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Those Adoring Eyes – One Year On
“You know this is getting to be another sort of anniversary…”
Tina laughed, “I take you mean that, on this day last year we did the same as we just did?”
“Oh yes…, and it was just as delicious as it was then…, and every time we do…”
“I love you Porter…”
“Not as much as I love you Kennard…”
“There is a difference though…” Tina smiled, “a big difference…”
“You mean the patter of two tiny feet?”
“Yes, do you remember when she came into the room last year and climbed onto the bed with her favourite teddy?”
“I do, the very same one that she still carries around under her arm now.”
"But what about our newest ones, do you think it’ll be okay to take them today?"
"Of course, it’s our family day now Bette and today will be the first of many…”
“I hope you only mean many days and not kids…”
“I think we have our family now babe…”
“Yeah me too…, talking of which…”
I leaned across, kissed her delicate lips and looked deeply into those adoring eyes, sometimes there were no words needed for these moments that we shared. I just had to look into her eyes and I could feel my heart swell, I would also feel it pound in my chest and then my throat would constrict, so it was a good job that we needed no words, because I’m positive that I wouldn’t be able to utter a word.
“Are you okay?” she asked me.
I nodded and felt my eyes well, I swallowed the lump in my throat, I needed to rest my forehead on her bare shoulder. I felt her arm pull me closer to her and I felt her kiss the side of my head.
“It’s okay babe…” she whispered to me.
I nodded into her shoulder, I knew it was okay, but that didn’t mean that my emotions wouldn’t surface at some point.
It was still his birthday, after all.
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A beautiful story, I’m so happy that you will give us this sequel. You’re so great in describing the emotions of B&T, it’s so real that you will laugh and cry with them when you’re reading this story.Looking forward for more.
Wasn.t surprise that they had three children. Love this wonderful story. the emotions runs so deep. The love is there, but sometimes the past come back to bite you. The gang is there to help. This story could go on forever.The children going to school. dating,marriage grandchildren. til death do us part. Love this thanks for posting. didn’t get misty eyes but once. thanks
« J’étais arrivé à ce point d’émotion où se rencontrent les sensations célestes données par les Beaux Arts et les sentiments passionnés. En sortant de Santa Croce, j’avais un battement de cÅ”ur, la vie était épuisée chez moi, je marchais avec la crainte de tomber. » Gotta love Stendhal !! Oh, sorry, Jo, I have no idea why I felt like writing this actually, it’s just that with the beginning of this amazing chapter you actually took me back to one of my favorite episodes in the show ” Longing”. And I want to thank you for that btw. I just really love Bette and Peggy’s first meeting. In fact, I kinda had the feeling that Bette viewed Peggy as a mother figure then. Anyway, I hope you realize, Lady Jobadge, that now that you have so wonderfully updated this story, you must continue with it. There is no way you’re gonna be able to get away with this. On the other hand, now that these two seem to finally have found a sense of peace about their lives, I would understand it if you felt like you had achieved telling the story you had in mind. But it doesn’t change the fact that you’d better update “Lady Slayer” too as soon as you can for we need our Jobadge fix, and believe me, you don’t want a bunch of lunatics to track you down through the streets of London. LOL ! You didn’t think we had forgotten about that other “formidable” story of yours, now did you ? LOL ! Thank you so much for updating this story, Jo. It’s truly beautiful.
Love each of your stories Jo – they make me laugh,cry and feel horny all at the same time and, yes, I always imagine Porter wrapped around that bloody pole when I hear “Cream!” Went to see Prince 2 weeks ago and he didn’t play that track but it was a fab show including my 70s theme song “Play That Funky Music White Boy (Grrrl”) as I still play Parliament, Slave and Graham Central Station on a daily basis and I am ridiculously white! Enjoy the show!
Your descriptions are so vivid, I feel as if I’m right there living it. Such an amazing story. Thanks for continuing with a sequel.
beautiful, just beautiful. Have a nice time in London.
Amazingly beautiful, Jo. Just beautiful.
Absolutely beautiful. Your writing never ceases to amaze me; your descriptions are so vivid that I feel a part of the story. I’m so happy you’re continuing this one, but hope to also see Lady Slayer…please! Enjoy Prince.
u made me cry!!!
Aww. I loved it. So beautiful. Sweet. Happiness even on a day of sadness.
Ok, you did it again…yes, you made me cry, but I loved every minute of this story. You’ve done it again…can’t wait for the next post! :)
Wonderful story as always..such a sweet and loving storyline for our girls
That was just lovely, pps.
Wow Jo your writing is absolutely awesome. You show Bette’s emotions so well and I love how she and T are both so loving of one another. I love how you write them all, but especially Bette…as I read this I feel like I’m in her skin…feeling everything just as you have written it. It’s so thoughtful that Kit, Alice and Shane came to take the children for the day. I thoroughly enjoyed this and I can’t wait to read the next installment. Thanks JB!
Jo, as I have said before, you have written two of my favourite stories! One that made me cry with laughter: Bette wanting her teeth back after giving Tina a good gumming & this one. Even reading it again (not for the second time!) it is still so good. I was nervous when you said you had written a continuation – how can you add to perfection, would you add trauma! I should have had more faith! Keep on doing what you do, be it funny, passionate or emotional. PPS
hon, this story stepped right in where the other left off done to the smallest details. Its terrific!
That was beautiful!
Amazing as always….such deep emotions and they certainly jump out at ya from the screen. Loved it!
This is a wonderful story so glad you have done a sequel. I look forward to the next chapter.
Goody, we’re on to the new ones. Good thing they can work from home, I suspect twins will keep them busy. Is Angie going to be OK with the shift in focus?
This is such a beautiful story, I’m glad you have decided to update it. I loce your open and honest Bette and Tina :)
A truly tender story…you’ve captured the explicit depth of emotion so beautifully. I’m really looking forward to the continuation of this!
Wonderful!
Awwwww, I just love the way B&T are together. So loving, just the way it should be. You here that IC! Love the twins, nice surprise. PPS!!
That was beautifully written Jo! Thanks. And twins? wow! :-) Looking forward to more …
Hi Jo, Words can’t really convey the joy and happiness I am feeling right now know you are back and that you are continuing this awespme adventure. The love between Bette and Tina has only strengthened in the intervening year. Their family is complete and they are looking back fondly on the past, remembering and acknowledging the lost of their son and yet, able to move forward together. The lines of communication are turly open and the lessons have been learned. I hope that their day together will be full of bliss and ecstacy. Awaiting your next post with baited breathe. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
Jo–It is great to see you return to such a wonderful story! You capture all their emotions with such detail, such depth.
What an incredible sequel…you portray their emotions so realistically. Thank you for sharing this with us.
How can you not love this story. You have to love Kit and the gang for being able to know, and understand Bette and Tina. I also think its important that they both admit that they have not forgotten all that they have gone through to get where they are, twins, that had to be a surprise. Looking forward to more, especially as teh children grow.
Hi Jo. I’ve read this story so many times. As you know it’s a favorite of mine and it made me so very happy to see that you decided to make a sequel. And wow… you continue where you left off with such tenderness and beautiful writing. Just great Jo. Thanks.
It is endearing to see the family showing support to B&T and giving them the time they need to be alone and remember. I have loved this story since the first time I read it about a year ago and am happy you decided to finish it. I have started reading the rest of your work starting with ITWCSTROTET,I’m sure I will enjoy it as much as your more recent work pps.