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    BELIEVING IN LOVE – Chapter 24

    Chapter 24

    Bette stood defensively in the hotel room feeling nauseous at the scene in front of her. Her eyes quickly scanned the room, first taking in the candles placed around the room. She noticed a cheap bottle of wine in the plastic ice bucket with 2 cups still wrapped in the hotel plastic sitting in front of it. Continuing around, her eyes fell on the wrapped condom on the nightstand.

    Bette felt a breeze behind her as her eyes slammed into Darren’s once more. Tina quickly ran through the door and to the bathroom, banging on the door calling out for Angelica. Angelica wasted no time in opening the door and falling into Tina’s outstretched arms.

    “I’m so sorry Mom,” Angelica said as she shook in Tina’s arms from fear.

    “Did he touch you at all Angie?” Tina was insistent in being answered.

    “No,” Angelica was shaking her head as tears streamed down her face. “I was in the bathroom afraid….”

    “Get in the car,” Tina directed Angelica handing her the keys. “Lock the door and don’t open it. Get down in the backseat so the police won’t see you.”

    “Police?” Darren visibly swallowed the lump in his throat.

    “Worried?” Bette challenged. “You didn’t think that you could try to have sex with an under-aged girl at your age and not be punished did you? Add to that the under-aged drinking and you are in very big trouble aren’t you?”

    The red and blue lights from the police cars began to flash across the white walls of the hotel room. Darren looked around nervously as he felt himself barely able to take a breath while looking into Bette’s angry eyes.

    “Fucking look at me when I’m talking to you!” Bette screamed as her temper flared beyond her control. “Or is that too much to ask of someone that clearly doesn’t respect women, including my daughter?”

    “I didn’t force…” Darren stammered unsure of what to say to Angelica’s parents.

    “Shut your mouth,” Bette warned in an intimidating voice. The seriousness of her voice hit Darren when she stopped yelling and calmly began to approach him. “When I want you to speak, you’ll know.”

    Tina walked behind Bette and grabbed her arm in an effort to stop progressing on the young man who had so frightened their daughter.

    “How did you get her here?”

    “I didn’t force her,” Darren began to feel his eyes cloud over with unshed tears. “She wanted to come to the party.”

    “Did she know you were planning on this private party?” Bette’s voice rose once more.

    “No,” Darren replied quietly, wiping at his eyes as he stood still in the corner of the room. “I didn’t mean to scare her. I care about your daughter very much.”

    Darren watched in fear as anger flashed quickly in Bette’s eyes.

    “You care about my daughter and yet put her in a position where she’s cowering in the bathroom in fear?” Bette stepped closer to Darren causing him to lean back as far as he could to put some distance between himself and Bette. “Ever hear the ever popular saying ‘no means no’? How many times did my daughter say no?”

    Tina quickly grabbed Darren’s suit coat and began to rifle through it. She checked the outside pockets first, not successful in finding the item she desired.

    “What are you doing?” Darren shrieked. “You can’t go through my stuff!”

    “You raise your voice again to my wife,” Bette said in a tone just above a growl. “And cops will be the least of your worries.”

    Tina’s hand found his cell phone, grateful she was correct in her assumption of it being in his suit coat and took it out. Thankfully, it was already turned on. She pushed the top button and began to scroll down the address book until she found an entrance resembling the one she wanted to find.

    “What are you doing?” Darren asked quietly, afraid of what Bette was liable to do to him if he talked in more than a whisper.

    “I’m saving you from yourself,” Tina said as she put the phone to her ear. “I’m giving you a chance despite the voice that’s screaming at me telling me to beat the ever-living shit out of you or at the very least hand you over to the police. I’m calling your parents to come get you.”

    “I vote for option one,” Bette said shocked at Tina’s action.

    “If you don’t recognize this as a defining moment in your life young man,” Tina said in anger. “You better think again. You’re at a crossroad between the police taking you away or your parents having a discussion with us and putting you so hard under their thumb you can’t breathe.”

