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    All you need is love – chapter 45

    Story written on August 28, 2007 by allyemmerson.
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    Writing talk – Sarah confronts her ex son in law and has a surprise for Bette.

    ALL YOU NEED IS LOVE – Chapter 45

     

    Bette looked at the screen and read back what she had written. Her book was finished and at the printers – which was why she had agreed to expand the original 10,000 short story to a three episode series. She had a new book to start soon but this was going to be relaxing and allow her to try something new. She had allowed Helena to cajole her into a longer story and she had lots of ideas.

     

     

    She had also given in to Helena because she had stuck to her word and asked Tina to write a short story as well. Tina had accepted and was delighted at the prestige of the magazine and the money as well.

     

     

    Tina was going to write a crime story giving her the chance to try out a new character she had been working on. Bette’s story was going to be lighter – Tina and Helena had talked her into writing a love story.

     

    Bette was thrilled at how the first draft was going so far and she was looking forward to writing the next part of the story. For once Bette and Tina were alone – Tina had taken the plunge and employed a friend of Lara’s as her daughter’s nanny for the period of the summer holidays. So the kids were out at leisure centre with Lara and Amy leaving Bette and Tina to work on the stories.

     

    “Hi “

     

    Bette glanced up to see Tina carrying her laptop and two ice cream cones.

     

    “Thought you might need a treat – and — well the house is empty without them “

     

    “I know – do you want to write here with me?”

     

    “Hoped you would say that “

     

    Tina sat at the picnic table facing Bette and moved forward to kiss her before handing her an ice cream. Bette accepted the ice cream and took a bite of it – she grinned – that was nice.

    “How’s the story going?” Bette asked as Tina set up her lap top

     

    “Really good – and Helena’s invited me to dinner next week – do you think it’s to make me an offer?”

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    1. Love Tina’s Mom. But Bette seems to be really put off by all the future talk with her.. so I’m a little nervous she will wig out and hurt Tina. Bette did say she wanted to carry her kids but didn’t.. maybe she could carry one for them together.

    2. Damn, I like Tina’s folks, but Sarah is really applying the pressure. I never considered that Tina and Bette would want to have a child together and really, it wouldn’t matter to me one way or the other in this story. Hopefully, if they do decide to go there, it won’t be because they want a do-over since Tina had a hard time after Hannah and Bette after Zak. As for Ollie, just LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! He just sucks and not in a good way for Paul. Dollars to doughnuts Paul is the one paying for most if not all of that trip to Aruba. Oh and one more thing. I cracked up REALLY hard over the three-handed lover. LOL! Ally, you have no idea how many times I’ve read a love/sex scene and said to myself, “WTF? How? Her panties are already off and she’s taking them off AGAIN?!” It’s called proofreading, people. Details do count and mistakes can totally kill the mood.

    3. Dearest Ally, don’t ever stop writing the way that you do, because your writing makes my day worth while. Post again soon and take it easy working.I send my love.

    6. 6 kids are already a handful. Imagine 7! Plus the ex. Aaaaahhhh!!!! I can’t wait to see how they juggle all the kids when they’re under one roof! PPS

    7. Mom is really pushing the marriage thing isn’t she. Great way to wind old Ollie up though. Let’s hope he doesn’t go nuts and do something stupid again, cause he will have the whole family up his a** this time. PPS

    11. That was the most awesome chapter Ally! You had me laughing so hard that it brought tears to my eyes! The three handed lover thing was so fucking funny! And I am so glad that Sarah had that special talk with Ollie…he deserves that and so much more. How could he say he loves Tina and in the same breath say she’s not in the same league as Bette? What an ass! When Sarah mentioned Paul being a sperm donor for Bette and Tina I almost fell out of my chair laughing so hard! “-he seems a nice charming young man!” LOL!!!! I don’t think Bette’s against the idea of children with Tina, but Sarah kind or put her on the spot…AGAIN! Bette is experiencing the full-on Mother-In-Law treatment without even being married. Sarah needs to back off a little, but don’t tell her I said that! This chapter was fabulous Ally! Thank you so much for the laughter and the love.

    18. Oily is a superb example of a shithead. He really needs to find a better way to take Bette’s measure than with his own standards. Damn, Sarah not only has them married but having babies, too. Not sure that Tina should do it again if her postpartum depression was so severe. Is Bette ready to supply the womb?

    21. Wow! Sarah doesn’t beat around the bush does she? She gave Ollie a good ass kicking. Constipated goldfish & loathsome reptile….LMAO. You’re too funny! Love it. PPS!!

    23. Hey Ally, Good to see Bette and Tina enjoying the routine of writing together even if Bette’s story did make them laugh eventually. Did you add some of your own experiences writing there? It really felt that it was from the heart. Then Sarah’s discussion was great; lovedf the way she got right to the point and showed up Ollie for the sorry human being he can be. Amazing that even now he thinks that Bette is too good for Tina and that Tina would run back to him if things didn’t work out with Bette. Shame that he is so fixated on Tina. He needs to go home to Paul and get royally fucked. Bette’s eavesdropping was choice as she called Sarah out on a few of the stretches of truth. Yes, I do hope Bette and Tina marry. They but need to find their feet and comfort zone in this relationship first as their each have three kids who need to be considered. I think that they have each been through so much that they just need to relax and enjoy their new romantic love affair. As for a child together: yes, it would be the consummation of their love but is it needed. Surely the event of their marriage and committment to one another could provide this union. It is a matter for Bette and Tina to discuss when the time is right and not at the prompting of Tina’s mom. Ally, as ever, you have crafted a masterclass for some many of the authors on this sight. You make the most simple of conversations and scenes astounding. They pull n the reader every time. Thank you for this afternoon delight. Your Loyal Fan.

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