppose she would have liked me sleeping with you “Tina was trying to keep the conversation light.
“Probably not. I think I’ve told you that Emily and Alice didn’t get on “
“You did. I know Alice can be an ass but she is very lovable and she adores you – that’s really obvious. Can I ask how Helena got on with her? “
Bette laughed “Good question. It was okay most of the time but it could be -well it was a tense relationship between them “
“Both of them fighting over you? “Tina accurately perceived
“Emily could never get it out of her head that Helena and I had been lovers or where still lovers “
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I’m with the others on this one. I don’t think Tina should punish Rebecca but try to make her understand that resorting to physical mayhem is not the answer. Praise her for standing up to the bully and defending her mother but not to do the physical thing.Even tho, I’m very happy that she has a powerful right hook. Good for her. The school should punish him for showing his bigotry and make him apologize to Rebecca for saying such mean things. Loved it. PPS
While it’s highly amusing that Becky hauled off and knocked the bully into tomorrow, one can’t always resort to a right hook as one day someone could come along and counter the right hook with a fatal blow. I can see having her apologize for hitting the bully, but NOT apologizing for standing up for Tina. That would be plain stupid. But if Becky REALLY wants to actually knock some sense into this guy should the bullying continue, she should provoke him into trying to hit her first so she can block or dodge it then come back in with the winning punch. ;) Martial arts may be just what she needs. Have a good visit with C! :D
Oh, and Bette telling Tina she would have left Emily for her = WOW moment! I’m happy Bette is letting go.
I have to confess that I would have done the exact same thing. Well no, I would have use Danny’s way and then Becky’s… Just to mak sure the moron understands!
Just catching up on your story. And truly, you had Tina’s father give a very good suggestion: “karate or kung fu classes” actually teach the students not to strike without need. Plus, certified instructors do teach mental discipline and self-restraint along with the physical skills. Now I’m not sure if your Becky character would consider extra lessons every week a punishment, or a treat, but it wasn’t at all a bad idea. Thanks for writing it!
Why aren’t both children made to apologize and be suspended? They were both involved in the fight. One provoked the fight and the other took action. They should receive the same punishment.
i agree with funnyone. have a very good time. thanks.
First off, great writing in conveying Bette feelings for Tina, especially where Emily is concerned. I’m with the others when it come to Becky. She shouldn’t be punished, she stood up for not only herself but her mother. But she does need to understand that violence is not always the answer, and once you let someone get to you, then they’ve always got you. Be the bigger person, until you can’t, then deck them.
Tina’s mom was way out of line with that comment to Bette about her son. OK we all know that what Becca did was well deserved by this bully, but you cannot reward a child for hitting someone it is not the right thing to do. Unless you have been hit first you should keep your hands to yourself. I know I know easer said than done especially when you are young. They should sit her down and have a serious talk with her letting her know they love her for standing up for them, but if it happens again that she will have to be punished.
Goodness your writing is excellent! I love this story. Glad Bette is opening up to Tina about Emily, and how much more she feels for Tina that she did Emily. That must make Tina feel great because she know how much Bette loved/loves Emily – so to know that she is loved to an even greater extent must be a great feeling. I think Tina should let Becky off with a verbal warning this time, and tell her if she physically fights with anyone in the future (regardless of how much she is provoked) that she will be severely punished. I bet Ollie is off somewhere getting his ‘fix’. I don’t trust him at all. Hope you have a great weekend Ally! Thank you for posting!
“Will you stop freaking sexually harassing me ?”. LOL.
so it’s just surprise after surpise in this chapter. First Bette saying that she would’ve left Emily if she had moved next to Tina while Emily was still alive….that’s a pretty big revelation. And now Becky is in trouble for punching some little biggot in school. I agree that she shouldn’t hit kids but i wouldn’t make her apologize unless the other little bully had to apologize for saying what he did about Tina. As for punishment, i say make Becky right a little essay on why words are more powerful thna fist and call it a day. That’s punishemnt enough in my eyes. Theys ay the punishment should fit the crime and i don’t think the crime warrants severe punishment. So i can’t for the little family picnic to see how Sarah esp. treats Bette’s kids (esp. Danny). PPS!
I don’t think Tina should punish her daughter for standing up for what she believed it, the brat deserved to get hit! Now the daughter is probably going to hate Tina for a while because of it and that really isn’t good. But also, I think it’s time for Bette and Tina to have some alone time and hot time as well!
what a great question – Becky must learn to use her words I guess and all that. Nice chapter – time for some loving for these ladies I think. Have a great weekend with your sweetie.
Ally, That was awesome. Loved the way that Bette and Tina are just comfortabnle with each other. Bette’s statement that she would have left Emily for Tina was jaw-dropping. It completely stunned me and Tina. This demonstrated just how deep there connection is. Then on to the Becky beating a bully incident. Bette and Tina’s parents’ reactions were spot on. Even Tina want to say so but I do agree that Becky needs to learn that fighting is not the best plan of action in the first case. You often need to be sneaky and get back at bullies usiong your brains first. Although a good punch can be a final options. You had me rolling in the aisles with the whole dialogue and scene. More please. Thank you so much for lighening my day. Your Loyal Fan.
No, Becky should not be punished for standing up for her mom. She should apologize for resorting to violence when it wasn’t neccesary and taught to channel her anger better. And Tina should INSIST the little asshole provacateur be punished and apologize for being a bigot and and a bully. Bon voyage, Ally. Will you give us the NC-17 we all deserve when you get back?
Great chapter and Im with Anngie Mosby and can’t wait to see what’s next, thanks!
I guess I have been kind of a silent reader for a long time now but i loveeeee love love this story! haha…Thank you for writing it! And i hope you continue soon!