    Darren slumped forward, the last of his cocky swagger disintegrated, knowing the reaction his parents would have at his actions.

    “Rest assured if they don’t put you under their thumb,” Tina waited as the phone rang in her ear. “I will. You so much as even think of Angelica again and I’ll be on you faster than you can blink!”

    Bette watched as Tina cleared her throat and began to speak into Darren’s phone. She identified herself calmly, explaining where she was and that Darren was in front of her barely dressed in a hotel room that he tried to share with Angelica. Tina’s side of the conversation was short, but there was no mistaking the person on the other end that felt compelled to yell and assure Tina they would be there quickly to pick Darren up and discuss what happened with Bette and Tina.

    “Your mother and father are on the way,” Tina shut the phone and placed it on the table in front of her. “I suggest you put some pants on before they get here.”

    Darren stood still, afraid of moving out of his corner while Bette stood perilously close, cowering over him.

    “Can I just…” Darren nodded toward his pants asking Bette for permission for him put them on.

    “You’re very lucky she’s here,” Bette threw his pants at him keeping him backed into a corner. “If it were just me you’d have your ass in the back of a cop car right about now.”

    Across the road in a small diner, which was mostly deserted, sat a group of 4 kids just thankful to be away from the scene where many of their classmates were being brought out of the hotel room by police officers. Kristen sat down and smiled at Angelica’s friends as they watched in fear when some of their squad members were escorted out.

    “What’s going to happen to them?” Cathy asked. “I suddenly feel guilty for calling the police.”

    “They’ll get some help they need,” Kristen laid her hand on Cathy’s on top of the table. “You did the right thing. Just think if one or more of them got behind the wheel drinking what they had. You more then likely saved someone’s life tonight.”

    Alice peeked outside and watched the scene unfold in front of her.

    “My God do you see some of these dresses?” Alice scoffed. “Why wear anything at all if your dress barely covers your ta-ta’s?”

    Kristen nudged Alice as the waitress served the table a round of waters and handed out menus. Alice pushed her menu to the side as she continued to spy on the scene across the street.

    “What do you think is happening with Angelica right now?” Renee asked.

    “You honestly want to know?” Alice shot back and waited until Renee nodded her head and then continued. “My guess is if she called her own moms she’s about as scared as you get and she’s collapsing in Tina’s arms right now as Bette attempts to murder the boy she was with.”

    “You did the right thing in calling for help,” Kristen reassured once again. “Calling the police and Bette was a very good idea on your part.”

    Alice saw a figure running across the parking lot quickly and pointed at the young girl to use as an example.

    “I bet she’ll get caught, she looks scared out of her mind.”

    Alice stopped and suddenly realized it was Angelica and she was shaking so badly she couldn’t open Tina’s car door, simply dropping the keys on the ground and trying to find them through teary eyes.

    “Is that’s Angie?” Alice pointed for Kristen to confirm.

    “Oh my God it is!”

    Alice saw Angelica finally open Tina’s car door sobbing uncontrollably. She climbed in the back and disappeared from sight.

    “You wait here with them,” Alice said to Kristen. “Order something so it isn’t obvious that they were part of this party. I’ll be back with Angie.”

    “The cops are starting to haul kids out of that hotel and she looks scared to death,” Kristen said starting to feel the seriousness of the moment when Alice ran across the busy street to Tina’s car quickly.

    “I feel sick to my stomach,” Renee said. “I don’t know if I can order something and keep it down.”

    “Oh me too,” Kristen smiled warmly. “Just think of how sick Angie feels right now. Order sodas and fries and we can all pick at them.”

    Alice knocked quietly on the window to the backseat of Tina’s car making Angelica jump in fear. She was curled up in the corner of the back seat with tears streaming down her face.

    “Honey open up,” Alice said warmly. “I can’t help you if you don’t open up PJ.”

    At the sound of her nickname given to her by her aunts, Angelica pressed the unlock button on Tina’s key ring, unable to actually open the door. Alice bent down and rubbed Angelica’s arms to warm her shaking body.

    “PJ let’s get you across the street to safety ok?”

