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Summer Vacation. Chapter 31
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Previously
“Lottie?” yelled Kenny, “Lottie?” He ran in panting, “Lottie, you’d better come quick, it’s Angie, she’s fallen off the half-pipe …”
Lottie felt that pit of dread where your stomach lurches up into your mouth, turning circles and tying in a big fat knot before one great gulp swallows it down again. Angie’s cries could be heard coming thick and fast through the still air, they partly frightened and partly reassured her, for at least she was crying.
They ran around, finding Angie in a crumpled mess by the side of the tallest edge of the half-pipe, covered in scratches and with a bloody lip but otherwise ok. She cradled her right arm in her lap, tears streaming down her face,
“It’s her arm,” said Shane, crouching beside her, “I think it’s broken …”
Summer Vacation – Chapter Thirty One.
“Angelica Kennard-Porter,” said Lottie clearly to the woman behind the Emergency Room desk, “Angelica, A-n-g-e-l-i-c-a …”
“Insurance?” the woman asked,
“I don’t have the details,” Lottie replied, getting exasperated, “Look, can she just get seen, she has insurance …”
She went back to typing details into the computer, Lottie turned back to Angie, sitting behind her in the waiting room in between Stacie and Shane, her tears had subsided but her wrist was red and swollen and her fingers the size of sausages,
“Where the hell’s Bette?” said Lottie quietly, a rhetorical question directed mostly at Shane. Stacie was doing her best to make Angie feel better, telling her that her last flip on the half-pipe had been ‘awesome’. She pulled out her phone for like the tenth time and dialled Bette’s cell phone.
The second she gave up and hung up it rang shrilly in her hand,
“You can’t have that on in here …” scolded the woman from behind the desk,
“I’ll be right back,” muttered Lottie, stepping outside to take it, “Hey Al,”
Alice sat with her feet up on Helena’s expensive glass coffee table, earning her more than a disdainful glance. Helena meanwhile was dialling madly, trying in vain to track down one or the other of Angie’s misplaced parents,
“You get them?” Alice asked, stuffing a cracker carelessly into her mouth,
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I CAN believe you made it to 31 chapters. This story is an excellent read! I love how you have locked together Bette and Lottie’s connection here. Kit still has some demons that come out to play…I hope that she is able to heal in time, and I’m sure all of her family will be there to support her through it. Glad Angie’s going to be ok. You write them all so brilliantly. Thanks for the excellent post Sofa. Can’t wait for chapter 32!
Glad B&T didn’t get upset with Lottie. Have kids, have accidents. My son has chipped his teeth skateboarding, busted his head on someone’s teeth playing basketball and banged himself up just jumping down steps in the house. At some point you accept that kids get banged up unless you put them in a protective bubble. Kit needs to come to term with her guilt over her past and poor mothering skills. The past is just that, the past. It doesn’t lessen how she felt about David. She is a different person and now that she has Che, she can make up for her mistakes, but still let Che be a kid. Guess Lottie really knows what being part of a family is really like after this incident. Thanks for the update.
You made my night! I feel spoiled with the consecutive posts! I think it’s only a mtter of time before Lottie’s dad comes down there and then it will be “interesting” with Bette! Post soon!
I’m glad Bette was gently with Lottie she is gradually finding out what it’s like to have a loving family to depend on.
It keeps getting better and better. Helena throwing rocks at the window was classic. What will Lottie have to do to pay Alice back? I’m sure it will be quite interesting. I love the way you are developing the Bette/Lottie story line its so sweet. I can’t wait for the next one. PPS
That was so well done!!!!!! Tears in my eyes for Kit; it is hard to live thinking ‘if only’ but as u said ‘stuff happens’ and we can’t protect everyone we love from life. It’s dangerous. PPS
Lottie is looking for what all of us want from someone whether it is our lover/wife or our parents and that is unconditional love. Neither Bette or Lottie received that while growing up. Bette really only received that with Tina and now she shows that towards Angie, Tina and all those around her that she calls her family. Lottie has just now begun to feel that love and it is coming from Bette and the others. That is what family is all about.
awwww, poor kit. i like the way you’ve handled her worries…i think its ultra realistic and honest. i also like what’s developing between helena and alice…and as i always say, plot, pacing, dialogue, all really wonderful…i can picture the worlds you write, and thats realy really cool for a writer to be able to give us that. and yeah, the themes running throughout are…whats the word…poignant? layered? uhhh…well i really connect with them. the work that lottie does to create family, especially in the times we live in, really really resonates. i’d love to see more of her, and more of the rest, and more of a happy and healthy functionining tibette (gasp, i did say that, didn’t i!) well you write them wonderfully babe, so thats why i like them;)
hmmm…just re-read this…are you going to make lottie hook it up with tom? is jo ever going to stop clubbing and come hang out with lotti? i want you to write the next chapter…forget work tomorrow, this is more important! *taps fingers impatiently on keyboard* ok sweets, i’ll wait…but i won’t be patient about it…hehe
Sofa, I am so locked in to your stories. I’ve even re-read a few over the last few weeks, they are just that good. It allows the escape, fantasy, pride, etc that I think the ladies who created the L-Word have strived for but just can’t seem to deliver. But you’ve got it ten times over, and over, and over…LOL. You spoil us. Here’s hoping you continue to do so!! And soon!
Good chapter. Poor Kit and glad Angie are ok, like that way Bette with Lottie!
Welp, I got that completely wrong… Auntie Kit’s “cooler head” went AWOL. But it’s understandable. Good on Bette for being sensible. And yay for her and Lottie bonding! Now then: Al & Hels… You’ve gone there! Ace! Muchas gracias for the update, sofa. Cheers!
I’m surprised at your lack of influence with Kit, but I’m not so sure I want her advice right now. I think she needs advice and comforting more than Angie or any of them at the moment.