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You (Part the Forty-Eighth)
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Dana awoke the next morning to the feeling of Alice’s hands roaming over her skin in a detailed exploration. She was still snoring, though, which Dana found impossibly cute. She started giggling, and without meaning for it to happen, woke Alice up in the process. A little confused, Alice shook her head and realized where her hands were. She considered stopping, but Dana felt too good for her to allow that to happen. Kissing Dana’s shoulder gently to let her know she was awake and aware of what she was doing, Alice let her hands continue their journey south, brushing over her breast and scars and dancing over her abs. Dana sighed and leaned back into her, grasping Alice’s hand in hers and kissing it before letting it go. As Alice’s hand made its way into her wetness, Dana reached back and lightly brushed Alice’s clit.
She gasped when Alice entered her, but didn’t stop her own movements. Alice was gentle, pulling out every so often to stroke Dana’s clit. She went slowly, kissing Dana’s neck as she did. Before too long, Dana was moaning her name repetitively and arching back into her. It took her a little while to recover, and as soon as she had she realized that Alice had removed her hand from its mission to reciprocate and had turned her around so they were facing each other. Alice kissed her softly, shaking her head as Dana’s hand tried to make its way back to where it had been.
“No, sweetie, it’s okay,” Alice whispered. “I wanted to love you, that’s all.”
“But…it’s not like I mind, Al,” Dana protested.
“I know, baby…but I’m okay. Really. I need to get over to the hospital anyway, I’ve got another appointment before too long. And you’ve got one at ten, then lunch with Billie Jean in a few hours. After that we’re watching Angelica, so it’s no big deal, okay? I’ll take a rain check, honey,” Alice whispered, kissing her again.
“Okay,” Dana said, sighing in resignation. “Hey, do you wanna have dinner again tonight? Last night was a little, uh…not relaxing. I feel bad about it.”
“Awww, Dane, there’s no reason you should feel that way. It was me, not you, okay? I’m sorry for how I acted,” Alice said dejectedly. When she thought back on the way she’d acted toward Dana the previous night, she couldn’t help feeling like shit.
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duuuude. you know, i really don’t think you have any business saying my story blows yours out of the water because every chapter of this was better than the last and that’s saying something. I hope my story has even half of the wit and charm and loveliness of yours. I think your Alice and Dana have an incomparably well-written relationship and that’s all you. My heart literally flutters sometimes when I read this story. Love it!
At the risk of repeating myself… Another great chapter! I love how you write Danish and how honest their words and actions are to their characters. It is so cool to be able to watch them evolve and grow together. I’m a little pissed that Alice’s therapist let her leave so upset. It does kinda bring back memories of earlier in your story when Dana was having so much anger during her chemo. On a happier note…the NC-17 ain’t bad, either! HOT!! And I always love when Harrison shows up. I’m not worried about Tasha going after Alice, but, wouldn’t be surprised if JealousDana rears her head. Don’t sweat the summary — I would read anything you wrote if it only said “Danish”. Thanks!!
Loved this! Sorry I didn’t comment sooner. I love how Dana was like , Oh F*ck No and F*ck that, I literally said out loud ‘Go get your girl Dana’ I love thier teamwork, and how they compliment each other so well! You are reaching the Golden Chapter, two more! Nice Job! Keep Up The Great Work!!!
buddy that was excellent as always. just love it love it love it. glad u enjoyed the UHH pics i sent u–its hard to describe her as anything other than hot. and i didnt really mind the dress!
I just discovered “You” a couple of weeks ago and have since read the whole thing. I absolutely love it. I was so pissed off and heartbroken when Dana died on the show. Hell, I’m still pissed. Your story is so in tune with both of these beautiful characters. It’s so easy to believe that the two of them would have taken this path if IC hadn’t made the biggest mistake ever by killing Dana. It’s a genuinely beautiful story. Thank you for that.
wow. just wow. This was some heavy stuff, that was a long time due I guess.You nailed it very realistic once again. And I like the changed and stronger and more determined Dana in your story, who did everything to help Alice and get her out of that hotel, instead of waiting. Fantastic chapter, very powerful.Can’t wait for the next one.
I have to say that I really like Dana’s transformation and being more take charge. Their communication keeps getting better and better with each chapter. Are they going to be done checking into hotels individually now? lol I think the best therapy was at the end of the chapter. Okay yes I am a perv, sorry!
“You’re not hurting me by needing me”, “I wouldn’t be here if you hadn’t brought me back”, “You have to be able to tell me. That’s where we hurt each other before, we just stopped talking.” MT, I was so touched and you had me in tears. What a brilliant chapter it is! I am so thrilled to see a very changed Dana who became more vocal and determined to work things out. This made life so much easy for the both of them. Now why couldn’t IC have your wisdom and imagination. Dana would still be here with Alice and the gang. I also like how Helena & Shane supported them. This is the kind of friendship that we all wish we have. Oh, let Alice be warned about Tasha. I still suspect something would be up soon. MT, you are awesome and I look forward to every single chapter of this story. You got me hooked since day one. p.s. I was about to go to bed an hour ago, and I sure am glad that I didn’t. These late night posts are giving me raccoon eyes but I really am not complaining. Once again, thank you so very much for writing this beautiful story.
that was great I love it please post soon
ooohh Tasha, no!NO! I mean I like her and all but Al, NNOooo!!! hihi I LOVE “YOU”my friends are beginning to question why i’m always in front of my computer when all our projects have been done already, but hey, “YOU” makes me smile. and the fanfics are slowly becoming an addiction, just as you mentioned that they’re addicting to write. please post again soon. xox
Wow, that was a really fantastic chapter. I felt so bad for Dana when Alice left but was so glad that they worked it out. Thanks for a brilliant chapter
I can’t believe I didn’t comment your last updates! Damn, if I were more fluent in English I’d write a novel thanking you for this story! (Well, that was over-the-top, but I love it anyway!)And I love that you turned the tables in this relationship! Dana taking care of Alice is just sooo cute… (I also wanted to say thank you for that masterpiece of yours, Valediction. It’s worthy of homenage MT! I hope you like my litlle one… ;-) thank gods or whoever you’re a Danish writer! (this one I mean it!)