    Alice reached into the car and pulled her from the backseat, wrapping an arm around her shoulders and taking the keys from her hand. Alice quickly hit the lock button and began to walk across the street to the diner where her friends all sat.

    When the doors opened and she walked inside, Angelica immediately walked into Kristen’s arms and began to cry. She felt the woman’s arms that she once hated for dating Bette wrap around her tight and hold her close. Angelica was thankful that Kristen had forgiven her for her behavior while she and Bette were together, as she always seemed to be scheming to break them up.

    “I’ve got you,” Kristen whispered as she smoothed her hand over Angelica’s hair. “Did he….?”

    Kristen directed her question to Alice, hinting without saying it, that she wanted to know if Darren had taken advantage of her.

    “I don’t know, she’s just been crying.”

    “Honey?” Kristen pulled back to look into Angelica’s eyes. “Did he do something to you that he shouldn’t have?”

    “No, I locked myself in the bathroom,” Angelica sputtered as Cathy made it to her feet and rubbed Angelica’s back.

    “I’m proud that you stopped him,” Cathy said to her friend. “Mama B told me you had called her before I did.”

    “You called her?”

    “I was trying to help.”

    “I don’t deserve your friendship,” Angelica sniffled as she hugged her friend. “Thank you for trying to help me, but I had to make the call myself.”

    “Where are your moms PJ?”

    “They were staying with Darren in the room,” Angelica began to calm down as Cathy rested her arm around Angelica’s shoulders. “Mom told me to go to her car and lock the door to be safe.”

    “God I wouldn’t want to be that boy right now,” Alice said shaking her head. “Well let’s pig out on junk food and watch the rest of these kids get hauled out by the cops. It’s like a bad episode of ‘Cops’, you can’t look away.”

    Angelica smiled for the first time in hours at Alice’s joke, thankful to be safe and in the company of those that truly cared for her.

    The quiet knock at the door could barely be heard as additional police cars pulled up to transport the kids from the hotel to the police station so parents could be called to deal with their children and the tickets that were being issued.

    Tina moved back and cracked the door open, seeing a tall man and a shorter thin woman that resembled Darren standing nervously on the other side.

    “Ms. Porter?”

    “Please call me Tina,” Tina opened the door and quickly ushered them inside. “This is my wife Bette.”

    “Thank you so much for calling us,” Darren’s mother said grateful to have the chance to intervene before the police would have ushered Darren into one of their cars and tarnished his record at such a young age. “I’m Leslie and this is my husband Troy.”

    Bette and Tina shook hands with both of them as Darren silently let tears fall down his face, now sitting on the bed.

    “What did you do?” Leslie demanded in anger as her husband looked around the room, his jaw clenching as he took in what his son had set up.

    “I didn’t force her into anything,” Darren reasoned.

    “Is this wine?” Leslie held the bottle up close to Darren’s face. “Where would you get wine when you’re underage?”

    “The party store down the street sells it to all of us.”

    “Well I’ll certainly be handing him into the authorities,” Leslie said firmly. “Do I have to tell you how disappointed I am in you?”

    Darren shook his head as he cried harder.

    “If it weren’t for Angelica’s parents you’d have your ass in one of those cop cars down there young man!”

    “Mom…”

    “I don’t want to hear an excuse Darren! You owe Angelica and her parents a sincere apology and I want to hear it now.”

    “I am so sorry,” Darren said through tears. “I would never have forced her, but she didn’t tell me how afraid she was.”

    Tina shook her head, knowing she needed to be the spokesperson for the Kennard-Porter family as she glanced at Bette and saw her defensive posture and anger still flaming in her eyes as she paced next to the bed.

    “You need to party less,” Tina said in a calm voice. “And concentrate on other things other than just having a good time. You both do, Angelica isn’t innocent in this either. She’s still grounded from the party at Tracy’s house a week ago.”

    “You were at a party a week ago?” Leslie shot an angry look at Darren. “Was this the night you told us you were spending the night at your friend’s house?”

