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The Hunted 4
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Shane looked around the bar and was impressed. It was a different crowd of women to her usual haunts, and they were definitely worth looking at. But the one who caught her attention the most was Carmen. She noticed the heads turning to look at the two of them as they went to get a drink, but she was used to it. It didn’t mean anything. Instead she kept her focus on the curves of the latinos arse that moved infront of her. She’d already been caught out for staring, so may as well keep doing it!
"You’re staring again, aren’t you?" Carmen turned to face Shane, catching her out again.
"And what if I am?" Shane moved in closer.
"Maybe I don’t like being stared at"
"Oh, I think you do"
"And how about you? Do you like being checked out? What if I were to do this?" Carmen let her eyes roam over Shane’s body, checking her out from head to toe "Or this?" she circled Shane, taking in every inch of her body.
"Maybe I like it" Shane turned to face Carmen again.
"Oh really?" Carmen leant into Shane, so close that they could feel each other breathing, before leaning past her to the bar "Two beers please"
She grinned at the look of disappointment on Shane’s face. "Something wrong Shane?"
"Yes. You" Shane grunted. She wasn’t used to women playing hard to get with her, and my God this one was driving her crazy.
Carmen paid for the beers and handed one to Shane, grinning the whole while. She leaned against Shane, tactfully positioning her thigh between Shane’s legs and applying pressure. Her mouth rested alongside Shane’s ear. "What is it about me?" she whispered.
Shane was beginning to enjoy this game "Your eyes. Your smile. The way you laugh. Your ass. In fact, strike that, your whole body" Shane explained in her low husky voice.
"Well" said Carmen, pulling away "maybe you’re just gonna have to watch me shake this body on the dancefloor"
Shane groaned as Carmen moved her leg and strutted her way to the dancefloor. She chose not to follow, instead leaning back on the bar, sip on her beer, and take in the glorious sight that was infront of her.
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Good update…i like the interaction between Carmen and Shane
good up date whats up with H don’t let her be a victim, shes kool. and up next B saving Tee’s ass…LOL!!!!
good grief, someone really wants tina dead…could helena be playing around though? how come she was the only one that got sick? maybe she wasn’t sick but just pretended to set up marina?
That bit at the end was adorable! No regrets. I don’t suspect Marina, too easy! Maybe it’s a group thing.. I still think maybe Eric.. How intriguing would it be if it turned out to be Helena? And the cake tale was just a cover. Hm.. Well, I’m really liking your tale. Post soon! ADx
nice chapter. I love the end. Tina is taking charge a bit. Bette’s a goner huh? I like the pace of the story as well. good job.
Just caught up. I’m raelly liking this story. Welcome back. I liked your old stuff also. So keep going. Thanks for taking the time.
More Sharmen please!
It could be Marina,but still think Eric is behind it thanks
Great another chapter, glad to see even in the face of trouble B&T have connected, so wonder who is doing everything to Tina, hope we find out soon. Please post again soon.
Hi! I am loving the story a lot. I am glad Tina is being bold regarding her feelings for Bette :) Have a question though – why is someone after Tina’s life? What has she done? What is the reason some wants her dead? I don’t seem to recall if I read about that earlier on. Thanks for the story. PPS :)
I just caught up. I am really liking this. I am glad Tina is ok for now. I just hope that B&T will take there time and first find out who is tring to kill Tina. Great story!!!!PPS
Good Shane and Carmen, hope Helena is ok, I don’t think is Marina but still think is eric. Woohoo Tina taking charge this time, love it. Please post soon, thanks!
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