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Chapter 11
“Did I do something wrong?” Tina inquired after a moment.
Tina was afraid of what Bette might reply to her question. How could something be wrong when every single part of her body was telling her the contrary…. that embrace and that kiss… they both felt so right. She felt she was at the right place when she was held or kissed by Bette… the oddest thing on earth to her… for Tina had only been kissed and held by Bette twice…
“T… you did nothing wrong… trust me.” Was all Bette managed to say.
But how could Bette explain herself… what would be the right words to describe everything that she just felt and not scare Tina at the same time. And Tina remained silent, just staring at Bette, wondering about what just had happened. Bette felt the urge to speak again, she could either be completely honest or try and disguise her answer.
“Look Tina, it´s hard to explain for me. But let me assure you…. you did nothing wrong.” And right then she made her decision.
“Tina… I am not the person you think I am…. as hard as it is to admit…. usually a kiss from a beautiful woman, for me, is a prelude to something else that doesn´t require deep feelings of connection, and in this case, with you… you are a beautiful woman who just kissed me… and I´ve never felt more alive or connected to someone in my entire life. This is something I don´t fully expect you to understand… because hell… even I don´t. And it scares me… I´m not used to deal with such intense feelings.”
Bette quietly concluded her statement, and she inmediately regreted what she just did. She had exposed herself. She was letting someone else know what she was feeling and thinking. And not just any someone… but Tina, the woman who was rocking her world for the last day and a half.
Tina had not yet fully recovered from the moment they had shared and Bette was putting her on another trance now. She wasn´t expecting her to release such a phrase. She saw Bette´s emotions showing through her eyes and her whole facial expression. And she felt suddenly filled with tenderness, not a tenderness that says I pitty you… but a tenderness that says thank you for being honest, thank you for walking that extra mile and putting what I also feel into words.
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LOL it was so cool if Tina dropped the trey! Just kidding!:D I`m with Lamentamini , Tina is gonna meet the family! It will be fun! :DGreat chapter and PPS
I like the whole freshness of their relationship. The time they are spending together just reinforcing the fact that they have never felt this way with anyone else before. Can’t wait for Bette and Tina to have some alone time.. even if its just a car ride to the dinner or something. PPS.
I would like to go sailing. Well maybe motoring around the water. So Bette will be introducing Tina to the gang. Can’t wait for that to happen.
Damn Bette look hot in bikini, and let see more of B&T. Please post more, thanks!
Fantastic! So Tina meets the gang I hope it doesn’t make her run in the oposite direction, especially meeting Al.
More Bette in a bikini…*thud* So Tina’s gonna meet the framily. Oh Lord…lol
Bette in a bikini? On an expensive boat? Am I in Heaven? PPS
I agree ashtuck!!! this history is so good, its makes you want more everytime you read a chapter, I wonder how it’ll be when bette and tina make love for the first time. I’m a bettina addict!!!
What a lovely journey you create for us, especially for the most romantic of us – something I’m proud to be to the core ! ^_^ A journey through true feelings’ discovery and slow realization, full of questions and incertitudes – just like the infinite ocean under light clouds… The so sweet and delicate way you depict our dearest Bette & Tina’s slow journey to each others, the tenderness one can so easily feel behind your writing, is such an endearing tribute to Love’s so many splendored things. Thank you for sharing – and never count your readers and/or commenters, for quality will always be better than quantity ! (something one can say about any good author’s pages) Warm regards – A.
Ok, I agree with every comment so far.. Bette in a bikini.. *jaw drop* Mmm :) More of this! Soon! I wonder what happens when Bette moves away :(
Damn more of Bette in a bikini.( jaw hit the floor). I still want to know is Bette going to move away? Tina is going to meet the family oh boy!!! Great Update!!! Thanks PPVS
You really have a way with words Anne. Describing Bette sailing and in that bikini just about put me out! LOL. You gotta post more of this soon kiddo!!
Damn, this story of yours is soooo endearing, Anne. I find it almost impossible not to be hooked on it. At least, I know I have been right from the start. This is beautiful, keep up the fantastic job. Thank you.