    “Yes Ma’am.”

    “Drinking was involved?” Troy asked in a deep, intimidating voice.

    “Yes Sir,” Darren nodded looking straight ahead afraid of making eye contact with his parents.

    “Get up.”

    Darren did as demanded and tried to stand firm as his father shoved his suit coat into his chest.

    “I will guarantee you that this won’t happen again Ladies,” Troy said in Tina and Bette’s direction. “I want to thank you for saving him from the fate of his friends that are being arrested. But I’m not sure he deserves it.”

    Troy led Darren out of the room with a firm hand on the back of his neck.

    “Once again,” Leslie shook Tina’s hand. “I can’t thank you both enough for giving us a chance to intervene.”

    “You’re welcome,” Tina shook her hand back and watched her quickly follow her husband and son desperate to avoid the police that were now combing the hallways looking for additional teenagers that shouldn’t be there.

    Bette placed her hands on the nightstand in front of her and allowed her head to drop forward. She sighed as she felt the tension settle into her shoulders quickly. Tina put a hand between Bette’s shoulder blades and massaged as she spoke quietly.

    “We have a very frightened child in the back of our car.”

    “We have two very frightened mothers right here. God T, what if…” Bette stopped, swallowing hard. Her hand closed over the condom on the nightstand in front of her and crushed it tightly in her fist, punishing the silent accomplice to her daughter’s terror.

    “I know… I know,” Tina replied quietly, laying her cheek against Bette’s taut back and letting one arm slip around her waist as the other continued a soothing stroke up and down Bette’s arm. They stood for a few moments taking strength and calm from each other. “Let’s go get our baby,” Tina pulled on Bette’s arm to move her from the spot she was standing in.

    Bette and Tina walked out the door and closed it behind them. Bette saw no reason to turn the key back in, given the manager of the hotel was tied up with the police being questioned on why the hotel allowed under-aged children to rent hotel rooms without the proper identification and qualifications.

    Tina looked out across to the diner to ensure that Alice and Kristen were there. Alice quickly saw them and dialed Bette’s phone waiting for her to pick it up. Once she did, she informed Bette that she also had Angelica in the diner and they would wait for her and Tina to come there before heading to Bette and Tina’s house.

    Bette shut the phone and began the descent down the stairs when she heard her name being screamed from the parking lot.

    “Bette!” Tracy called out as a police officer began to walk her to the squad car. “Bette help me!”

    Bette looked down and saw Tracy dragging her feet trying to stop the progression to the police car.

    “Young lady, unless you have an adult who can vouch for you, you are getting in this car!”

    “She will,” Tracy nodded in Bette’s direction. “Bette over here!”

    Bette and Tina stopped in front of Tracy as tears streamed down her face and she struggled to get her arms free from the officer’s grip. Tina slipped her arm around Bette’s waist as she stood there with her arms folded defensively across her chest.

    “Ma’am, do you know who this is?”

    “I do,” Bette smiled at the officer relishing in the opportunity that presented itself moments ago.

    “Is she accompanied by you?”

    “That she is not,” Bette said happy at the shocked look that crossed Tracy’s face. “I’m sorry Tracy but this is for your own good. You’re out of control and unfortunately, unless someone forces your parents to deal with you, they won’t and you’ll keep acting out to get their attention.”

    Tracy felt the harsh reality of Bette’s words as she stepped closer to her.

    “This is for your own good Tracy, but I’m letting them take you to the station.”

    Tracy felt her eyes well up with unshed tears.

    “I’m afraid,” Tracy mumbled.

    “You should be, but you’re safer with them than you are with me or yourself at the moment.”

    Bette grabbed Tina’s hand and walked hand in hand across the street to make their way to the diner and their daughter.

    “I’m proud of you,” Tina smiled as she squeezed Bette’s hand. “I thought you were going to kill Darren.”

    “It definitely crossed my mind until you called his parents.”

    “And then how you handled Tracy,” Tina smiled. “You were right, her parents need to be forced into dealing with her, which is sad.”

