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Those Adoring Eyes – One year on – Part 2
“T…”
“Mmmm…”
I smiled at her reply, I felt how her body had become heavier as the moments passed and she had relaxed into me while we sat against the rock.
“How does it make you feel being here?”
I felt her sigh in my arms, I think I guess that she would also be feeling a range of emotions, but I never failed to remember that it was always the ‘we’ lost our son, not just me.
“I feel so many different things to be honest Bette…”
“Yeah me too…”
“How is it possible to feel so happy and content with our life, and yet have a wave of sadness that runs through it too?”
“Because of our experience babe…, we’ve come a long way to get where we are, and we have an amazing family around us, but we didn’t get to meet the one that sealed our love for one another…”
“What do you think would have happened to us if…, you know, we hadn’t lost him…” she wondered aloud.
Fuck, that million dollar question.
I let my head drop back onto the rock behind me as my mind swirled with the possibilities, and some of them were too big and too deep to even contemplate.
“You know, I…, I’m not sure…”
“Do you think our life would have been very different?”
“Actually, yeah I do…”
The possibilities were endless and the questions rushed through my mind…, Candace, Helena, Henry…, the people that invaded our life, not intentionally, but they had become part of our past at a seeming consequence of the happenings of that day.
That big ‘What if…’ was always like the domino effect, when one fell…
It was so difficult to comprehend, did we have any right to question the way fate guided the path of our lives, maybe not, but wasn’t it human nature to question it anyway?
And for us, Tina and I, it would begin with that one huge question of ‘why was the life of our son cut so short that we didn’t even to get the opportunity to hold him in our arms…’
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WOW, just amazing:)
So perfect! God, I love those two and you do an incredible job of expressing their thoughts and feelings. Beautiful!
sweeeeeeetttttttttttt………….
Glad you’re back……what a lovely story!!!! so tender… :)
Wow. That was really moving. Loved it. Love how happy they are now.. but how aware that it always wasn’t that way.
What can I say? Words wouldn’t do this story justice.
Exceptional chapter Jo. Love this story. Thanks for writing.
Beautiful chapter, Jo!
Wonderful! This story is such a treat to read. Looking forward to Lady Slayer. Thanks Jo.
so sweet….
Jo….You write w/such passion and tenderness. I just wish that this chapter had appeared on TLW. It would have made a phenomenal episode. PPS.
Your awesome Jo. Damn that was beautiful. I so love those two. Though its hard enough to make love on a blanket at the beach let alone the water. I’m thinking sand where it should not be, but hey if it was me with either Bette or Tina it wouldn’t have stopped me.
Ahhhh so wonderful…you are amazing mate xx
Awesome JB. I love your stories. You open up their hearts and souls and openly expose them so we can all feel their love. Is your poet RC? I have one of her collections and I love it. Whomever it is, your story and her poetry blend together beautifully. Thank you for posting. More please!
beautiful mate, you are awesome and you capture the love between these two women with such utter accuracy and intensity.
Mmmmmm. What more can I say Jo.
Hello Jo, Words do fail me after reading your chapters. They are so full of beauty that overwhelms and pleases me. I feel like I am in a haze of emotions. Each one demanding time yet content to mix together. There is a sense of coming to terms with the loss of their son and the fallout that ensued. There is a sense serenity about Bette that is appealing. She seems to have grown so much over the intervening years and is now open to sharing herself innermost thought, wishes and desires with Tina. Tina is the rock that Bette has anchored herself to. Their love is the chain that ensures they are constantly connected. Angelica, Katie and Jayden are the bolts that hold the chain in place. I loved the tenderness between Bette and Tina during their “From Here to Eternity” moment. I could picture the waves gentle lapping their bodies as their orgasms exploded. True romance is weaved into every scene and conversation between the gals. I just adore your wonderful writing. Thank you for giving me the love between Bette and Tina that Season one hinted at then the rest destroyed. Much gratitude and appreciation, Your Loyal Fan.
I just love this story, new beginings, leaving the pain and guilt of the past behind. Sometimes love is enough. These two women deserve a long and happy life together. Can’t wait to read the next chapter.
OMG!!!!WOW!!!! The way you write is so wonderful and loving. Thanks you PPS
Yup.
Well, well, well,… I’m afraid I don’t have anyting smart to say here ( not that it’s unusual for me ) except this was beautiful… But I guess you had figured that much, huh ? ( lol ! ). Thank you so much for sharing your wonderful talent with us, Jo. I think I can safely speak for everyone here when I say we truly appreciate this. That being said, don’t forget to update “Lady slayer” as soon as you can, huh ? LOL !
Wow! Just wow! Your writing just continues to amaze me! Thanks Jo!
I’m with azmama… We need Jo as a permanent writer on the The L Word staff. The ratings would go through the roof. And I would be jumping for joy cause every episode would be pure heaven… much like this chapter. Thanks Jo!
Damn that was beautiful and sweet, love it. Please post more, thanks!
I have been one of your silent readers until now. WOW what a post. You can’t get any sweeter.