    “It is sad,” Bette approached the outside door to the diner. “Unfortunately for Angelica she’ll have so much parental attention she’s going to drown in it.”

    Tina chuckled as they stepped inside to address the teenagers who barely escaped the same fate Tracy was facing, several hours in detention waiting to be picked up by what was sure to be angry parents.

    Comments

    1. WOW!!!! Gumby, That was WOW!!!! I would have killed the little SOB. I have a 12 year old daughter and this could be me in a few years dealing with kids and no parents to stop them. I do hope Angie really knows how lucky she is to have friend and family the would do anything for her. Thank you PPS

    2. G! You made my night! Damn I sure wished Bette would have choked out Tracy but I guess she has be more adult about it! lol! I hope Angie is not let off lightly after this ordeal. Post soon!

    3. awesome Gumby….AWESOME!!!! it would b interesting to see if Al makes a joke or 2 about Tina choice of clothing or something else to break the ice given the situation or so. Was a great chapter Gumby….looking forward to the consequences of Angie’s behavior. not so much the tear jerkers that I know u are bound to pour forth with Megan etc.

    4. I enjoyed every moment of this and its scary to be a parent these days.It isn’t easy.I have a 10yr old who says that she plans on being a virgin forever which I find kinda funny.I loved the way Bette and Tina handled Darren and Tracey.Can’t wait to read the next chapter.

    5. I am not clear on the ages again, is Angelica around 14 and Darren 16 or 17? I was kind of hoping that Bette would turn him over to the police for attempted statutory rape and for having the booze. These are not just lapses of judgement, but crimes, and he should have been dealt with more harshly. I also hope that Alice doesn’t go overboard in coddling Angie. I am curious to see what they are going to do with her. She is a frightened kid now but she wasn’t when she was lying and stealing the money for the dress and sneaking out..making sure she got her way..sounds like someone else I know!! Seems Miss Angie feels quite a sense of entitlement in her life…so hopefully she will be feeling quite a sense of discipline now!!

    6. What a story!! This runs every possible emotion… your writing is just incredible. I’m trying to prepare myself mentally for the next few chapters… what a ride!!

    7. I am just waiting for Angie’s “but it’s not faaaaair! I didn’t doooo anything!” (love that selective memory for teens) in which case if I were Bette I would start calling convents, or dungeons…LOL!!!

    8. Jeeze Grumpy, I have about a million things to say, 1) I was on the edge of my seat with the ride over to the hotel, I have had children in a spot before and know that kind of terror. With all the things in my head right now the only way to sum it up shortly is to say you have got to be a teriffic parent and it is very heart warming to here other parents take charge of their children when the occassion arises instead of just letting the children rule their world like so many parents do. It makes other parents jobs much harder. Thank you for the story. Md

    9. Have you thought of entering into the school system. Not as a teacher but as someone who tells them the way that it should be. Parents are the ones that are ultimately responsible for their childn not the teachers and definitely not the schools. The education system can only do so much. Sorry for the soap box vent. I really love this story. As for Linbooks I will agree with you on her stories. I have read all three of them and can not seem to get enough of them. So far my favorite is still Chiarosuro. I love all of your stories too, so keep writing them, please.

    10. Great chapter G! Darren is very lucky that Tina was there. I wouldn’t have given a second thought to turning him over with the party crowd that he is most definitely part of. I’m glad Angelica wasn’t assaulted, but now she is going to have to face the wrath of her mothers. They need to remember that she did do the right thing in calling them. She did put her self in that predicament, but at least she did the right thing in the end by calling her moms. Excellent chapter G-spot!

    11. Justice has been served! Bette & Tina handled both situations wonderfully. Darren & Tracy are got what they deserve. I’m sure Angie will be getting hers as well. B&T are great parents. LMAO at Bette’s last statement “Unfortunately for Angelica she’ll have so much parental attention she’s going to drown in it.”

    12. Great! DEfinitly Tina is so smart and know how handle the situation, Bette and Angelica are so lucky to have her in theirs life. I have gto said that Bette had a excellent behavior too it just show us how much she loves her family. Thanks for this great great post. Take care.

    13. Hey G-Meister, That was awesome. Amongst all of the chaos, it was brilliant to see Bette let loose on Darren and then Tina restrain her and get Darren’s parents involved. Angelica is terrified but grateful her parent came to the rescue. Time will tell what her punishment will be. Knowing Bette and Tina, I am sure the it will fit the crime. Losing your parent’s respect and seeing their disappoint is one of the worst feelings in the world. Sweet to see how Angelica ran to Kirsten in the dinner. Amazing to see how the whole gang ruch to Bette and Tina’s aid when asked. True family love here. Again, it is your talent that keeps this tale together and terrically entertaining. More please, Your Loyal Fan.

    14. Let her recover from the ordeal, then I see BIG MAJOR Punishment, see this is exactly what I’m afraid for, these young teens these days, seem to not have a care in the world anymore, ok, it’s sad really.

    15. Thank you for continuing this story, even though it is sometimes emotionally difficult for you. The parent/child bond, especially the mother/daughter bond is very powerful and complex. You portray it so well. Thanks for the update.

    16. Well, well I remember those days. Lying to your parents and some of your friends to act as though your grown enough to do what you think is best for you. You know you’ve really cocked things up when your parents tell you”I don’t love you any less, I’m just really disappointed in you.” That hurts worse than any ass whupping I’ve ever received, seriously. My generation had it’s fair share of carelessness but kids now-a-days really have no second thoughts about the consequences of their actions. Its scary to think what kids will be like when/if I decide to have any, that thought alone scares the shit outta me. Really this story makes me sad when I think about Megan and cringe when I see the comparisons between me and Angelica. I know karma is gonna come back and bite me in the ass, hell it did with my mom. A truly thought provoking chapter as always. Please Post Soon. PEACE.

    17. Great update Gumby! Wonderful. Darren deserves to have gone to the station but i guess B&T handled the situation very well. Now let’s see what becomes of Angie. We wont mind if this story continues forever :-)

    18. Heyy, well.. that was awesome. Bette’s self control was amazing. And Tina’s resolve was pretty damn lenient. But it was the right thing to do and I’m glad the red haze didn’t phase Tina from what she’d have liked had Angelica been in that trouble. Thanks for posting this, ADx

    19. Great chapter Gumby. I think angelica is going to discover a new level of fear when she realizes that she is Bette and Tina’s next target for attitude adjustment. I so would not want to be her!! but we all know she had it coming so take it like the woman you were prematurely trying to be dear Angel!! LOL…PPS

    20. Gumby this was fantastic. You have done a superb job with this story and especially with all the emotions going from one topic to another and all of them with a very high note of anguish, trial and tribulations. You hve mastered the art of writing with emotion and not letting that emotion get the better of the characters. You really our girls and you write them so beautifully with much love and grace, given the trying circumstances. You deserve all the praise and accolades that a writer can have. Did you mention that you were writing a book, if not, you should be. Thanks for such a wonderful story. You’re simply AWESOME!!!! PPS

    21. Angie’s old enough to know better and still too young to care. I remember one time my cousin got hauled in for god knows what and he opted to stay the night in jail rather than go home. His dad would’ve probably kicked his ass. lol I’m just glad that out of the few stunts I pulled at that age, none of them were anything like this. I may not have lived to leave this comment.

    22. Oh my. Once everyone calms down, Angie’s in for it, isn’t she? Darren got off light, but it’s better his parents than the Wrath of Mama B. Tracy… just desserts. Great update, Gumby, loved it. More soon, even though it means the story will end. Thanks

    23. What an amazing chapter. I have no idea what I would do if I was in B&T’s place. I might have actually killed the poor boy but you have the best solution, his parents seem like the type that will handle the situation and not just give him a free ride. It was wonderful how the family pulled together and came to Angelica’s rescue she really does have good friends. Thanks for all the emotions this churned up in you but it is so well written I just want to keep reading. Thanks for sharing your talent

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